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Creativeness flows in my...I dunno but it's coming from somewhere - SpoonMan999 - 12-02-2003
Ok so check it out...I write poetry...who woulda thought? I just put some new stuff on poetry.com so people can see...hmmm...so go there...and look up Matt Seals...you may laugh...you may cry...you may shoot me...I leave it up to you...the adoring public...
Creativeness flows in my...I dunno but it's coming from somewhere - Pamela - 12-04-2003
Why dont you just post some of it here?
Creativeness flows in my...I dunno but it's coming from somewhere - SpoonMan999 - 12-05-2003
But then I have to type it here...
The Dane
Easily, you give way to my curves and dreams,
You, the soft mat beneath my head,
MY head engulfed by the dreams you grant,
And as I lay, pressed against your soft cotton skin,
I'm lost in a fictional world of bliss,
Your touch, and your kiss,
As soft as the feathers inside you,
I lay and drift off embracing your touch,
Till morning comes, and I leave again.
Creativeness flows in my...I dunno but it's coming from somewhere - Dark Avatar - 12-05-2003
I like that, keep it up. You can check out my one ond only poem ive ever written at poetry.com Search for Coty Kaliszewski "My Life. my wraith"
Creativeness flows in my...I dunno but it's coming from somewhere - SpoonMan999 - 12-06-2003
Woot
Creativeness flows in my...I dunno but it's coming from somewhere - Pamela - 12-08-2003
That was really good...and Coty I read yours as well...very good!
Tell me what you think of this...The Heart
Shimmering on the edge of souls…the sweet kiss of love awaits
Elusive....and yet all consuming to the open heart
To capture the sweet kiss of love …my desire would abate….
Nay….for in the heat of love passion would start.
Consuming and burning…my body awaits….
Captured in this sweet dying…this fire…my heart….
So a circle of love and passion we create…
To chase our souls around in emotion…
Grasping the love….the passion and yet…
Is this just my own foolish notion?
I will follow this circle of life, and fire and love.
And allow passion to open my soul to the unknown….
Feeling the joys and pains…as if gentle touches of…..
Soft kisses in secret…filling my heart…tis done….
Now being lost…the heart taken away…. but at what cost?
I hope you like it!
Creativeness flows in my...I dunno but it's coming from somewhere - SpoonMan999 - 12-08-2003
That was really good
Here's another from me:
Saria
Sensual and sweet,
As the wind beneath your feet,
Floating across the sky,
I gaze, and catch you in my eye,
And forever I'll wait,
Your response can never be too late,
Beauty or charm,
Safety or harm,
Love can bring,
Or love can sing,
But it's what I'll show,
And that's all you'll know,
Until the feeling is right,
And we break into the night.
Creativeness flows in my...I dunno but it's coming from somewhere - Pamela - 12-09-2003
This is a bit different...as it happened in real time...saying poetry back and forth to another....what are your thoughts?((I am Fiercefairy911))
MikaruWoulf: ..I can feel my heart beating in my ears.. my mouth is dry... and I feel so alive.
fiercefairy911: I can feel the touch of the air on my face...and I listen to the sound of music as it soothes and haunts me all at once
MikaruWoulf: ^_^ A fire deep inside that I can't describe, the burn of the pain as it sinks in my brain, consumes my life that flashes at my eyes. Unknown, despair, I'm almost there. Can't you give me the reason tonight?
fiercefairy911: To reason is to lament..it aches our soul to remember..reason?...I think not...hope?...always in the fringes of our thoughts...the edge of what we can accept
MikaruWoulf: Acceptance is defeat because the end has been drawn, I'd rather just burn and crash into dawn. A new day, a new life, it's a cycle of strife, but to be is to see all around you complete. Complete the circle and it's just so bleak. Hope is lost, and the game forfeit, so lose yourself in yourself until the last hit.
fiercefairy911: To complete the circle is to go on.I struggle to see the next dawn....Hope lost...all life stife?..Why do you ask me tonight?
MikaruWoulf: Complete the circle and follow the plan, it's all the scheme laid out by the man, it hurts to break free because you are lost in the sea.. a sea of doubt and strife, yes.. but control of yourself is best. I'd rather die a million times and re-raise from the ash, than live a million days on auto-rehash. True choice, control and the happiness of pain, it just takes a step out of the circle to gain.
fiercefairy911: The circle is strong as it ensnares us daily...we can choose to break away...or stay..Control is not the asnwer to all things...we are bearers of so many things...but life can be more than a circle confining...teaching us ..helping refining...on loves warm embrace we should lean...hoping always that understanding we glean
fiercefairy911: (I am not as good as you)
MikaruWoulf: ((Sure you are.))
Creativeness flows in my...I dunno but it's coming from somewhere - Gaz_321 - 12-09-2003
hmm i guess i can rally add any creativity to this a i cant writee poetry ..
but i must say they r very good poems keep it up
Creativeness flows in my...I dunno but it's coming from somewhere - SpoonMan999 - 12-09-2003
Yeah so that was...much different...never tried that before...but I liked it.
Creativeness flows in my...I dunno but it's coming from somewhere - Pamela - 12-09-2003
Glad you liked it! ~smiles~Its kinda spur of the moment!
Creativeness flows in my...I dunno but it's coming from somewhere - SpoonMan999 - 12-10-2003
Your Own Twin
You, my dear,
Sweet and soft,
Tender and no speck of fear,
You, my sweet,
So gentle and loved,
Oh how you take me in my seat,
You, my fear,
How you grab and twist,
Forcing a slight yet joyful grin,
You, you speak,
So joyful yet dark your words will haunt,
But still I can't help but feel weak,
You, with you my heart beats,
So it seems with a lingering kiss,
Yet I sometimes feel, you are not yet complete.
Creativeness flows in my...I dunno but it's coming from somewhere - Pamela - 12-10-2003
That was very good!I liked it a lot...*romantic*~smiles~
Creativeness flows in my...I dunno but it's coming from somewhere - SpoonMan999 - 12-11-2003
I dunno I think the ending sucks
Creativeness flows in my...I dunno but it's coming from somewhere - Pamela - 12-11-2003
Not at all!!It is about life!....
To fear ...being haunted..doubts....
the completion will leave our love out
yes haunting words in your ears I speak
the beat of your heart is not weak!
Its lifes lessons we hear..
there is no reason to fear..
The kiss soothes...and restores...
and to completion it soars
The fear is unfounded
as your reality becomes grounded...
in thoughts and dreams in this life
letting go of the strife
falling away gently in thought
on emotion you are caught...
Creativeness flows in my...I dunno but it's coming from somewhere - SpoonMan999 - 12-11-2003
My Sweet
My sweet,
MY dear,
My love,
My darling,
So many names for the one I adore,
So many things yet not quite enough,
Oh, how my mind wanders,
And my heart beats,
With your sweet words,
And darling lips,
Your lovely hair,
All of you,
My darling,
My love,
My dear,
My sweet.
Creativeness flows in my...I dunno but it's coming from somewhere - Pamela - 12-11-2003
That was so very romantic...I would like to do poetry with you in real time...I bet it would be interesting!
~smiles~
Creativeness flows in my...I dunno but it's coming from somewhere - SpoonMan999 - 12-12-2003
Most of my on the spot stuff is dark...the majority of my stuff is dark...I'm gonna run out of the bright stuff pretty soon...
Creativeness flows in my...I dunno but it's coming from somewhere - Pamela - 12-13-2003
Dark is as natural and passionate as light and love...without the one...we could never understand the other!
Creativeness flows in my...I dunno but it's coming from somewhere - SpoonMan999 - 12-13-2003
Well ok...whatever....uh...if you want to...just like IM me or something...my screen name should be in my profile.