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She Was - Cr187 - 12-23-2006
She was a prodigy
the day she
was born
Her soul was free,
nobody could see,
a future forlorn
Her mother's tears,
her father's fears,
they didn't exist
Her perfect smile,
that glorious child,
would soon be missed
the day she
was born
Her soul was free,
nobody could see,
a future forlorn
Her mother's tears,
her father's fears,
they didn't exist
Her perfect smile,
that glorious child,
would soon be missed
I'm so sorry,
forgive me,
I was just too late
That child's gone,
she won't be home,
a twisted fate
Your angel's flown,
her wings have grown,
she had to die
A twisted fate,
and my heart aches,
to say good-bye
forgive me,
I was just too late
That child's gone,
she won't be home,
a twisted fate
Your angel's flown,
her wings have grown,
she had to die
A twisted fate,
and my heart aches,
to say good-bye
She was the first one lost,
a damaging cost,
to pay
I wish I could go back,
do all I should have,
that day
But she's already gone,
and I'm crying alone,
at her grave
Her eyes haunt me,
an endless sea,
to brave
a damaging cost,
to pay
I wish I could go back,
do all I should have,
that day
But she's already gone,
and I'm crying alone,
at her grave
Her eyes haunt me,
an endless sea,
to brave
I'm so sorry,
forgive me,
I was just too late
That child's gone,
she won't be home,
a twisted fate
Your angel's flown,
her wings have grown,
she had to die
A twisted fate,
and my heart aches,
to say good-bye
forgive me,
I was just too late
That child's gone,
she won't be home,
a twisted fate
Your angel's flown,
her wings have grown,
she had to die
A twisted fate,
and my heart aches,
to say good-bye
Your angel's gone,
she's not coming home,
plese don't cry
It's not your fault
that the child was lost,
it's all mine
I wish I could go back,
do all I should have,
what a twisted fate
She's already gone,
and it's all my fault,
I was just too late
she's not coming home,
plese don't cry
It's not your fault
that the child was lost,
it's all mine
I wish I could go back,
do all I should have,
what a twisted fate
She's already gone,
and it's all my fault,
I was just too late
I'm so sorry forgive me,
I was just too late
That child's gone,
she won't be home,
a twisted fate
Your angel's flown,
her wings have grown,
she had to die
A twisted fate,
and my heart aches,
to say good-bye
I was just too late
That child's gone,
she won't be home,
a twisted fate
Your angel's flown,
her wings have grown,
she had to die
A twisted fate,
and my heart aches,
to say good-bye
She was a prodigy
the day she,
was born
Her soul was free,
nobody could see,
a future forlorn
Her mother's tears,
her father's fears,
they didn't exist
Her perfect smile,
that glorious child,
would soon be missed
the day she,
was born
Her soul was free,
nobody could see,
a future forlorn
Her mother's tears,
her father's fears,
they didn't exist
Her perfect smile,
that glorious child,
would soon be missed
She was----
She Was - Pamela - 12-23-2006
Very nice.
Might I ask if this poem was a product of real life experiences?
Either way it is haunting and emotional. A very good work indeed sir,please keep posting them.
She Was - eskimo - 12-23-2006
very good i give it a 9/10 it seem's very deep.
She Was - Cr187 - 12-24-2006
Pamela Wrote:Very nice.
Might I ask if this poem was a product of real life experiences?
Either way it is haunting and emotional. A very good work indeed sir,please keep posting them.
Thanks, but no, it was just an idea I had for a song. I'm a girl by the way, lol.
eskimo Wrote:very good i give it a 9/10 it seem's very deep.
Thanks, I'm glad you thought it was deep and that it was good enough to score that high, lol.
She Was - Pamela - 12-24-2006
LOL My bad! I am sorry about that.
Quote:Cr187
Thanks, but no, it was just an idea I had for a song. I'm a girl by the way, lol
She Was - Cr187 - 12-24-2006
[quote=Pamela]LOL My bad! I am sorry about that.
it's cool, happens everyday, lol, jk jk