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Poem: My promise - Frai7ty - 07-02-2007
My Promise
I'm here for you
To help you through.
To hold you.
To be with you.
I need to.
Culture a cure.
To mend your hart, and dreams.
To show you what love truly means.
I'll never run away.
I'll be sure to stay.
And all I can do is pray.
For you to feel the same.
And If your even in pain.
I will be there to kiss it all away.
And make you feel better again.
This is my promise to you.
I wrote this a long time ago. So sorry if it's a bit newbish. Any who, hope you all enjoy.
Poem: My promise - Pamela - 07-03-2007
I did ^^ It came from the heart...you can tell.
Poem: My promise - Frai7ty - 07-07-2007
Well thx Pam. Your appreciation is welcome as always.
Poem: My promise - New-b - 07-09-2007
That poem to me is Deep.
Poem: My promise - AngelzUnit - 07-20-2007
I ain't really into poetry, and I accidentally clicked here but...wow. very nice
Poem: My promise - BrioCloud - 07-20-2007
Nice poem but, after reading so many poems that people and my friends make because their in love, these poems are just too identical.
Heres a guys info on my buddy list on aim. He says he wrote it himself.
What if i'm always there when you need me
Will you even care
What if i promise to forever care
Will you need me
What if i tell you that your my only
Will you love me
What if i really want a chance with you
Will you let me
That was just a small part, and it uses repetition throughout. lol.
I'm just saying after a hundred poems love poems need a little more twist in it for it to be anymore interesting.
Poem: My promise - Frai7ty - 07-20-2007
Well thanks Kaze, I like it when people give me honest feedback. Bare in mind tho this was the *Count on Fingers* 3rd poem. It's bound to be rough around the edges. Still tho, thanks