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Temptations (Poem) - Frai7ty - 12-15-2007
All of these temptations
Are drowning my judgment
And I cant seem to see
The other side of me
All I know is
That nothing is certain
Behind the velvet curtain
And that I need to wash this pain away
What do I do here
With all of my fear
Do I express them
or do I suppress them
I used to know these things
They used to be simple
Now I am changing
Or am I simply forsaking
The truth is always open
and I need to show them
That I know the way
And that I will stay
Temptations (Poem) - Pamela - 12-21-2007
You can really get a sense of uncertainty.Almost as if the subject wants,yet can not have.A sense of yearning and perhaps indecision on how to go about satisfying needs.
just my take on it,and well written,good job!
Temptations (Poem) - hellsing293 - 12-21-2007
As soon as a saw the title read "temptations" and Pamela's name in the last to post, I just said "oh god".
Good poem though, nicely written.
Temptations (Poem) - Frai7ty - 12-21-2007
Thanks to both of you. It was the only Poem I've written in a wile. Thought I would share it
. Glad you liked it.