The Story

[Hamel]

Okay this is how it will go i will start a story..people will continue it...and mods if i ask a post to be deleted please to so i dont want....

I love cheese..when it has nothing to do with the story..hopefully this gets popular and we get a story at the end i will combine all the threads and hopefully we will have us a story :) here it goes keep limited to a paragraph....


The Story

There was a story....


Young renshi wanted to become the most noble shinobi in town but he had to prove himself first. He couldnt just call himself the next gratest. He would endure test that were never accomplished but by one. The greatest Shinobi Alive. This will be young renshi's trainer...support manage....FATHER! To become the next shinobi the world would know renshi had to learn the 1000th element attack. The greatest attack combining all elemements of life...world...Everything in exsitense. This attack could devistate the world if not used wisley by the one...the only.........

[Pamela]

The Story

There was a story....


Young renshi wanted to become the most noble shinobi in town but he had to prove himself first. He couldnt just call himself the next gratest. He would endure test that were never accomplished but by one. The greatest Shinobi Alive. This will be young renshi's trainer...support manage....FATHER! To become the next shinobi the world would know renshi had to learn the 1000th element attack. The greatest attack combining all elemements of life...world...Everything in exsitense. This attack could devistate the world if not used wisley by the one...the only.........<!-- / message --><!-- sig -->

__________________
Maika...The Master and renown teacher...only he could train Renshi thru all the difficult task and abilities he would need to attain his goal of greatest Shinobi.
But Maiki had not taken a student in many years...his life had been violent and his power deadly in its magnitude.Seeking seclusion from the world he had built a cabin for himself and lived miles away from town.Young Renshi was determined,however and walked the 10 miles to where Maiki lived and humbly presented himself.......

[Foog]

BY THE WAY! TO ANYONE READING THIS, GO TO THE LAST POST, BECAUSE IT CONTAINS ALL OF THE POSTS PREVIOUS TO IT




The Story

There was a story....


Young renshi wanted to become the most noble shinobi in town but he had to prove himself first. He couldnt just call himself the next gratest. He would endure test that were never accomplished but by one. The greatest Shinobi Alive. This will be young renshi's trainer...support manage....FATHER! To become the next shinobi the world would know renshi had to learn the 1000th element attack. The greatest attack combining all elemements of life...world...Everything in exsitense. This attack could devistate the world if not used wisley by the one...the only.........<!-- / message --><!-- sig -->

__________________
Maika...The Master and renown teacher...only he could train Renshi thru all the difficult task and abilities he would need to attain his goal of greatest Shinobi.
But Maiki had not taken a student in many years...his life had been violent and his power deadly in its magnitude.Seeking seclusion from the world he had built a cabin for himself and lived miles away from town.Young Renshi was determined,however and walked the 10 miles to where Maiki lived and humbly presented himself.......
__________________
Maiki chuckled softly to himself as he looked up the newcomer. "What do you mean by this, young one, coming to me for help?" He growled it at the boy as the boy stood there, clearly very afraid of him. Just as he should be, he thought to himself. Not to toot my own horn, or anything, but i am one commanding guy. "Please, master, I want to be like you. Can you teach me your ways?" The boy's voice was small, and thin, and it quavered on the last word, making him seem even more feeble. "Yes, i can teach you my ways. But the real question is, can you learn them?"

[Hamel]

The Story

There was a story....


Young renshi wanted to become the most noble shinobi in town but he had to prove himself first. He couldnt just call himself the next gratest. He would endure test that were never accomplished but by one. The greatest Shinobi Alive. This will be young renshi's trainer...support manage....FATHER! To become the next shinobi the world would know renshi had to learn the 1000th element attack. The greatest attack combining all elemements of life...world...Everything in exsitense. This attack could devistate the world if not used wisley by the one...the only.........<!-- / message --><!-- sig -->

__________________
Maika...The Master and renown teacher...only he could train Renshi thru all the difficult task and abilities he would need to attain his goal of greatest Shinobi.
But Maiki had not taken a student in many years...his life had been violent and his power deadly in its magnitude.Seeking seclusion from the world he had built a cabin for himself and lived miles away from town.Young Renshi was determined,however and walked the 10 miles to where Maiki lived and humbly presented himself.......
__________________
Maiki chuckled softly to himself as he looked up the newcomer. "What do you mean by this, young one, coming to me for help?" He growled it at the boy as the boy stood there, clearly very afraid of him. Just as he should be, he thought to himself. Not to toot my own horn, or anything, but i am one commanding guy. "Please, master, I want to be like you. Can you teach me your ways?" The boy's voice was small, and thin, and it quavered on the last word, making him seem even more feeble. "Yes, i can teach you my ways. But the real question is, can you learn them?"

__________________

Renshi answers harsly with confidence. Yes! I will and i can learn from you. I will dedicate my time to being the next greatest Shinobi. Renshi though did not understand what he was in for exactly. This year of training would be the hardest thing of his life!

[Foog]

The Story

There was a story....


Young renshi wanted to become the most noble shinobi in town but he had to prove himself first. He couldnt just call himself the next gratest. He would endure test that were never accomplished but by one. The greatest Shinobi Alive. This will be young renshi's trainer...support manage....FATHER! To become the next shinobi the world would know renshi had to learn the 1000th element attack. The greatest attack combining all elemements of life...world...Everything in exsitense. This attack could devistate the world if not used wisley by the one...the only.........<!-- / message --><!-- sig -->

__________________
Maika...The Master and renown teacher...only he could train Renshi thru all the difficult task and abilities he would need to attain his goal of greatest Shinobi.
But Maiki had not taken a student in many years...his life had been violent and his power deadly in its magnitude.Seeking seclusion from the world he had built a cabin for himself and lived miles away from town.Young Renshi was determined,however and walked the 10 miles to where Maiki lived and humbly presented himself.......
__________________
Maiki chuckled softly to himself as he looked up the newcomer. "What do you mean by this, young one, coming to me for help?" He growled it at the boy as the boy stood there, clearly very afraid of him. Just as he should be, he thought to himself. Not to toot my own horn, or anything, but i am one commanding guy. "Please, master, I want to be like you. Can you teach me your ways?" The boy's voice was small, and thin, and it quavered on the last word, making him seem even more feeble. "Yes, i can teach you my ways. But the real question is, can you learn them?"

__________________

Renshi answers harsly with confidence. Yes! I will and i can learn from you. I will dedicate my time to being the next greatest Shinobi. Renshi though did not understand what he was in for exactly. This year of training would be the hardest thing of his life!
__________________
Maiki was slightly disquieted by this sudden show of confidence. He had guessed the child to be little over 15, but it seemed now that he had grown inches and years before his very eyes. "Very well. Show me what you can do, and I will know where to start my teaching. Do your worst." He spread his legs a little and slid into the comfortable fighting pose that he had come to know and love. He beckoned slowly with his index finger and prepared for the hardest fight of his life.

[Hamel]

The Story

There was a story....


Young renshi wanted to become the most noble shinobi in town but he had to prove himself first. He couldnt just call himself the next gratest. He would endure test that were never accomplished but by one. The greatest Shinobi Alive. This will be young renshi's trainer...support manage....FATHER! To become the next shinobi the world would know renshi had to learn the 1000th element attack. The greatest attack combining all elemements of life...world...Everything in exsitense. This attack could devistate the world if not used wisley by the one...the only.........<!-- / message --><!-- sig -->

__________________
Maika...The Master and renown teacher...only he could train Renshi thru all the difficult task and abilities he would need to attain his goal of greatest Shinobi.
But Maiki had not taken a student in many years...his life had been violent and his power deadly in its magnitude.Seeking seclusion from the world he had built a cabin for himself and lived miles away from town.Young Renshi was determined,however and walked the 10 miles to where Maiki lived and humbly presented himself.......
__________________
Maiki chuckled softly to himself as he looked up the newcomer. "What do you mean by this, young one, coming to me for help?" He growled it at the boy as the boy stood there, clearly very afraid of him. Just as he should be, he thought to himself. Not to toot my own horn, or anything, but i am one commanding guy. "Please, master, I want to be like you. Can you teach me your ways?" The boy's voice was small, and thin, and it quavered on the last word, making him seem even more feeble. "Yes, i can teach you my ways. But the real question is, can you learn them?"

__________________

Renshi answers harsly with confidence. Yes! I will and i can learn from you. I will dedicate my time to being the next greatest Shinobi. Renshi though did not understand what he was in for exactly. This year of training would be the hardest thing of his life!
__________________
Maiki was slightly disquieted by this sudden show of confidence. He had guessed the child to be little over 15, but it seemed now that he had grown inches and years before his very eyes. "Very well. Show me what you can do, and I will know where to start my teaching. Do your worst." He spread his legs a little and slid into the comfortable fighting pose that he had come to know and love. He beckoned slowly with his index finger and prepared for the hardest fight of his life.

__________________

With a sudden blast from renshi's palm a huge burst of energy fired directly at maiki. There was a sudden cloud of dust and no sign of maiki. From out of no where renshi is on his hands and knees with a ancient dagger at the back of his neck. "You have much to learn but that wasnt all that bad, You have potential...Here is where the training STARTS!

[Foog]

The Story

There was a story....


Young renshi wanted to become the most noble shinobi in town but he had to prove himself first. He couldnt just call himself the next gratest. He would endure test that were never accomplished but by one. The greatest Shinobi Alive. This will be young renshi's trainer...support manage....FATHER! To become the next shinobi the world would know renshi had to learn the 1000th element attack. The greatest attack combining all elemements of life...world...Everything in exsitense. This attack could devistate the world if not used wisley by the one...the only.........<!-- / message --><!-- sig -->

__________________
Maika...The Master and renown teacher...only he could train Renshi thru all the difficult task and abilities he would need to attain his goal of greatest Shinobi.
But Maiki had not taken a student in many years...his life had been violent and his power deadly in its magnitude.Seeking seclusion from the world he had built a cabin for himself and lived miles away from town.Young Renshi was determined,however and walked the 10 miles to where Maiki lived and humbly presented himself.......
__________________
Maika chuckled softly to himself as he looked up the newcomer. "What do you mean by this, young one, coming to me for help?" He growled it at the boy as the boy stood there, clearly very afraid of him. Just as he should be, he thought to himself. Not to toot my own horn, or anything, but i am one commanding guy. "Please, master, I want to be like you. Can you teach me your ways?" The boy's voice was small, and thin, and it quavered on the last word, making him seem even more feeble. "Yes, i can teach you my ways. But the real question is, can you learn them?"

__________________

Renshi answers harsly with confidence. Yes! I will and i can learn from you. I will dedicate my time to being the next greatest Shinobi. Renshi though did not understand what he was in for exactly. This year of training would be the hardest thing of his life!
__________________
Maika was slightly disquieted by this sudden show of confidence. He had guessed the child to be little over 15, but it seemed now that he had grown inches and years before his very eyes. "Very well. Show me what you can do, and I will know where to start my teaching. Do your worst." He spread his legs a little and slid into the comfortable fighting pose that he had come to know and love. He beckoned slowly with his index finger and prepared for the hardest fight of his life.

__________________

With a sudden blast from renshi's palm a huge burst of energy fired directly at maiki. There was a sudden cloud of dust and no sign of maiki. From out of no where renshi is on his hands and knees with a ancient dagger at the back of his neck. "You have much to learn but that wasnt all that bad, You have potential...Here is where the training STARTS!
______________
Renshi slowly collapsed forward onto the ground face first, and died when he hit the ground. Maika solemnly dusted his hands off, walked over to Renshi, and pulled the dagger out of his neck. Suddenly, Renshi rose from the ground and stood in front of Maika, brushing his tunic and pants off, before turning around to face Maika, who was standing awestruck, with a small bit of drool escaping from his open mouth. "Ho--wha---who---wh---HOW?!" he stuttered horribly as he stared at his newly resurrected student. Renshi winked enigmatically at Maika before once again resuming his fighting pose. "Nice try, old man, but you'll have to do better than that to silence Renshi."

[Hamel]

The Story

There was a story....


Young renshi wanted to become the most noble shinobi in town but he had to prove himself first. He couldnt just call himself the next gratest. He would endure test that were never accomplished but by one. The greatest Shinobi Alive. This will be young renshi's trainer...support manage....FATHER! To become the next shinobi the world would know renshi had to learn the 1000th element attack. The greatest attack combining all elemements of life...world...Everything in exsitense. This attack could devistate the world if not used wisley by the one...the only.........<!-- / message --><!-- sig -->

__________________
Maika...The Master and renown teacher...only he could train Renshi thru all the difficult task and abilities he would need to attain his goal of greatest Shinobi.
But Maiki had not taken a student in many years...his life had been violent and his power deadly in its magnitude.Seeking seclusion from the world he had built a cabin for himself and lived miles away from town.Young Renshi was determined,however and walked the 10 miles to where Maiki lived and humbly presented himself.......
__________________
Maiki chuckled softly to himself as he looked up the newcomer. "What do you mean by this, young one, coming to me for help?" He growled it at the boy as the boy stood there, clearly very afraid of him. Just as he should be, he thought to himself. Not to toot my own horn, or anything, but i am one commanding guy. "Please, master, I want to be like you. Can you teach me your ways?" The boy's voice was small, and thin, and it quavered on the last word, making him seem even more feeble. "Yes, i can teach you my ways. But the real question is, can you learn them?"

__________________

Renshi answers harsly with confidence. Yes! I will and i can learn from you. I will dedicate my time to being the next greatest Shinobi. Renshi though did not understand what he was in for exactly. This year of training would be the hardest thing of his life!
__________________
Maiki was slightly disquieted by this sudden show of confidence. He had guessed the child to be little over 15, but it seemed now that he had grown inches and years before his very eyes. "Very well. Show me what you can do, and I will know where to start my teaching. Do your worst." He spread his legs a little and slid into the comfortable fighting pose that he had come to know and love. He beckoned slowly with his index finger and prepared for the hardest fight of his life.

__________________

With a sudden blast from renshi's palm a huge burst of energy fired directly at maiki. There was a sudden cloud of dust and no sign of maiki. From out of no where renshi is on his hands and knees with a ancient dagger at the back of his neck. "You have much to learn but that wasnt all that bad, You have potential...Here is where the training STARTS!
______________
Renshi slowly collapsed forward onto the ground face first, and died when he hit the ground. Maiki solemnly dusted his hands off, walked over to Renshi, and pulled the dagger out of his neck. Suddenly, Renshi rose from the ground and stood in front of Maiki, brushing his tunic and pants off, before turning around to face Maiki, who was standing awestruck, with a small bit of drool escaping from his open mouth. "Ho--wha---who---wh---HOW?!" he stuttered horribly as he stared at his newly resurrected student. Renshi winked enigmatically at Maiki before once again resuming his fighting pose. "Nice try, old man, but you'll have to do better than that to silence Renshi."

______________

Renshi places his hands in a postition that Maika notices right away. "Oh no can it be! No the 1000th element attack! IT CANT BE! Trees are being uprooted the soil it turning white the sky darkens with a sea of black. Renshi is summoning all the elements needed! With a great attack renshi blast the amazing force towards Maika. The ground in front of renshi is destroyed. BUT! Where is maika. "I guess it will take more then that to silence you renshi...but you still have more to learn!" "Your behing me again!?! But how!" "Like i said you have much much more to learn!"

[Foog]

(when are we gonna stop copy-pasting the previous story?)
The Story

There was a story....


Young renshi wanted to become the most noble shinobi in town but he had to prove himself first. He couldnt just call himself the next gratest. He would endure test that were never accomplished but by one. The greatest Shinobi Alive. This will be young renshi's trainer...support manage....FATHER! To become the next shinobi the world would know renshi had to learn the 1000th element attack. The greatest attack combining all elemements of life...world...Everything in exsitense. This attack could devistate the world if not used wisley by the one...the only.........<!-- / message --><!-- sig -->

__________________
Maika...The Master and renown teacher...only he could train Renshi thru all the difficult task and abilities he would need to attain his goal of greatest Shinobi.
But Maiki had not taken a student in many years...his life had been violent and his power deadly in its magnitude.Seeking seclusion from the world he had built a cabin for himself and lived miles away from town.Young Renshi was determined,however and walked the 10 miles to where Maiki lived and humbly presented himself.......
__________________
Maiki chuckled softly to himself as he looked up the newcomer. "What do you mean by this, young one, coming to me for help?" He growled it at the boy as the boy stood there, clearly very afraid of him. Just as he should be, he thought to himself. Not to toot my own horn, or anything, but i am one commanding guy. "Please, master, I want to be like you. Can you teach me your ways?" The boy's voice was small, and thin, and it quavered on the last word, making him seem even more feeble. "Yes, i can teach you my ways. But the real question is, can you learn them?"

__________________

Renshi answers harsly with confidence. Yes! I will and i can learn from you. I will dedicate my time to being the next greatest Shinobi. Renshi though did not understand what he was in for exactly. This year of training would be the hardest thing of his life!
__________________
Maiki was slightly disquieted by this sudden show of confidence. He had guessed the child to be little over 15, but it seemed now that he had grown inches and years before his very eyes. "Very well. Show me what you can do, and I will know where to start my teaching. Do your worst." He spread his legs a little and slid into the comfortable fighting pose that he had come to know and love. He beckoned slowly with his index finger and prepared for the hardest fight of his life.

__________________

With a sudden blast from renshi's palm a huge burst of energy fired directly at maiki. There was a sudden cloud of dust and no sign of maiki. From out of no where renshi is on his hands and knees with a ancient dagger at the back of his neck. "You have much to learn but that wasnt all that bad, You have potential...Here is where the training STARTS!
______________
Renshi slowly collapsed forward onto the ground face first, and died when he hit the ground. Maiki solemnly dusted his hands off, walked over to Renshi, and pulled the dagger out of his neck. Suddenly, Renshi rose from the ground and stood in front of Maiki, brushing his tunic and pants off, before turning around to face Maiki, who was standing awestruck, with a small bit of drool escaping from his open mouth. "Ho--wha---who---wh---HOW?!" he stuttered horribly as he stared at his newly resurrected student. Renshi winked enigmatically at Maiki before once again resuming his fighting pose. "Nice try, old man, but you'll have to do better than that to silence Renshi."

______________

Renshi places his hands in a postition that Maika notices right away. "Oh no can it be! No the 1000th element attack! IT CANT BE! Trees are being uprooted the soil it turning white the sky darkens with a sea of black. Renshi is summoning all the elements needed! With a great attack renshi blast the amazing force towards Maika. The ground in front of renshi is destroyed. BUT! Where is maika. "I guess it will take more then that to silence you renshi...but you still have more to learn!" "Your behing me again!?! But how!" "Like i said you have much much more to learn!"
______________________________
Even looking back on it, Renshi didn't know how he survived. Maika came from behind and leapt onto his back, weilding a newer, brighter blade, made of demon bone. It was large, blue, and sharp. Renshi, using the instinct born of his long training and boring repetition of drills, went into a tight forward somersault, designed to throw Maika off of his back and onto the ground. It didn't work, Maika only grabbed his hair and rolled with him, all the while weilding that fearsome blade. He performed his deadly dance of survival, trying to rid himself of the plague on his back, and once he had gotten him free, he simply ran.

[Hamel]

(Keep doing what you are doing..its working great.)
The Story

There was a story....


Young renshi wanted to become the most noble shinobi in town but he had to prove himself first. He couldnt just call himself the next gratest. He would endure test that were never accomplished but by one. The greatest Shinobi Alive. This will be young renshi's trainer...support manage....FATHER! To become the next shinobi the world would know renshi had to learn the 1000th element attack. The greatest attack combining all elemements of life...world...Everything in exsitense. This attack could devistate the world if not used wisley by the one...the only.........<!-- / message --><!-- sig -->

__________________
Maika...The Master and renown teacher...only he could train Renshi thru all the difficult task and abilities he would need to attain his goal of greatest Shinobi.
But Maiki had not taken a student in many years...his life had been violent and his power deadly in its magnitude.Seeking seclusion from the world he had built a cabin for himself and lived miles away from town.Young Renshi was determined,however and walked the 10 miles to where Maiki lived and humbly presented himself.......
__________________
Maiki chuckled softly to himself as he looked up the newcomer. "What do you mean by this, young one, coming to me for help?" He growled it at the boy as the boy stood there, clearly very afraid of him. Just as he should be, he thought to himself. Not to toot my own horn, or anything, but i am one commanding guy. "Please, master, I want to be like you. Can you teach me your ways?" The boy's voice was small, and thin, and it quavered on the last word, making him seem even more feeble. "Yes, i can teach you my ways. But the real question is, can you learn them?"

__________________

Renshi answers harsly with confidence. Yes! I will and i can learn from you. I will dedicate my time to being the next greatest Shinobi. Renshi though did not understand what he was in for exactly. This year of training would be the hardest thing of his life!
__________________
Maiki was slightly disquieted by this sudden show of confidence. He had guessed the child to be little over 15, but it seemed now that he had grown inches and years before his very eyes. "Very well. Show me what you can do, and I will know where to start my teaching. Do your worst." He spread his legs a little and slid into the comfortable fighting pose that he had come to know and love. He beckoned slowly with his index finger and prepared for the hardest fight of his life.

__________________

With a sudden blast from renshi's palm a huge burst of energy fired directly at maiki. There was a sudden cloud of dust and no sign of maiki. From out of no where renshi is on his hands and knees with a ancient dagger at the back of his neck. "You have much to learn but that wasnt all that bad, You have potential...Here is where the training STARTS!
______________
Renshi slowly collapsed forward onto the ground face first, and died when he hit the ground. Maiki solemnly dusted his hands off, walked over to Renshi, and pulled the dagger out of his neck. Suddenly, Renshi rose from the ground and stood in front of Maiki, brushing his tunic and pants off, before turning around to face Maiki, who was standing awestruck, with a small bit of drool escaping from his open mouth. "Ho--wha---who---wh---HOW?!" he stuttered horribly as he stared at his newly resurrected student. Renshi winked enigmatically at Maiki before once again resuming his fighting pose. "Nice try, old man, but you'll have to do better than that to silence Renshi."

______________

Renshi places his hands in a postition that Maika notices right away. "Oh no can it be! No the 1000th element attack! IT CANT BE! Trees are being uprooted the soil it turning white the sky darkens with a sea of black. Renshi is summoning all the elements needed! With a great attack renshi blast the amazing force towards Maika. The ground in front of renshi is destroyed. BUT! Where is maika. "I guess it will take more then that to silence you renshi...but you still have more to learn!" "Your behing me again!?! But how!" "Like i said you have much much more to learn!"
______________________________
Even looking back on it, Renshi didn't know how he survived. Maika came from behind and leapt onto his back, weilding a newer, brighter blade, made of demon bone. It was large, blue, and sharp. Renshi, using the instinct born of his long training and boring repetition of drills, went into a tight forward somersault, designed to throw Maika off of his back and onto the ground. It didn't work, Maika only grabbed his hair and rolled with him, all the while weilding that fearsome blade. He performed his deadly dance of survival, trying to rid himself of the plague on his back, and once he had gotten him free, he simply ran.

______________________________

Maika didnt run after him...he knew that renshi would return after he relizes how great of a master Maika is. "He cant run for ever...I know that and he does...he needs much training if he feel he wants to become the next most respected person in the village" Soon enough renshi came back...but different...He had blood pouring down his face..on his close...his hair turned a pitch black formorly yellow. His head band broken in two lay in his hand..His panths torn to the knee with blood speckled all over. What has happened what has renshi become!

[Foog]

(it only works great because you tell good plot developing twists)
The Story

There was a story....


Young renshi wanted to become the most noble shinobi in town but he had to prove himself first. He couldnt just call himself the next gratest. He would endure test that were never accomplished but by one. The greatest Shinobi Alive. This will be young renshi's trainer...support manage....FATHER! To become the next shinobi the world would know renshi had to learn the 1000th element attack. The greatest attack combining all elemements of life...world...Everything in exsitense. This attack could devistate the world if not used wisley by the one...the only.........<!-- / message --><!-- sig -->

__________________
Maika...The Master and renown teacher...only he could train Renshi thru all the difficult task and abilities he would need to attain his goal of greatest Shinobi.
But Maiki had not taken a student in many years...his life had been violent and his power deadly in its magnitude.Seeking seclusion from the world he had built a cabin for himself and lived miles away from town.Young Renshi was determined,however and walked the 10 miles to where Maiki lived and humbly presented himself.......
__________________
Maiki chuckled softly to himself as he looked up the newcomer. "What do you mean by this, young one, coming to me for help?" He growled it at the boy as the boy stood there, clearly very afraid of him. Just as he should be, he thought to himself. Not to toot my own horn, or anything, but i am one commanding guy. "Please, master, I want to be like you. Can you teach me your ways?" The boy's voice was small, and thin, and it quavered on the last word, making him seem even more feeble. "Yes, i can teach you my ways. But the real question is, can you learn them?"

__________________

Renshi answers harsly with confidence. Yes! I will and i can learn from you. I will dedicate my time to being the next greatest Shinobi. Renshi though did not understand what he was in for exactly. This year of training would be the hardest thing of his life!
__________________
Maiki was slightly disquieted by this sudden show of confidence. He had guessed the child to be little over 15, but it seemed now that he had grown inches and years before his very eyes. "Very well. Show me what you can do, and I will know where to start my teaching. Do your worst." He spread his legs a little and slid into the comfortable fighting pose that he had come to know and love. He beckoned slowly with his index finger and prepared for the hardest fight of his life.

__________________

With a sudden blast from renshi's palm a huge burst of energy fired directly at maiki. There was a sudden cloud of dust and no sign of maiki. From out of no where renshi is on his hands and knees with a ancient dagger at the back of his neck. "You have much to learn but that wasnt all that bad, You have potential...Here is where the training STARTS!
______________
Renshi slowly collapsed forward onto the ground face first, and died when he hit the ground. Maiki solemnly dusted his hands off, walked over to Renshi, and pulled the dagger out of his neck. Suddenly, Renshi rose from the ground and stood in front of Maiki, brushing his tunic and pants off, before turning around to face Maiki, who was standing awestruck, with a small bit of drool escaping from his open mouth. "Ho--wha---who---wh---HOW?!" he stuttered horribly as he stared at his newly resurrected student. Renshi winked enigmatically at Maiki before once again resuming his fighting pose. "Nice try, old man, but you'll have to do better than that to silence Renshi."

______________

Renshi places his hands in a postition that Maika notices right away. "Oh no can it be! No the 1000th element attack! IT CANT BE! Trees are being uprooted the soil it turning white the sky darkens with a sea of black. Renshi is summoning all the elements needed! With a great attack renshi blast the amazing force towards Maika. The ground in front of renshi is destroyed. BUT! Where is maika. "I guess it will take more then that to silence you renshi...but you still have more to learn!" "Your behing me again!?! But how!" "Like i said you have much much more to learn!"
______________________________
Even looking back on it, Renshi didn't know how he survived. Maika came from behind and leapt onto his back, weilding a newer, brighter blade, made of demon bone. It was large, blue, and sharp. Renshi, using the instinct born of his long training and boring repetition of drills, went into a tight forward somersault, designed to throw Maika off of his back and onto the ground. It didn't work, Maika only grabbed his hair and rolled with him, all the while weilding that fearsome blade. He performed his deadly dance of survival, trying to rid himself of the plague on his back, and once he had gotten him free, he simply ran.

______________________________

Maika didnt run after him...he knew that renshi would return after he relizes how great of a master Maika is. "He cant run for ever...I know that and he does...he needs much training if he feel he wants to become the next most respected person in the village" Soon enough renshi came back...but different...He had blood pouring down his face..on his close...his hair turned a pitch black formorly yellow. His head band broken in two lay in his hand..His panths torn to the knee with blood speckled all over. What has happened what has renshi become!
____________________
Of course, being the master that maika was, he knew after a second what had gone wrong with Renshi. But why? there was really no reason for him to open himself to the demon Gretlen and become possessed. Now there was really no way but death to clear his soul of Gretlen. With a sigh he began the motions for the expulsion of the demon from Renshi. Unfortunately, the spell required the life of the possessee...it was a price he had to pay.

[Hamel]

(Hah thanks but keep it like this i think this is awesome we have a story devoloping)
The Story

There was a story....


Young renshi wanted to become the most noble shinobi in town but he had to prove himself first. He couldnt just call himself the next gratest. He would endure test that were never accomplished but by one. The greatest Shinobi Alive. This will be young renshi's trainer...support manage....FATHER! To become the next shinobi the world would know renshi had to learn the 1000th element attack. The greatest attack combining all elemements of life...world...Everything in exsitense. This attack could devistate the world if not used wisley by the one...the only.........<!-- / message --><!-- sig -->

__________________
Maika...The Master and renown teacher...only he could train Renshi thru all the difficult task and abilities he would need to attain his goal of greatest Shinobi.
But Maiki had not taken a student in many years...his life had been violent and his power deadly in its magnitude.Seeking seclusion from the world he had built a cabin for himself and lived miles away from town.Young Renshi was determined,however and walked the 10 miles to where Maiki lived and humbly presented himself.......
__________________
Maiki chuckled softly to himself as he looked up the newcomer. "What do you mean by this, young one, coming to me for help?" He growled it at the boy as the boy stood there, clearly very afraid of him. Just as he should be, he thought to himself. Not to toot my own horn, or anything, but i am one commanding guy. "Please, master, I want to be like you. Can you teach me your ways?" The boy's voice was small, and thin, and it quavered on the last word, making him seem even more feeble. "Yes, i can teach you my ways. But the real question is, can you learn them?"

__________________

Renshi answers harsly with confidence. Yes! I will and i can learn from you. I will dedicate my time to being the next greatest Shinobi. Renshi though did not understand what he was in for exactly. This year of training would be the hardest thing of his life!
__________________
Maiki was slightly disquieted by this sudden show of confidence. He had guessed the child to be little over 15, but it seemed now that he had grown inches and years before his very eyes. "Very well. Show me what you can do, and I will know where to start my teaching. Do your worst." He spread his legs a little and slid into the comfortable fighting pose that he had come to know and love. He beckoned slowly with his index finger and prepared for the hardest fight of his life.

__________________

With a sudden blast from renshi's palm a huge burst of energy fired directly at maiki. There was a sudden cloud of dust and no sign of maiki. From out of no where renshi is on his hands and knees with a ancient dagger at the back of his neck. "You have much to learn but that wasnt all that bad, You have potential...Here is where the training STARTS!
______________
Renshi slowly collapsed forward onto the ground face first, and died when he hit the ground. Maiki solemnly dusted his hands off, walked over to Renshi, and pulled the dagger out of his neck. Suddenly, Renshi rose from the ground and stood in front of Maiki, brushing his tunic and pants off, before turning around to face Maiki, who was standing awestruck, with a small bit of drool escaping from his open mouth. "Ho--wha---who---wh---HOW?!" he stuttered horribly as he stared at his newly resurrected student. Renshi winked enigmatically at Maiki before once again resuming his fighting pose. "Nice try, old man, but you'll have to do better than that to silence Renshi."

______________

Renshi places his hands in a postition that Maika notices right away. "Oh no can it be! No the 1000th element attack! IT CANT BE! Trees are being uprooted the soil it turning white the sky darkens with a sea of black. Renshi is summoning all the elements needed! With a great attack renshi blast the amazing force towards Maika. The ground in front of renshi is destroyed. BUT! Where is maika. "I guess it will take more then that to silence you renshi...but you still have more to learn!" "Your behing me again!?! But how!" "Like i said you have much much more to learn!"
______________________________
Even looking back on it, Renshi didn't know how he survived. Maika came from behind and leapt onto his back, weilding a newer, brighter blade, made of demon bone. It was large, blue, and sharp. Renshi, using the instinct born of his long training and boring repetition of drills, went into a tight forward somersault, designed to throw Maika off of his back and onto the ground. It didn't work, Maika only grabbed his hair and rolled with him, all the while weilding that fearsome blade. He performed his deadly dance of survival, trying to rid himself of the plague on his back, and once he had gotten him free, he simply ran.

______________________________

Maika didnt run after him...he knew that renshi would return after he relizes how great of a master Maika is. "He cant run for ever...I know that and he does...he needs much training if he feel he wants to become the next most respected person in the village" Soon enough renshi came back...but different...He had blood pouring down his face..on his close...his hair turned a pitch black formorly yellow. His head band broken in two lay in his hand..His panths torn to the knee with blood speckled all over. What has happened what has renshi become!
____________________
Of course, being the master that maika was, he knew after a second what had gone wrong with Renshi. But why? there was really no reason for him to open himself to the demon Gretlen and become possessed. Now there was really no way but death to clear his soul of Gretlen. With a sigh he began the motions for the expulsion of the demon from Renshi. Unfortunately, the spell required the life of the possessee...it was a price he had to pay.

____________________

But how could he...how could he kill his own son! Maika placed his hand upon renshi's chest and with a gasp.... With a great sound of an explosion renshi rips maika's arm off! Blood pours out onto the ground while maika stands in an almost dead state...renshi then takes out his blood plated iron dagger and crushes it into his fathers,trainers,Supporters....Head...

[Foog]

The Story

There was a story....


Young renshi wanted to become the most noble shinobi in town but he had to prove himself first. He couldnt just call himself the next gratest. He would endure test that were never accomplished but by one. The greatest Shinobi Alive. This will be young renshi's trainer...support manage....FATHER! To become the next shinobi the world would know renshi had to learn the 1000th element attack. The greatest attack combining all elemements of life...world...Everything in exsitense. This attack could devistate the world if not used wisley by the one...the only.........<!-- / message --><!-- sig -->

__________________
Maika...The Master and renown teacher...only he could train Renshi thru all the difficult task and abilities he would need to attain his goal of greatest Shinobi.
But Maiki had not taken a student in many years...his life had been violent and his power deadly in its magnitude.Seeking seclusion from the world he had built a cabin for himself and lived miles away from town.Young Renshi was determined,however and walked the 10 miles to where Maiki lived and humbly presented himself.......
__________________
Maiki chuckled softly to himself as he looked up the newcomer. "What do you mean by this, young one, coming to me for help?" He growled it at the boy as the boy stood there, clearly very afraid of him. Just as he should be, he thought to himself. Not to toot my own horn, or anything, but i am one commanding guy. "Please, master, I want to be like you. Can you teach me your ways?" The boy's voice was small, and thin, and it quavered on the last word, making him seem even more feeble. "Yes, i can teach you my ways. But the real question is, can you learn them?"

__________________

Renshi answers harsly with confidence. Yes! I will and i can learn from you. I will dedicate my time to being the next greatest Shinobi. Renshi though did not understand what he was in for exactly. This year of training would be the hardest thing of his life!
__________________
Maiki was slightly disquieted by this sudden show of confidence. He had guessed the child to be little over 15, but it seemed now that he had grown inches and years before his very eyes. "Very well. Show me what you can do, and I will know where to start my teaching. Do your worst." He spread his legs a little and slid into the comfortable fighting pose that he had come to know and love. He beckoned slowly with his index finger and prepared for the hardest fight of his life.

__________________

With a sudden blast from renshi's palm a huge burst of energy fired directly at maiki. There was a sudden cloud of dust and no sign of maiki. From out of no where renshi is on his hands and knees with a ancient dagger at the back of his neck. "You have much to learn but that wasnt all that bad, You have potential...Here is where the training STARTS!
______________
Renshi slowly collapsed forward onto the ground face first, and died when he hit the ground. Maiki solemnly dusted his hands off, walked over to Renshi, and pulled the dagger out of his neck. Suddenly, Renshi rose from the ground and stood in front of Maiki, brushing his tunic and pants off, before turning around to face Maiki, who was standing awestruck, with a small bit of drool escaping from his open mouth. "Ho--wha---who---wh---HOW?!" he stuttered horribly as he stared at his newly resurrected student. Renshi winked enigmatically at Maiki before once again resuming his fighting pose. "Nice try, old man, but you'll have to do better than that to silence Renshi."

______________

Renshi places his hands in a postition that Maika notices right away. "Oh no can it be! No the 1000th element attack! IT CANT BE! Trees are being uprooted the soil it turning white the sky darkens with a sea of black. Renshi is summoning all the elements needed! With a great attack renshi blast the amazing force towards Maika. The ground in front of renshi is destroyed. BUT! Where is maika. "I guess it will take more then that to silence you renshi...but you still have more to learn!" "Your behing me again!?! But how!" "Like i said you have much much more to learn!"
______________________________
Even looking back on it, Renshi didn't know how he survived. Maika came from behind and leapt onto his back, weilding a newer, brighter blade, made of demon bone. It was large, blue, and sharp. Renshi, using the instinct born of his long training and boring repetition of drills, went into a tight forward somersault, designed to throw Maika off of his back and onto the ground. It didn't work, Maika only grabbed his hair and rolled with him, all the while weilding that fearsome blade. He performed his deadly dance of survival, trying to rid himself of the plague on his back, and once he had gotten him free, he simply ran.

______________________________

Maika didnt run after him...he knew that renshi would return after he relizes how great of a master Maika is. "He cant run for ever...I know that and he does...he needs much training if he feel he wants to become the next most respected person in the village" Soon enough renshi came back...but different...He had blood pouring down his face..on his close...his hair turned a pitch black formorly yellow. His head band broken in two lay in his hand..His panths torn to the knee with blood speckled all over. What has happened what has renshi become!
____________________
Of course, being the master that maika was, he knew after a second what had gone wrong with Renshi. But why? there was really no reason for him to open himself to the demon Gretlen and become possessed. Now there was really no way but death to clear his soul of Gretlen. With a sigh he began the motions for the expulsion of the demon from Renshi. Unfortunately, the spell required the life of the possessee...it was a price he had to pay.

____________________

But how could he...how could he kill his own son! Maika placed his hand upon renshi's chest and with a gasp.... With a great sound of an explosion renshi rips maika's arm off! Blood pours out onto the ground while maika stands in an almost dead state...renshi then takes out his blood plated iron dagger and crushes it into his fathers,trainers,Supporteds....Head...
___________________________
At that moment, the ground shook, and heavens opened, and the rain poured forth in a great upheaval of family. Renshi stood shaking, with his hand still pressed against his father's head, feeling so much smaller now that the demon had left his body...he didn't know where he was, or what he was doing, or why he was standing with his hand in his father's dead body. Suddenly he collapsed, and passed out. There would be a lot of uncomfortable question back home, he thought as he hit the ground.

[Hamel]

The Story

There was a story....


Young renshi wanted to become the most noble shinobi in town but he had to prove himself first. He couldnt just call himself the next gratest. He would endure test that were never accomplished but by one. The greatest Shinobi Alive. This will be young renshi's trainer...support manage....FATHER! To become the next shinobi the world would know renshi had to learn the 1000th element attack. The greatest attack combining all elemements of life...world...Everything in exsitense. This attack could devistate the world if not used wisley by the one...the only.........<!-- / message --><!-- sig -->

__________________
Maika...The Master and renown teacher...only he could train Renshi thru all the difficult task and abilities he would need to attain his goal of greatest Shinobi.
But Maiki had not taken a student in many years...his life had been violent and his power deadly in its magnitude.Seeking seclusion from the world he had built a cabin for himself and lived miles away from town.Young Renshi was determined,however and walked the 10 miles to where Maiki lived and humbly presented himself.......
__________________
Maiki chuckled softly to himself as he looked up the newcomer. "What do you mean by this, young one, coming to me for help?" He growled it at the boy as the boy stood there, clearly very afraid of him. Just as he should be, he thought to himself. Not to toot my own horn, or anything, but i am one commanding guy. "Please, master, I want to be like you. Can you teach me your ways?" The boy's voice was small, and thin, and it quavered on the last word, making him seem even more feeble. "Yes, i can teach you my ways. But the real question is, can you learn them?"

__________________

Renshi answers harsly with confidence. Yes! I will and i can learn from you. I will dedicate my time to being the next greatest Shinobi. Renshi though did not understand what he was in for exactly. This year of training would be the hardest thing of his life!
__________________
Maiki was slightly disquieted by this sudden show of confidence. He had guessed the child to be little over 15, but it seemed now that he had grown inches and years before his very eyes. "Very well. Show me what you can do, and I will know where to start my teaching. Do your worst." He spread his legs a little and slid into the comfortable fighting pose that he had come to know and love. He beckoned slowly with his index finger and prepared for the hardest fight of his life.

__________________

With a sudden blast from renshi's palm a huge burst of energy fired directly at maiki. There was a sudden cloud of dust and no sign of maiki. From out of no where renshi is on his hands and knees with a ancient dagger at the back of his neck. "You have much to learn but that wasnt all that bad, You have potential...Here is where the training STARTS!
______________
Renshi slowly collapsed forward onto the ground face first, and died when he hit the ground. Maiki solemnly dusted his hands off, walked over to Renshi, and pulled the dagger out of his neck. Suddenly, Renshi rose from the ground and stood in front of Maiki, brushing his tunic and pants off, before turning around to face Maiki, who was standing awestruck, with a small bit of drool escaping from his open mouth. "Ho--wha---who---wh---HOW?!" he stuttered horribly as he stared at his newly resurrected student. Renshi winked enigmatically at Maiki before once again resuming his fighting pose. "Nice try, old man, but you'll have to do better than that to silence Renshi."

______________

Renshi places his hands in a postition that Maika notices right away. "Oh no can it be! No the 1000th element attack! IT CANT BE! Trees are being uprooted the soil it turning white the sky darkens with a sea of black. Renshi is summoning all the elements needed! With a great attack renshi blast the amazing force towards Maika. The ground in front of renshi is destroyed. BUT! Where is maika. "I guess it will take more then that to silence you renshi...but you still have more to learn!" "Your behing me again!?! But how!" "Like i said you have much much more to learn!"
______________________________
Even looking back on it, Renshi didn't know how he survived. Maika came from behind and leapt onto his back, weilding a newer, brighter blade, made of demon bone. It was large, blue, and sharp. Renshi, using the instinct born of his long training and boring repetition of drills, went into a tight forward somersault, designed to throw Maika off of his back and onto the ground. It didn't work, Maika only grabbed his hair and rolled with him, all the while weilding that fearsome blade. He performed his deadly dance of survival, trying to rid himself of the plague on his back, and once he had gotten him free, he simply ran.

______________________________

Maika didnt run after him...he knew that renshi would return after he relizes how great of a master Maika is. "He cant run for ever...I know that and he does...he needs much training if he feel he wants to become the next most respected person in the village" Soon enough renshi came back...but different...He had blood pouring down his face..on his close...his hair turned a pitch black formorly yellow. His head band broken in two lay in his hand..His panths torn to the knee with blood speckled all over. What has happened what has renshi become!
____________________
Of course, being the master that maika was, he knew after a second what had gone wrong with Renshi. But why? there was really no reason for him to open himself to the demon Gretlen and become possessed. Now there was really no way but death to clear his soul of Gretlen. With a sigh he began the motions for the expulsion of the demon from Renshi. Unfortunately, the spell required the life of the possessee...it was a price he had to pay.

____________________

But how could he...how could he kill his own son! Maika placed his hand upon renshi's chest and with a gasp.... With a great sound of an explosion renshi rips maika's arm off! Blood pours out onto the ground while maika stands in an almost dead state...renshi then takes out his blood plated iron dagger and crushes it into his fathers,trainers,Supporteds....Head...
___________________________
At that moment, the ground shook, and heavens opened, and the rain poured forth in a great upheaval of family. Renshi stood shaking, with his hand still pressed against his father's head, feeling so much smaller now that the demon had left his body...he didn't know where he was, or what he was doing, or why he was standing with his hand in his father's dead body. Suddenly he collapsed, and passed out. There would be a lot of uncomfortable question back home, he thought as he hit the ground.

___________________________

Renshi awoke with an imense ache in his head....He was sweating horribly...he woke up to see who? MAIKA?! "But...didnt you...d...d...di...die....?" "my son..what do you speak of? i beilive is was just an awful dream...you need your rest...please...go back to bed" Maika pulls the cover tight over renshis awfully tired body and walks a way with an almost bone chilling smile on his face...."Goodnight renshi."

[Foog]

The Story

There was a story....


Young renshi wanted to become the most noble shinobi in town but he had to prove himself first. He couldnt just call himself the next gratest. He would endure test that were never accomplished but by one. The greatest Shinobi Alive. This will be young renshi's trainer...support manage....FATHER! To become the next shinobi the world would know renshi had to learn the 1000th element attack. The greatest attack combining all elemements of life...world...Everything in exsitense. This attack could devistate the world if not used wisley by the one...the only.........<!-- / message --><!-- sig -->

__________________
Maika...The Master and renown teacher...only he could train Renshi thru all the difficult task and abilities he would need to attain his goal of greatest Shinobi.
But Maiki had not taken a student in many years...his life had been violent and his power deadly in its magnitude.Seeking seclusion from the world he had built a cabin for himself and lived miles away from town.Young Renshi was determined,however and walked the 10 miles to where Maiki lived and humbly presented himself.......
__________________
Maiki chuckled softly to himself as he looked up the newcomer. "What do you mean by this, young one, coming to me for help?" He growled it at the boy as the boy stood there, clearly very afraid of him. Just as he should be, he thought to himself. Not to toot my own horn, or anything, but i am one commanding guy. "Please, master, I want to be like you. Can you teach me your ways?" The boy's voice was small, and thin, and it quavered on the last word, making him seem even more feeble. "Yes, i can teach you my ways. But the real question is, can you learn them?"

__________________

Renshi answers harsly with confidence. Yes! I will and i can learn from you. I will dedicate my time to being the next greatest Shinobi. Renshi though did not understand what he was in for exactly. This year of training would be the hardest thing of his life!
__________________
Maiki was slightly disquieted by this sudden show of confidence. He had guessed the child to be little over 15, but it seemed now that he had grown inches and years before his very eyes. "Very well. Show me what you can do, and I will know where to start my teaching. Do your worst." He spread his legs a little and slid into the comfortable fighting pose that he had come to know and love. He beckoned slowly with his index finger and prepared for the hardest fight of his life.

__________________

With a sudden blast from renshi's palm a huge burst of energy fired directly at maiki. There was a sudden cloud of dust and no sign of maiki. From out of no where renshi is on his hands and knees with a ancient dagger at the back of his neck. "You have much to learn but that wasnt all that bad, You have potential...Here is where the training STARTS!
______________
Renshi slowly collapsed forward onto the ground face first, and died when he hit the ground. Maiki solemnly dusted his hands off, walked over to Renshi, and pulled the dagger out of his neck. Suddenly, Renshi rose from the ground and stood in front of Maiki, brushing his tunic and pants off, before turning around to face Maiki, who was standing awestruck, with a small bit of drool escaping from his open mouth. "Ho--wha---who---wh---HOW?!" he stuttered horribly as he stared at his newly resurrected student. Renshi winked enigmatically at Maiki before once again resuming his fighting pose. "Nice try, old man, but you'll have to do better than that to silence Renshi."

______________

Renshi places his hands in a postition that Maika notices right away. "Oh no can it be! No the 1000th element attack! IT CANT BE! Trees are being uprooted the soil it turning white the sky darkens with a sea of black. Renshi is summoning all the elements needed! With a great attack renshi blast the amazing force towards Maika. The ground in front of renshi is destroyed. BUT! Where is maika. "I guess it will take more then that to silence you renshi...but you still have more to learn!" "Your behing me again!?! But how!" "Like i said you have much much more to learn!"
______________________________
Even looking back on it, Renshi didn't know how he survived. Maika came from behind and leapt onto his back, weilding a newer, brighter blade, made of demon bone. It was large, blue, and sharp. Renshi, using the instinct born of his long training and boring repetition of drills, went into a tight forward somersault, designed to throw Maika off of his back and onto the ground. It didn't work, Maika only grabbed his hair and rolled with him, all the while weilding that fearsome blade. He performed his deadly dance of survival, trying to rid himself of the plague on his back, and once he had gotten him free, he simply ran.

______________________________

Maika didnt run after him...he knew that renshi would return after he relizes how great of a master Maika is. "He cant run for ever...I know that and he does...he needs much training if he feel he wants to become the next most respected person in the village" Soon enough renshi came back...but different...He had blood pouring down his face..on his close...his hair turned a pitch black formorly yellow. His head band broken in two lay in his hand..His panths torn to the knee with blood speckled all over. What has happened what has renshi become!
____________________
Of course, being the master that maika was, he knew after a second what had gone wrong with Renshi. But why? there was really no reason for him to open himself to the demon Gretlen and become possessed. Now there was really no way but death to clear his soul of Gretlen. With a sigh he began the motions for the expulsion of the demon from Renshi. Unfortunately, the spell required the life of the possessee...it was a price he had to pay.

____________________

But how could he...how could he kill his own son! Maika placed his hand upon renshi's chest and with a gasp.... With a great sound of an explosion renshi rips maika's arm off! Blood pours out onto the ground while maika stands in an almost dead state...renshi then takes out his blood plated iron dagger and crushes it into his fathers,trainers,Supporteds....Head...
___________________________
At that moment, the ground shook, and heavens opened, and the rain poured forth in a great upheaval of family. Renshi stood shaking, with his hand still pressed against his father's head, feeling so much smaller now that the demon had left his body...he didn't know where he was, or what he was doing, or why he was standing with his hand in his father's dead body. Suddenly he collapsed, and passed out. There would be a lot of uncomfortable question back home, he thought as he hit the ground.

___________________________

Renshi awoke with an imense ache in his head....He was sweating horribly...he woke up to see who? MAIKA?! "But...didnt you...d...d...di...die....?" "my son..what do you speak of? i beilive is was just an awful dream...you need your rest...please...go back to bed" Maika pulls the cover tight over renshis awfully tired body and walks a way with an almost bone chilling smile on his face...."Goodnight renshi."
___________________________
Renshi sat bolt upright with a horrid look on his already mangled, bloodied face. "Maika! Come back! Now!" He shouted, his voice becoming hoarse with fear and anger. Maika slowly came back into the room, this time with a thermometer and a cup of hot chocolate. "my son, you must rest. You've been asleep for three days, and you've still got a long road to recovery from this odd sickness. Go back to sleep, it will help matters." He slowly made his way to the bed, and waved his hand over Renshi's head, slowly enticing him into the realm of sleep...He thought no more.

[Hamel]

The Story

There was a story....


Young renshi wanted to become the most noble shinobi in town but he had to prove himself first. He couldnt just call himself the next gratest. He would endure test that were never accomplished but by one. The greatest Shinobi Alive. This will be young renshi's trainer...support manage....FATHER! To become the next shinobi the world would know renshi had to learn the 1000th element attack. The greatest attack combining all elemements of life...world...Everything in exsitense. This attack could devistate the world if not used wisley by the one...the only.........<!-- / message --><!-- sig -->

__________________
Maika...The Master and renown teacher...only he could train Renshi thru all the difficult task and abilities he would need to attain his goal of greatest Shinobi.
But Maiki had not taken a student in many years...his life had been violent and his power deadly in its magnitude.Seeking seclusion from the world he had built a cabin for himself and lived miles away from town.Young Renshi was determined,however and walked the 10 miles to where Maiki lived and humbly presented himself.......
__________________
Maiki chuckled softly to himself as he looked up the newcomer. "What do you mean by this, young one, coming to me for help?" He growled it at the boy as the boy stood there, clearly very afraid of him. Just as he should be, he thought to himself. Not to toot my own horn, or anything, but i am one commanding guy. "Please, master, I want to be like you. Can you teach me your ways?" The boy's voice was small, and thin, and it quavered on the last word, making him seem even more feeble. "Yes, i can teach you my ways. But the real question is, can you learn them?"

__________________

Renshi answers harsly with confidence. Yes! I will and i can learn from you. I will dedicate my time to being the next greatest Shinobi. Renshi though did not understand what he was in for exactly. This year of training would be the hardest thing of his life!
__________________
Maiki was slightly disquieted by this sudden show of confidence. He had guessed the child to be little over 15, but it seemed now that he had grown inches and years before his very eyes. "Very well. Show me what you can do, and I will know where to start my teaching. Do your worst." He spread his legs a little and slid into the comfortable fighting pose that he had come to know and love. He beckoned slowly with his index finger and prepared for the hardest fight of his life.

__________________

With a sudden blast from renshi's palm a huge burst of energy fired directly at maiki. There was a sudden cloud of dust and no sign of maiki. From out of no where renshi is on his hands and knees with a ancient dagger at the back of his neck. "You have much to learn but that wasnt all that bad, You have potential...Here is where the training STARTS!
______________
Renshi slowly collapsed forward onto the ground face first, and died when he hit the ground. Maiki solemnly dusted his hands off, walked over to Renshi, and pulled the dagger out of his neck. Suddenly, Renshi rose from the ground and stood in front of Maiki, brushing his tunic and pants off, before turning around to face Maiki, who was standing awestruck, with a small bit of drool escaping from his open mouth. "Ho--wha---who---wh---HOW?!" he stuttered horribly as he stared at his newly resurrected student. Renshi winked enigmatically at Maiki before once again resuming his fighting pose. "Nice try, old man, but you'll have to do better than that to silence Renshi."

______________

Renshi places his hands in a postition that Maika notices right away. "Oh no can it be! No the 1000th element attack! IT CANT BE! Trees are being uprooted the soil it turning white the sky darkens with a sea of black. Renshi is summoning all the elements needed! With a great attack renshi blast the amazing force towards Maika. The ground in front of renshi is destroyed. BUT! Where is maika. "I guess it will take more then that to silence you renshi...but you still have more to learn!" "Your behing me again!?! But how!" "Like i said you have much much more to learn!"
______________________________
Even looking back on it, Renshi didn't know how he survived. Maika came from behind and leapt onto his back, weilding a newer, brighter blade, made of demon bone. It was large, blue, and sharp. Renshi, using the instinct born of his long training and boring repetition of drills, went into a tight forward somersault, designed to throw Maika off of his back and onto the ground. It didn't work, Maika only grabbed his hair and rolled with him, all the while weilding that fearsome blade. He performed his deadly dance of survival, trying to rid himself of the plague on his back, and once he had gotten him free, he simply ran.

______________________________

Maika didnt run after him...he knew that renshi would return after he relizes how great of a master Maika is. "He cant run for ever...I know that and he does...he needs much training if he feel he wants to become the next most respected person in the village" Soon enough renshi came back...but different...He had blood pouring down his face..on his close...his hair turned a pitch black formorly yellow. His head band broken in two lay in his hand..His panths torn to the knee with blood speckled all over. What has happened what has renshi become!
____________________
Of course, being the master that maika was, he knew after a second what had gone wrong with Renshi. But why? there was really no reason for him to open himself to the demon Gretlen and become possessed. Now there was really no way but death to clear his soul of Gretlen. With a sigh he began the motions for the expulsion of the demon from Renshi. Unfortunately, the spell required the life of the possessee...it was a price he had to pay.

____________________

But how could he...how could he kill his own son! Maika placed his hand upon renshi's chest and with a gasp.... With a great sound of an explosion renshi rips maika's arm off! Blood pours out onto the ground while maika stands in an almost dead state...renshi then takes out his blood plated iron dagger and crushes it into his fathers,trainers,Supporteds....Head...
___________________________
At that moment, the ground shook, and heavens opened, and the rain poured forth in a great upheaval of family. Renshi stood shaking, with his hand still pressed against his father's head, feeling so much smaller now that the demon had left his body...he didn't know where he was, or what he was doing, or why he was standing with his hand in his father's dead body. Suddenly he collapsed, and passed out. There would be a lot of uncomfortable question back home, he thought as he hit the ground.

___________________________

Renshi awoke with an imense ache in his head....He was sweating horribly...he woke up to see who? MAIKA?! "But...didnt you...d...d...di...die....?" "my son..what do you speak of? i beilive is was just an awful dream...you need your rest...please...go back to bed" Maika pulls the cover tight over renshis awfully tired body and walks a way with an almost bone chilling smile on his face...."Goodnight renshi."
___________________________
Renshi sat bolt upright with a horrid look on his already mangled, bloodied face. "Maika! Come back! Now!" He shouted, his voice becoming hoarse with fear and anger. Maika slowly came back into the room, this time with a thermometer and a cup of hot chocolate. "my son, you must rest. You've been asleep for three days, and you've still got a long road to recovery from this odd sickness. Go back to sleep, it will help matters." He slowly made his way to the bed, and waved his hand over Renshi's head, slowly enticing him into the realm of sleep...He thought no more.
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"Renshi renshi wake up...its Mayia....Come on renshi wake up...." "Whoa whoa whoa im awake chill out....""todays the big day renshi your advanced training lesson...of the ancient 1000th element.."Renshi looks at mayia beautifull face...and ponders...Renshi and mayia walk to their fathers house not so far away now being renshis house relocated for training....Renshi got to the house...but...what..happened!"Mayia The house! Where is it!?"

[Foog]

The Story

There was a story....


Young renshi wanted to become the most noble shinobi in town but he had to prove himself first. He couldnt just call himself the next gratest. He would endure test that were never accomplished but by one. The greatest Shinobi Alive. This will be young renshi's trainer...support manage....FATHER! To become the next shinobi the world would know renshi had to learn the 1000th element attack. The greatest attack combining all elemements of life...world...Everything in exsitense. This attack could devistate the world if not used wisley by the one...the only.........<!-- / message --><!-- sig -->

__________________
Maika...The Master and renown teacher...only he could train Renshi thru all the difficult task and abilities he would need to attain his goal of greatest Shinobi.
But Maiki had not taken a student in many years...his life had been violent and his power deadly in its magnitude.Seeking seclusion from the world he had built a cabin for himself and lived miles away from town.Young Renshi was determined,however and walked the 10 miles to where Maiki lived and humbly presented himself.......
__________________
Maiki chuckled softly to himself as he looked up the newcomer. "What do you mean by this, young one, coming to me for help?" He growled it at the boy as the boy stood there, clearly very afraid of him. Just as he should be, he thought to himself. Not to toot my own horn, or anything, but i am one commanding guy. "Please, master, I want to be like you. Can you teach me your ways?" The boy's voice was small, and thin, and it quavered on the last word, making him seem even more feeble. "Yes, i can teach you my ways. But the real question is, can you learn them?"

__________________

Renshi answers harsly with confidence. Yes! I will and i can learn from you. I will dedicate my time to being the next greatest Shinobi. Renshi though did not understand what he was in for exactly. This year of training would be the hardest thing of his life!
__________________
Maiki was slightly disquieted by this sudden show of confidence. He had guessed the child to be little over 15, but it seemed now that he had grown inches and years before his very eyes. "Very well. Show me what you can do, and I will know where to start my teaching. Do your worst." He spread his legs a little and slid into the comfortable fighting pose that he had come to know and love. He beckoned slowly with his index finger and prepared for the hardest fight of his life.

__________________

With a sudden blast from renshi's palm a huge burst of energy fired directly at maiki. There was a sudden cloud of dust and no sign of maiki. From out of no where renshi is on his hands and knees with a ancient dagger at the back of his neck. "You have much to learn but that wasnt all that bad, You have potential...Here is where the training STARTS!
______________
Renshi slowly collapsed forward onto the ground face first, and died when he hit the ground. Maiki solemnly dusted his hands off, walked over to Renshi, and pulled the dagger out of his neck. Suddenly, Renshi rose from the ground and stood in front of Maiki, brushing his tunic and pants off, before turning around to face Maiki, who was standing awestruck, with a small bit of drool escaping from his open mouth. "Ho--wha---who---wh---HOW?!" he stuttered horribly as he stared at his newly resurrected student. Renshi winked enigmatically at Maiki before once again resuming his fighting pose. "Nice try, old man, but you'll have to do better than that to silence Renshi."

______________

Renshi places his hands in a postition that Maika notices right away. "Oh no can it be! No the 1000th element attack! IT CANT BE! Trees are being uprooted the soil it turning white the sky darkens with a sea of black. Renshi is summoning all the elements needed! With a great attack renshi blast the amazing force towards Maika. The ground in front of renshi is destroyed. BUT! Where is maika. "I guess it will take more then that to silence you renshi...but you still have more to learn!" "Your behing me again!?! But how!" "Like i said you have much much more to learn!"
______________________________
Even looking back on it, Renshi didn't know how he survived. Maika came from behind and leapt onto his back, weilding a newer, brighter blade, made of demon bone. It was large, blue, and sharp. Renshi, using the instinct born of his long training and boring repetition of drills, went into a tight forward somersault, designed to throw Maika off of his back and onto the ground. It didn't work, Maika only grabbed his hair and rolled with him, all the while weilding that fearsome blade. He performed his deadly dance of survival, trying to rid himself of the plague on his back, and once he had gotten him free, he simply ran.

______________________________

Maika didnt run after him...he knew that renshi would return after he relizes how great of a master Maika is. "He cant run for ever...I know that and he does...he needs much training if he feel he wants to become the next most respected person in the village" Soon enough renshi came back...but different...He had blood pouring down his face..on his close...his hair turned a pitch black formorly yellow. His head band broken in two lay in his hand..His panths torn to the knee with blood speckled all over. What has happened what has renshi become!
____________________
Of course, being the master that maika was, he knew after a second what had gone wrong with Renshi. But why? there was really no reason for him to open himself to the demon Gretlen and become possessed. Now there was really no way but death to clear his soul of Gretlen. With a sigh he began the motions for the expulsion of the demon from Renshi. Unfortunately, the spell required the life of the possessee...it was a price he had to pay.

____________________

But how could he...how could he kill his own son! Maika placed his hand upon renshi's chest and with a gasp.... With a great sound of an explosion renshi rips maika's arm off! Blood pours out onto the ground while maika stands in an almost dead state...renshi then takes out his blood plated iron dagger and crushes it into his fathers,trainers,Supporteds....Head...
___________________________
At that moment, the ground shook, and heavens opened, and the rain poured forth in a great upheaval of family. Renshi stood shaking, with his hand still pressed against his father's head, feeling so much smaller now that the demon had left his body...he didn't know where he was, or what he was doing, or why he was standing with his hand in his father's dead body. Suddenly he collapsed, and passed out. There would be a lot of uncomfortable question back home, he thought as he hit the ground.

___________________________

Renshi awoke with an imense ache in his head....He was sweating horribly...he woke up to see who? MAIKA?! "But...didnt you...d...d...di...die....?" "my son..what do you speak of? i beilive is was just an awful dream...you need your rest...please...go back to bed" Maika pulls the cover tight over renshis awfully tired body and walks a way with an almost bone chilling smile on his face...."Goodnight renshi."
___________________________
Renshi sat bolt upright with a horrid look on his already mangled, bloodied face. "Maika! Come back! Now!" He shouted, his voice becoming hoarse with fear and anger. Maika slowly came back into the room, this time with a thermometer and a cup of hot chocolate. "my son, you must rest. You've been asleep for three days, and you've still got a long road to recovery from this odd sickness. Go back to sleep, it will help matters." He slowly made his way to the bed, and waved his hand over Renshi's head, slowly enticing him into the realm of sleep...He thought no more.
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"Renshi renshi wake up...its Mayia....Come on renshi wake up...." "Whoa whoa whoa im awake chill out....""todays the big day renshi your advanced training lesson...of the ancient 1000th element.."Renshi looks at mayia beautifull face...and ponders...Renshi and mayia walk to their fathers house not so far away now being renshis house relocated for training....Renshi got to the house...but...what..happened!"Mayia The house! Where is it!?"
__________________
"Oh my God. Mayia! This is terrible!" He shouted, his voice cracking with anxiety for his father's life. They ran into the rubble of the house, searching frantically for his father. They found his twisted body laying in his bedroom's remains, and he was breathing hard to stay alive. As Renshi knelt down to see how he was, he barely heard his last breath, and with it, his last words. "Son....Gretlen...Demon...avenge my death...he's in the bathroom...find him and use the thousand element attack, it's the only way to kill him..." With that, he witnessed his father's passing into the Dark Forest of the afterlife. He stood up, tears openly coursing down both cheeks, as he gritted his teeth and clenched his palms. He shouted out his battle cry; "GRETLEN! YOU WILL PAY FOR MY FATHER!!" With a scream he launched himself into the bathroom and looked for the demon.

[Hamel]

The Story

There was a story....


Young renshi wanted to become the most noble shinobi in town but he had to prove himself first. He couldnt just call himself the next gratest. He would endure test that were never accomplished but by one. The greatest Shinobi Alive. This will be young renshi's trainer...support manage....FATHER! To become the next shinobi the world would know renshi had to learn the 1000th element attack. The greatest attack combining all elemements of life...world...Everything in exsitense. This attack could devistate the world if not used wisley by the one...the only.........<!-- / message --><!-- sig -->

__________________
Maika...The Master and renown teacher...only he could train Renshi thru all the difficult task and abilities he would need to attain his goal of greatest Shinobi.
But Maiki had not taken a student in many years...his life had been violent and his power deadly in its magnitude.Seeking seclusion from the world he had built a cabin for himself and lived miles away from town.Young Renshi was determined,however and walked the 10 miles to where Maiki lived and humbly presented himself.......
__________________
Maiki chuckled softly to himself as he looked up the newcomer. "What do you mean by this, young one, coming to me for help?" He growled it at the boy as the boy stood there, clearly very afraid of him. Just as he should be, he thought to himself. Not to toot my own horn, or anything, but i am one commanding guy. "Please, master, I want to be like you. Can you teach me your ways?" The boy's voice was small, and thin, and it quavered on the last word, making him seem even more feeble. "Yes, i can teach you my ways. But the real question is, can you learn them?"

__________________

Renshi answers harsly with confidence. Yes! I will and i can learn from you. I will dedicate my time to being the next greatest Shinobi. Renshi though did not understand what he was in for exactly. This year of training would be the hardest thing of his life!
__________________
Maiki was slightly disquieted by this sudden show of confidence. He had guessed the child to be little over 15, but it seemed now that he had grown inches and years before his very eyes. "Very well. Show me what you can do, and I will know where to start my teaching. Do your worst." He spread his legs a little and slid into the comfortable fighting pose that he had come to know and love. He beckoned slowly with his index finger and prepared for the hardest fight of his life.

__________________

With a sudden blast from renshi's palm a huge burst of energy fired directly at maiki. There was a sudden cloud of dust and no sign of maiki. From out of no where renshi is on his hands and knees with a ancient dagger at the back of his neck. "You have much to learn but that wasnt all that bad, You have potential...Here is where the training STARTS!
______________
Renshi slowly collapsed forward onto the ground face first, and died when he hit the ground. Maiki solemnly dusted his hands off, walked over to Renshi, and pulled the dagger out of his neck. Suddenly, Renshi rose from the ground and stood in front of Maiki, brushing his tunic and pants off, before turning around to face Maiki, who was standing awestruck, with a small bit of drool escaping from his open mouth. "Ho--wha---who---wh---HOW?!" he stuttered horribly as he stared at his newly resurrected student. Renshi winked enigmatically at Maiki before once again resuming his fighting pose. "Nice try, old man, but you'll have to do better than that to silence Renshi."

______________

Renshi places his hands in a postition that Maika notices right away. "Oh no can it be! No the 1000th element attack! IT CANT BE! Trees are being uprooted the soil it turning white the sky darkens with a sea of black. Renshi is summoning all the elements needed! With a great attack renshi blast the amazing force towards Maika. The ground in front of renshi is destroyed. BUT! Where is maika. "I guess it will take more then that to silence you renshi...but you still have more to learn!" "Your behing me again!?! But how!" "Like i said you have much much more to learn!"
______________________________
Even looking back on it, Renshi didn't know how he survived. Maika came from behind and leapt onto his back, weilding a newer, brighter blade, made of demon bone. It was large, blue, and sharp. Renshi, using the instinct born of his long training and boring repetition of drills, went into a tight forward somersault, designed to throw Maika off of his back and onto the ground. It didn't work, Maika only grabbed his hair and rolled with him, all the while weilding that fearsome blade. He performed his deadly dance of survival, trying to rid himself of the plague on his back, and once he had gotten him free, he simply ran.

______________________________

Maika didnt run after him...he knew that renshi would return after he relizes how great of a master Maika is. "He cant run for ever...I know that and he does...he needs much training if he feel he wants to become the next most respected person in the village" Soon enough renshi came back...but different...He had blood pouring down his face..on his close...his hair turned a pitch black formorly yellow. His head band broken in two lay in his hand..His panths torn to the knee with blood speckled all over. What has happened what has renshi become!
____________________
Of course, being the master that maika was, he knew after a second what had gone wrong with Renshi. But why? there was really no reason for him to open himself to the demon Gretlen and become possessed. Now there was really no way but death to clear his soul of Gretlen. With a sigh he began the motions for the expulsion of the demon from Renshi. Unfortunately, the spell required the life of the possessee...it was a price he had to pay.

____________________

But how could he...how could he kill his own son! Maika placed his hand upon renshi's chest and with a gasp.... With a great sound of an explosion renshi rips maika's arm off! Blood pours out onto the ground while maika stands in an almost dead state...renshi then takes out his blood plated iron dagger and crushes it into his fathers,trainers,Supporteds....Head...
___________________________
At that moment, the ground shook, and heavens opened, and the rain poured forth in a great upheaval of family. Renshi stood shaking, with his hand still pressed against his father's head, feeling so much smaller now that the demon had left his body...he didn't know where he was, or what he was doing, or why he was standing with his hand in his father's dead body. Suddenly he collapsed, and passed out. There would be a lot of uncomfortable question back home, he thought as he hit the ground.

___________________________

Renshi awoke with an imense ache in his head....He was sweating horribly...he woke up to see who? MAIKA?! "But...didnt you...d...d...di...die....?" "my son..what do you speak of? i beilive is was just an awful dream...you need your rest...please...go back to bed" Maika pulls the cover tight over renshis awfully tired body and walks a way with an almost bone chilling smile on his face...."Goodnight renshi."
___________________________
Renshi sat bolt upright with a horrid look on his already mangled, bloodied face. "Maika! Come back! Now!" He shouted, his voice becoming hoarse with fear and anger. Maika slowly came back into the room, this time with a thermometer and a cup of hot chocolate. "my son, you must rest. You've been asleep for three days, and you've still got a long road to recovery from this odd sickness. Go back to sleep, it will help matters." He slowly made his way to the bed, and waved his hand over Renshi's head, slowly enticing him into the realm of sleep...He thought no more.
<!-- / message --><!-- sig --> __________________
"Renshi renshi wake up...its Mayia....Come on renshi wake up...." "Whoa whoa whoa im awake chill out....""todays the big day renshi your advanced training lesson...of the ancient 1000th element.."Renshi looks at mayia beautifull face...and ponders...Renshi and mayia walk to their fathers house not so far away now being renshis house relocated for training....Renshi got to the house...but...what..happened!"Mayia The house! Where is it!?"
__________________
"Oh my God. Mayia! This is terrible!" He shouted, his voice cracking with anxiety for his father's life. They ran into the rubble of the house, searching frantically for his father. They found his twisted body laying in his bedroom's remains, and he was breathing hard to stay alive. As Renshi knelt down to see how he was, he barely heard his last breath, and with it, his last words. "Son....Gretlen...Demon...avenge my death...he's in the bathroom...find him and use the thousand element attack, it's the only way to kill him..." With that, he witnessed his father's passing into the Dark Forest of the afterlife. He stood up, tears openly coursing down both cheeks, as he gritted his teeth and clenched his palms. He shouted out his battle cry; "GRETLEN! YOU WILL PAY FOR MY FATHER!!" With a scream he launched himself into the bathroom and looked for the demon.

_____________________

"Hello renshi, this is i...gretlen....so good to meet you""I will kill you and evenge my fathers death you low life!!""Mabey so renshi but not this time..."With a huge flash of blinding light renshi wakes up with a pool of sweat down his face."What again! who is this gretlen what does he want....?""I want you my son!!""What?! Who was that w...wh...where..who...are you...!" Renshi exclaims in a horrible voice!

[Foog]

The Story

There was a story....


Young renshi wanted to become the most noble shinobi in town but he had to prove himself first. He couldnt just call himself the next gratest. He would endure test that were never accomplished but by one. The greatest Shinobi Alive. This will be young renshi's trainer...support manage....FATHER! To become the next shinobi the world would know renshi had to learn the 1000th element attack. The greatest attack combining all elemements of life...world...Everything in exsitense. This attack could devistate the world if not used wisley by the one...the only.........<!-- / message --><!-- sig -->

__________________
Maika...The Master and renown teacher...only he could train Renshi thru all the difficult task and abilities he would need to attain his goal of greatest Shinobi.
But Maiki had not taken a student in many years...his life had been violent and his power deadly in its magnitude.Seeking seclusion from the world he had built a cabin for himself and lived miles away from town.Young Renshi was determined,however and walked the 10 miles to where Maiki lived and humbly presented himself.......
__________________
Maiki chuckled softly to himself as he looked up the newcomer. "What do you mean by this, young one, coming to me for help?" He growled it at the boy as the boy stood there, clearly very afraid of him. Just as he should be, he thought to himself. Not to toot my own horn, or anything, but i am one commanding guy. "Please, master, I want to be like you. Can you teach me your ways?" The boy's voice was small, and thin, and it quavered on the last word, making him seem even more feeble. "Yes, i can teach you my ways. But the real question is, can you learn them?"

__________________

Renshi answers harsly with confidence. Yes! I will and i can learn from you. I will dedicate my time to being the next greatest Shinobi. Renshi though did not understand what he was in for exactly. This year of training would be the hardest thing of his life!
__________________
Maiki was slightly disquieted by this sudden show of confidence. He had guessed the child to be little over 15, but it seemed now that he had grown inches and years before his very eyes. "Very well. Show me what you can do, and I will know where to start my teaching. Do your worst." He spread his legs a little and slid into the comfortable fighting pose that he had come to know and love. He beckoned slowly with his index finger and prepared for the hardest fight of his life.

__________________

With a sudden blast from renshi's palm a huge burst of energy fired directly at maiki. There was a sudden cloud of dust and no sign of maiki. From out of no where renshi is on his hands and knees with a ancient dagger at the back of his neck. "You have much to learn but that wasnt all that bad, You have potential...Here is where the training STARTS!
______________
Renshi slowly collapsed forward onto the ground face first, and died when he hit the ground. Maiki solemnly dusted his hands off, walked over to Renshi, and pulled the dagger out of his neck. Suddenly, Renshi rose from the ground and stood in front of Maiki, brushing his tunic and pants off, before turning around to face Maiki, who was standing awestruck, with a small bit of drool escaping from his open mouth. "Ho--wha---who---wh---HOW?!" he stuttered horribly as he stared at his newly resurrected student. Renshi winked enigmatically at Maiki before once again resuming his fighting pose. "Nice try, old man, but you'll have to do better than that to silence Renshi."

______________

Renshi places his hands in a postition that Maika notices right away. "Oh no can it be! No the 1000th element attack! IT CANT BE! Trees are being uprooted the soil it turning white the sky darkens with a sea of black. Renshi is summoning all the elements needed! With a great attack renshi blast the amazing force towards Maika. The ground in front of renshi is destroyed. BUT! Where is maika. "I guess it will take more then that to silence you renshi...but you still have more to learn!" "Your behing me again!?! But how!" "Like i said you have much much more to learn!"
______________________________
Even looking back on it, Renshi didn't know how he survived. Maika came from behind and leapt onto his back, weilding a newer, brighter blade, made of demon bone. It was large, blue, and sharp. Renshi, using the instinct born of his long training and boring repetition of drills, went into a tight forward somersault, designed to throw Maika off of his back and onto the ground. It didn't work, Maika only grabbed his hair and rolled with him, all the while weilding that fearsome blade. He performed his deadly dance of survival, trying to rid himself of the plague on his back, and once he had gotten him free, he simply ran.

______________________________

Maika didnt run after him...he knew that renshi would return after he relizes how great of a master Maika is. "He cant run for ever...I know that and he does...he needs much training if he feel he wants to become the next most respected person in the village" Soon enough renshi came back...but different...He had blood pouring down his face..on his close...his hair turned a pitch black formorly yellow. His head band broken in two lay in his hand..His panths torn to the knee with blood speckled all over. What has happened what has renshi become!
____________________
Of course, being the master that maika was, he knew after a second what had gone wrong with Renshi. But why? there was really no reason for him to open himself to the demon Gretlen and become possessed. Now there was really no way but death to clear his soul of Gretlen. With a sigh he began the motions for the expulsion of the demon from Renshi. Unfortunately, the spell required the life of the possessee...it was a price he had to pay.

____________________

But how could he...how could he kill his own son! Maika placed his hand upon renshi's chest and with a gasp.... With a great sound of an explosion renshi rips maika's arm off! Blood pours out onto the ground while maika stands in an almost dead state...renshi then takes out his blood plated iron dagger and crushes it into his fathers,trainers,Supporteds....Head...
___________________________
At that moment, the ground shook, and heavens opened, and the rain poured forth in a great upheaval of family. Renshi stood shaking, with his hand still pressed against his father's head, feeling so much smaller now that the demon had left his body...he didn't know where he was, or what he was doing, or why he was standing with his hand in his father's dead body. Suddenly he collapsed, and passed out. There would be a lot of uncomfortable question back home, he thought as he hit the ground.

___________________________

Renshi awoke with an imense ache in his head....He was sweating horribly...he woke up to see who? MAIKA?! "But...didnt you...d...d...di...die....?" "my son..what do you speak of? i beilive is was just an awful dream...you need your rest...please...go back to bed" Maika pulls the cover tight over renshis awfully tired body and walks a way with an almost bone chilling smile on his face...."Goodnight renshi."
___________________________
Renshi sat bolt upright with a horrid look on his already mangled, bloodied face. "Maika! Come back! Now!" He shouted, his voice becoming hoarse with fear and anger. Maika slowly came back into the room, this time with a thermometer and a cup of hot chocolate. "my son, you must rest. You've been asleep for three days, and you've still got a long road to recovery from this odd sickness. Go back to sleep, it will help matters." He slowly made his way to the bed, and waved his hand over Renshi's head, slowly enticing him into the realm of sleep...He thought no more.
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"Renshi renshi wake up...its Mayia....Come on renshi wake up...." "Whoa whoa whoa im awake chill out....""todays the big day renshi your advanced training lesson...of the ancient 1000th element.."Renshi looks at mayia beautifull face...and ponders...Renshi and mayia walk to their fathers house not so far away now being renshis house relocated for training....Renshi got to the house...but...what..happened!"Mayia The house! Where is it!?"
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"Oh my God. Mayia! This is terrible!" He shouted, his voice cracking with anxiety for his father's life. They ran into the rubble of the house, searching frantically for his father. They found his twisted body laying in his bedroom's remains, and he was breathing hard to stay alive. As Renshi knelt down to see how he was, he barely heard his last breath, and with it, his last words. "Son....Gretlen...Demon...avenge my death...he's in the bathroom...find him and use the thousand element attack, it's the only way to kill him..." With that, he witnessed his father's passing into the Dark Forest of the afterlife. He stood up, tears openly coursing down both cheeks, as he gritted his teeth and clenched his palms. He shouted out his battle cry; "GRETLEN! YOU WILL PAY FOR MY FATHER!!" With a scream he launched himself into the bathroom and looked for the demon.

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"Hello renshi, this is i...gretlen....so good to meet you""I will kill you and evenge my fathers death you low life!!""Mabey so renshi but not this time..."With a huge flash of blinding light renshi wakes up with a pool of sweat down his face."What again! who is this gretlen what does he want....?""I want you my son!!""What?! Who was that w...wh...where..who...are you...!" Renshi exclaims in a horrible voice!
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"Maika? is that you?" He found his voice to be weak again, and he was almost incapable of forming words with his mouth..."MAIKA?!" He opened his eyes on the same bathroom, to find Mayia gone, and Maika sitting placidly on the toilet, staring avidly at him. He idly noticed that there was something odd about Maika...something that was not normal. THAT was it! his eyes! his pupils, normally black, had gone white, and his eye, normally white and blue, had gone to black and red. He remembered thinking how spooky it was, before Maika flicked his fingers, and he was knocked forcefully back into his sleeping position. His eyes were somehow wrested shut, and he sat under the control of Maika, waiting to obey his every whim. "What now, Maika? You've won control...what do you want with me?"

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The Story

There was a story....


Young renshi wanted to become the most noble shinobi in town but he had to prove himself first. He couldnt just call himself the next gratest. He would endure test that were never accomplished but by one. The greatest Shinobi Alive. This will be young renshi's trainer...support manage....FATHER! To become the next shinobi the world would know renshi had to learn the 1000th element attack. The greatest attack combining all elemements of life...world...Everything in exsitense. This attack could devistate the world if not used wisley by the one...the only.........<!-- / message --><!-- sig -->

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Maika...The Master and renown teacher...only he could train Renshi thru all the difficult task and abilities he would need to attain his goal of greatest Shinobi.
But Maiki had not taken a student in many years...his life had been violent and his power deadly in its magnitude.Seeking seclusion from the world he had built a cabin for himself and lived miles away from town.Young Renshi was determined,however and walked the 10 miles to where Maiki lived and humbly presented himself.......
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Maiki chuckled softly to himself as he looked up the newcomer. "What do you mean by this, young one, coming to me for help?" He growled it at the boy as the boy stood there, clearly very afraid of him. Just as he should be, he thought to himself. Not to toot my own horn, or anything, but i am one commanding guy. "Please, master, I want to be like you. Can you teach me your ways?" The boy's voice was small, and thin, and it quavered on the last word, making him seem even more feeble. "Yes, i can teach you my ways. But the real question is, can you learn them?"

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Renshi answers harsly with confidence. Yes! I will and i can learn from you. I will dedicate my time to being the next greatest Shinobi. Renshi though did not understand what he was in for exactly. This year of training would be the hardest thing of his life!
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Maiki was slightly disquieted by this sudden show of confidence. He had guessed the child to be little over 15, but it seemed now that he had grown inches and years before his very eyes. "Very well. Show me what you can do, and I will know where to start my teaching. Do your worst." He spread his legs a little and slid into the comfortable fighting pose that he had come to know and love. He beckoned slowly with his index finger and prepared for the hardest fight of his life.

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With a sudden blast from renshi's palm a huge burst of energy fired directly at maiki. There was a sudden cloud of dust and no sign of maiki. From out of no where renshi is on his hands and knees with a ancient dagger at the back of his neck. "You have much to learn but that wasnt all that bad, You have potential...Here is where the training STARTS!
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Renshi slowly collapsed forward onto the ground face first, and died when he hit the ground. Maiki solemnly dusted his hands off, walked over to Renshi, and pulled the dagger out of his neck. Suddenly, Renshi rose from the ground and stood in front of Maiki, brushing his tunic and pants off, before turning around to face Maiki, who was standing awestruck, with a small bit of drool escaping from his open mouth. "Ho--wha---who---wh---HOW?!" he stuttered horribly as he stared at his newly resurrected student. Renshi winked enigmatically at Maiki before once again resuming his fighting pose. "Nice try, old man, but you'll have to do better than that to silence Renshi."

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Renshi places his hands in a postition that Maika notices right away. "Oh no can it be! No the 1000th element attack! IT CANT BE! Trees are being uprooted the soil it turning white the sky darkens with a sea of black. Renshi is summoning all the elements needed! With a great attack renshi blast the amazing force towards Maika. The ground in front of renshi is destroyed. BUT! Where is maika. "I guess it will take more then that to silence you renshi...but you still have more to learn!" "Your behing me again!?! But how!" "Like i said you have much much more to learn!"
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Even looking back on it, Renshi didn't know how he survived. Maika came from behind and leapt onto his back, weilding a newer, brighter blade, made of demon bone. It was large, blue, and sharp. Renshi, using the instinct born of his long training and boring repetition of drills, went into a tight forward somersault, designed to throw Maika off of his back and onto the ground. It didn't work, Maika only grabbed his hair and rolled with him, all the while weilding that fearsome blade. He performed his deadly dance of survival, trying to rid himself of the plague on his back, and once he had gotten him free, he simply ran.

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Maika didnt run after him...he knew that renshi would return after he relizes how great of a master Maika is. "He cant run for ever...I know that and he does...he needs much training if he feel he wants to become the next most respected person in the village" Soon enough renshi came back...but different...He had blood pouring down his face..on his close...his hair turned a pitch black formorly yellow. His head band broken in two lay in his hand..His panths torn to the knee with blood speckled all over. What has happened what has renshi become!
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Of course, being the master that maika was, he knew after a second what had gone wrong with Renshi. But why? there was really no reason for him to open himself to the demon Gretlen and become possessed. Now there was really no way but death to clear his soul of Gretlen. With a sigh he began the motions for the expulsion of the demon from Renshi. Unfortunately, the spell required the life of the possessee...it was a price he had to pay.

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But how could he...how could he kill his own son! Maika placed his hand upon renshi's chest and with a gasp.... With a great sound of an explosion renshi rips maika's arm off! Blood pours out onto the ground while maika stands in an almost dead state...renshi then takes out his blood plated iron dagger and crushes it into his fathers,trainers,Supporteds....Head...
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At that moment, the ground shook, and heavens opened, and the rain poured forth in a great upheaval of family. Renshi stood shaking, with his hand still pressed against his father's head, feeling so much smaller now that the demon had left his body...he didn't know where he was, or what he was doing, or why he was standing with his hand in his father's dead body. Suddenly he collapsed, and passed out. There would be a lot of uncomfortable question back home, he thought as he hit the ground.

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Renshi awoke with an imense ache in his head....He was sweating horribly...he woke up to see who? MAIKA?! "But...didnt you...d...d...di...die....?" "my son..what do you speak of? i beilive is was just an awful dream...you need your rest...please...go back to bed" Maika pulls the cover tight over renshis awfully tired body and walks a way with an almost bone chilling smile on his face...."Goodnight renshi."
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Renshi sat bolt upright with a horrid look on his already mangled, bloodied face. "Maika! Come back! Now!" He shouted, his voice becoming hoarse with fear and anger. Maika slowly came back into the room, this time with a thermometer and a cup of hot chocolate. "my son, you must rest. You've been asleep for three days, and you've still got a long road to recovery from this odd sickness. Go back to sleep, it will help matters." He slowly made his way to the bed, and waved his hand over Renshi's head, slowly enticing him into the realm of sleep...He thought no more.
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"Renshi renshi wake up...its Mayia....Come on renshi wake up...." "Whoa whoa whoa im awake chill out....""todays the big day renshi your advanced training lesson...of the ancient 1000th element.."Renshi looks at mayia beautifull face...and ponders...Renshi and mayia walk to their fathers house not so far away now being renshis house relocated for training....Renshi got to the house...but...what..happened!"Mayia The house! Where is it!?"
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"Oh my God. Mayia! This is terrible!" He shouted, his voice cracking with anxiety for his father's life. They ran into the rubble of the house, searching frantically for his father. They found his twisted body laying in his bedroom's remains, and he was breathing hard to stay alive. As Renshi knelt down to see how he was, he barely heard his last breath, and with it, his last words. "Son....Gretlen...Demon...avenge my death...he's in the bathroom...find him and use the thousand element attack, it's the only way to kill him..." With that, he witnessed his father's passing into the Dark Forest of the afterlife. He stood up, tears openly coursing down both cheeks, as he gritted his teeth and clenched his palms. He shouted out his battle cry; "GRETLEN! YOU WILL PAY FOR MY FATHER!!" With a scream he launched himself into the bathroom and looked for the demon.

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"Hello renshi, this is i...gretlen....so good to meet you""I will kill you and evenge my fathers death you low life!!""Mabey so renshi but not this time..."With a huge flash of blinding light renshi wakes up with a pool of sweat down his face."What again! who is this gretlen what does he want....?""I want you my son!!""What?! Who was that w...wh...where..who...are you...!" Renshi exclaims in a horrible voice!
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"Maika? is that you?" He found his voice to be weak again, and he was almost incapable of forming words with his mouth..."MAIKA?!" He opened his eyes on the same bathroom, to find Mayia gone, and Maika sitting placidly on the toilet, staring avidly at him. He idly noticed that there was something odd about Maika...something that was not normal. THAT was it! his eyes! his pupils, normally black, had gone white, and his eye, normally white and blue, had gone to black and red. He remembered thinking how spooky it was, before Maika flicked his fingers, and he was knocked forcefully back into his sleeping position. His eyes were somehow wrested shut, and he sat under the control of Maika, waiting to obey his every whim. "What now, Maika? You've won control...what do you want with me?"

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"Haha what do i want from you!? ha...you have on thing that i need from you and thats just for a bit you little brat.""Take it take it what ever you need i dont care!""Ha you would have if you listened first...ha i want your body! i need to reside in someones body always but i am pushed out at the slaying of another human...what i need is you to accept your whole body to me....or..your little friend here will meet my fury!""What! NO!!! mayia! You will fall at my feet you irigant asshole! You will feel my rath!" As renshi brakes the spell placed upon him by maika he suddenly opens his eyes ready for battle.