RAP-BAttles

**Shellz** · 10-22-2005, 10:59 AM

okay i seen over at gfxsector they have one so i decided to make 1 so sum1 post and ill holla back at them..or just post if u want me to go first

Rules:

Only Your Rhymes
No Stupid Shit
No Other Artist's Rhymes
No Copy And Pasting From Sites

**In[F]ec[T]eD** · 10-22-2005, 11:44 AM

oh no... go first before Hector is forced to choke a b!tch

**xDBD** · 10-22-2005, 11:49 AM

Not one to flow myself, but check out Immortal Technique - the Silenced Revolution. It's basically a collection of battles and freestyles by one of the illest out. It'd be fairly easy to get on SLSK.

**DaCougarMech** · 10-22-2005, 01:14 PM

uh uh uh yea
ill take on any sex or any race
when i rap im gonna come up into your face
mind to the eye
watch out! oops pow surprise!

(if you didnt figure it out already, that was a horribly butchered version of an already deformed rap from the chappelle show. OOPS POW SURPRISE!)

**SDSnyper** · 10-22-2005, 01:20 PM

check it out yo, its snype ya dont want no beef wit me or ill cap yo *** leave yo *** in the past, slice u n half fasta then ur *** can say fast.. f*ck yo b*tch all night long make her scream she licked my d*ck up n down, like it was corn on the cob. P*ss on yo grave spray dat shit wit round up! ya homies wont come round no more cause dey will be scared Ill snype dere @$$ if i see em dey run taken dere b*tches wit em yo cause dey know ill f*ck any pu$$y dat comes my way Yo whitey just stuck back PEACE!

**DaCougarMech** · 10-22-2005, 01:28 PM

ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

**In[F]ec[T]eD** · 10-22-2005, 01:41 PM

that was very..inspiring

**pyrocrow** · 10-22-2005, 02:46 PM

pyrocrow! WHO? pyrocrow! WHO? pyrocrow! WHO? pyrocrow! WHO? pyrocrow! WHO? pyrocrow! WHO? pyrocrow! WHO? pyrocrow! WHO? pyrocrow! WHO? pyrocrow! WHO? pyrocrow! WHO? pyrocrow! WHO?

If you didn't notice, that was me as the crappy mike jones.

**SDSnyper** · 10-22-2005, 03:08 PM

These ideas, are nightmares to white parents whos worst fear is a child with died hair and who like earrings, whatever they say has no bearing its so scary in a house that allows , No swearing, hes so scared he walks around with his headphones blaring, hes cold alone in his own world hes a problem child, what all bothers him comes out when he talks about his f*ckin father walkin out,
hes mad so hes talkin back, talkin black, saggin his pants

his step father hit him so he.. socked him back and broke his nose his house is a broken home, no control he just lets him emotions go..

entertainment is changing, enttwinin with gangastas in the land of the killas
a sinners mind is a sanctum.. holy or unholy, only got 1 homie, only this gun. everyone just feels like they can relate, words are a mother f*cker words can be great, or they can teach hate, these kids hang on every statement we make

like they worship us then all the sh*t goes platnum how the F8Ck did this happen ? standin on corners and porches just rappin, but the media cruicifys you, want to make u out to be a loose cannon they want u to lose ur mind every time ur mad, they want ya to lose every dime ya have all the kids who listen to me constantly, so im signing cds while police finger print me, if my music is literal then im a criminal, how the F*CK can i raise a little girl? i couldnd , i wouldnd be fit to.. you full of shit too guererra .. that was a fist that hit you!

They say music can alter moves and talk to you, but can it load a gun and **** to it? next u assault a dude tell the judge it was my fault and ill get sued! thats why we sing for these kids who aint got a thing cept a dream and a rap magazine who sit at night hopin they die, tiill they throw on a rap record and sit and vibe, idolize there favorite rappers and know all there songs, nothin to do cept sit and look shit in its eyes, that why we sieze the moment and they'll let us live on in our lyrics that they hear in our songs.

sing with me, sing for the moment, sing for laughter sing for the tears sing with me, just for today, maybe tomorrow, the good lord will take you awaaaay..............-Eminem

**nujabes** · 10-22-2005, 03:15 PM

Originally Posted by pyrocrow

pyrocrow! WHO? pyrocrow! WHO? pyrocrow! WHO? pyrocrow! WHO? pyrocrow! WHO? pyrocrow! WHO? pyrocrow! WHO? pyrocrow! WHO? pyrocrow! WHO? pyrocrow! WHO? pyrocrow! WHO? pyrocrow! WHO?

If you didn't notice, that was me as the crappy mike jones.

more like a good mike jones

**Shellz** · 10-22-2005, 04:20 PM

Plz Stop Posting Junk And Other Artist's Lyric's as i will ask an admin to warn you for spam...

I Murder Beats/Earned Enuff Respect In These Streets/Gunna Do This Acapella/Eat Chu Fools Like mozzarella/In This Game They Compare Me To Godzilla/Heat That Water Up Put the Coke ANd Bakin Soda/My Product Make The Fiends Foam/Get Crunked Smoke The Skunk/Now It's Time To Hit The Bunk/

**Warslut** · 10-22-2005, 04:25 PM

Start contributing, or I start warning.

**Shellz** · 10-25-2005, 10:54 AM

jus posted this on gfxsector 2 bcuz i wanna see how many people can respond to it i dont think n e 1 else freestyles on this fourms but oh well one more chance.

Ight Ima Do This Again lol...

Ight Ya Mans My Fan
Remeber when i pulled out that duece duece and u ran?
I remember u jumpin into ur moms van
thats kinda sad
Y'all make me mad
Ima White Boy Straight Good's
i hussle them pure white good's (OH SNAP RHYMED THE SAME WORD)
Yall Needa Stop Smokin Dem Chon
You know im tha don
I pull massive cons
They Call Me young Immortal
im unstopable to the game
i dont feel pain
yall Lame
now ima leave u in Shame.

**xDBD** · 10-25-2005, 11:04 AM

>Heat That Water Up Put the Coke ANd Bakin Soda

Dude, unless you're a huge dealer or an addict(and I can tell you aren't) you just lost all credibility. It's not cool to rap about things you have absolutely no experience with. With the stereotypes surrounding crack cocaine, and the obvious paradox that is yourself..

Yeah, this is outside of Flame Wars but you TOTALLY set yourself up for it. That's my critique on your rhymes; empty and poseur-esque.

**Shellz** · 10-25-2005, 11:12 AM

how would u know what i have and havent done? can u tell me that? you dont know so plz dont flame but thx fer the criticizem lol

**xDBD** · 10-25-2005, 11:16 AM

Part of being a solid artist is accepting criticism. All of being respected is being yourself and writing about what you know.

You're barely a teenager and you claim you're white and in the Bloods. I'm saying this as a fan of music: I don't want to hear a prepubescant white boy in the "Bloods" rapping about crack cocaine.

And I honestly say this with absolutely no intention to **** you off or flame you. If you aren't being a total poser by making statementslike that, let the fool be me. If you talk that trash to real heads(Particularly IRL) that know better it will be quite embarassing.

And again, seriously, just to clarify.. i'm just critiquing based on what he's posted on the past and my personal taste in music. It is in no way a flame or a personal attack on himself. This is, after all, a rap battle thread. Label me a hater if you must, but i'm just being honest.

**Warslut** · 10-25-2005, 11:28 AM

xDBD stop trying to sound like a smart *** and going off topic.

**xDBD** · 10-25-2005, 11:33 AM

Just go on and permaban me. Seriously, i'm asking for it hulk. A smartass? I'm critiquing a damned rap. You suck as a mod. A DIRECT insult on a mod. There's your justification.

Govern on, supercop

**Warslut** · 10-25-2005, 11:42 AM

Small talk, not flame wars, get your shit together. Well not quite flaming, but you're getting way off topic. Accept for that last bit, very nice.

**trickalick** · 10-25-2005, 12:58 PM

Originally Posted by YoungImmortal

Plz Stop Posting Junk And Other Artist's Lyric's as i will ask an admin to warn you for spam...

I Murder Beats/Earned Enuff Respect In These Streets/Gunna Do This Acapella/Eat Chu Fools Like mozzarella/In This Game They Compare Me To Godzilla/Heat That Water Up Put the Coke ANd Bakin Soda/My Product Make The Fiends Foam/Get Crunked Smoke The Skunk/Now It's Time To Hit The Bunk/

Hello suburbia, my name is civility
I'd like you to meet my friend irrationality & sodomy
We extinguish blue-collars & exercise malpractice during a lobotomy
I was unaware us fools are considered mozarella
And didn't know that text battles needed to distinguish that it was acapella
I am also prone to making my own CoCa Cola with baking soda
And I also have a bunkbed, so maybe you can come and sleep over