SBA- careful not to use up that style too much, it'll get old quickly.
Cherryqueen- The top one is definitly too multitonal and to be honest, get some different brushes. It's boring. Make a multi-pixel border in more than just the corners. And blend the render a bit more. 3/10
The bottom one- I see you got new brushes. You did a good job creating depth, but stick to not so contrasting brushes. It's like the foreground and the background have two very different brushing styles. Feel free to take out the tech brush. Again, get a new kind of border and blend the render. Also with the render, sitck it on a layer above color balance and hue, and blend it more.
LOD-The top--The border is the only thing going for it. The render is too overblended and the text is difficult to read. 2/10
-The middle--The text is slightly better. Download new fonts and brushes, they're very generic. I don't know wtf you do to your render, but don't allow brushing to show over it. Raise the opacity or don't blend so much or something. Make it stand out more. And use more colors. 3/10
-The Manip-- Over-saturated and over-contrasted. It's a bit bright and monotonal, which I don't understand, because the original picture made it easy to manipulate multiple colors. The border is a bit too obnoxious.
-The bottom one--The text is slightly better. Download new fonts and brushes, they're very generic. I don't know wtf you do to your render, but don't allow brushing to show over it. Raise the opacity or don't blend so much or something. Make it stand out more. And use more colors. 3/10 (yes I copied and pasted, they're all about the same)
Bigdeath- I dig the pixel strecth. And the background and animation are decent. The border is cool. But the render is overblended and needs to stand out more from the background.
Holy hell that's a lot of rating.
Edit to rate the new guys post:
-top one--Too much generic text, the background is too liquified (is that liquify, 'cuz it looks like it) Try to blend the render and add a border. 2/10 It doesn't require much effort.
-Second one-- Too monotonal, the border is weak, and the render needs blending. It's also a little dark. 1/10
-Third one--Blend the render, add a border, and quit going to 100 on the saturation and contrast. The animation is the only thing going for this sig. 3/10
-the 3 CS--Get a more defined background, and find a color scheme. Quit with the generic subtext and completely fade the animation. And please, blend the render. 2/10 on all of them.
-Vash-- umm. I don't want to hurt your feelings on this, but...Keep the gun in the color scheme, and seriously, don't drag the bar all the way on saturation and contrast. It's a queer size and it needs a border. Don't blur the brushing together, leave it defined. 1/10
-Slash--Is there a render in that thing? You're getting better at manipulating colors, but the text and the bg still suck. 3/10
-Offspring--What is the supposed to be used for? That's a very random size. And quit liquifing it. I know it is on this, because I see the twirl. The text is bad, and I don't like how the render sits like that. Plus again with the sat, and con. 1/10
-The one below offspring-- Finally a color scheme!!!! but the same stuff aplies out with the bg, the sat/con, and the text. 4/10
-2nd naruto sig--ooh, butterfly brushes. Neat. Don't text over the render soo big and obvious. Blend the render still, and a good job with the sat/con (finally) 6/10
-banner--Did you bevel the entire thing???! The text is a bit better, though it cover one of the renders. And when blending the render, leave the opac at 100% and just use a vector mask. Good use of stroke?
-2nd from bottom--The render should all stand out in this, not just the globe. At least use finally have some brush definition. It needs a border and the text is slightly obnoxious.
-The last one--Definitly your best one, the brushing is pretty good. But the render is too small, and the border is weak. Otherwise gj. 7/10
An example of what I mean by defined background. (not liquified) Like look at my sig's background, I don't mean to brag, but that's good.
40 mintues on one ****ing post!!!!
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