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    Default Poem: Why I cry

    Why I cry

    I have to cry my fears away
    Wash away the hurts for today
    Let them tumble, Let them roll
    That rain that cools my heated soul
    I have to cry to heal the pain
    Cuz if i don't i'll go insane
    The tears chase away my evil dreams
    And turns out all my silent screams
    I have to cry so i can hide
    Dcrease the fears i've amplified
    Uproot my snake-like sins so twisted
    To leave the fire dead; unlisted
    I have to cry for me to live
    Despite the horrors left to give
    Destroying my agony i anticipate
    For one more breath above my fate
    I do not wish to live.

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    They're alright...... emo sucks.

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    Ok, im going to drag you into a corner and slit your wrists FOR you. ^_^



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    Just because i wrote that poem does not make me emo...in any way..other then what people think...so oh well... lifes a b*tch, then you die, find me a knife, and we'll fly it right.

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    "To leave the fire dead; unlisted
    I have to cry for me to live
    Despite the horrors left to give
    Destroying my agony i anticipate
    For one more breath above my fate
    I do not wish to live."

    Woe is ye.



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    So..its not like people really pay attention to poems on this site anyway..Or Do they? Does everyone think im emo..

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    If they don't pay attention, why post it?



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    yes everyone thinks you're emo.

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    Hmmmm...is this a plagerism case?

    You can run....but you'll just die tired.
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    Some people write depressive things in order to fight depressive feelings. They vent these feelings onto paper and it remains on the paper rather than lingering in their mind. I happen to enjoy poetry myself and write some when motivation strikes and mine tend to be rather depressing at times. You have to face it though that most highschool students are going to write depressive and angsty poetry. Some of them will attempt a love poem that usually ends up being complete garbage that they wrote for a girlfriend though.

    "I'm not a geek, I'm just coolness challenged."

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    Depressing...Emo...

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    I like it, good job with that man. Whether you wrote it for this reason or not, I too feel better after I write my problems down and how I feel about them. Decent poem.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Irrelevant
    Depressing...Emo...
    I concur.

    You can run....but you'll just die tired.
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