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  1. 07-20-2006, 04:27 PM #1
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    Heres a poem I made, or better yet a rhyme heh ENJOY!\

    Old Man Dead At Opera

    The light of the morning
    Old man snoring
    Yet the dream was mourning
    Pain was searing
    As the end was nearing
    Through it all was a clearing,
    Like a peering
    Many family fearing
    The ugly face of death rearing
    Thinking before the hearing
    The fat lady singing.
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  2. 07-20-2006, 05:04 PM #2
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    lol not bad, kinda sounds like a continuation to 'its raining its pouring to me'
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  3. 07-20-2006, 10:50 PM #3
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    For you guys who don't understand the poem, he died at the opera listining to some fat ass.
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  4. 07-21-2006, 12:28 AM #4
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    Heh, not bad. 7/10

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