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    Exclamation Poem: He Stood



    He stood up tall and proud, yet the sorrow still remained
    He thought that his emotions died, he was wrong yet again
    It wasn’t his path to follow, yet here he is today
    War has claimed what was left of humanity, trapping him in his cage

    He was a good man, and he had a family back home
    But war killed the warmth inside and now he feels alone
    What friends he made were just like him, cold and bare
    He wished that he could still feel; mourn them when they weren’t there

    But no, it can’t happen, war has killed those pains
    I guess you would think he’s happy, well think again
    Would you rather be a living stone in a world full of life?
    Or would you rather take the pain, knowing someday it would be alright?

    He stood up, and his eyes were clouded with pain
    He thought that he’d felt hurt, he was wrong yet again
    It just wasn’t his path to follow, but he’s still here today
    War claimed that piece of humanity, trapping him inside this cage

    Iron bars that smell of carcass and gun powder
    He screams for release, every second he gets louder
    Yet the sound of grenades and the cries of pain from soldiers around him
    Cut off all his screams, still trapped in that cage from within

    He’s the only one in the trench that he was placed in hours ago
    He keeps on shooting through the smoke for it’s the only thing he knows
    He hears the cries of battle, another soldier dead
    Another soldier never going home, will this war never end?

    He stood up and his eyes were filled with tears
    His heart beat grew faster and he was drowning in his fears
    It’s not that he wasn’t strong enough; it just wasn’t his path to take
    He was supposed to be a free man, not a bird trapped inside its cage

    He stood up and he walked over a wall that he’d never climbed
    He’d watch others fall while he was safe inside
    And he walked into the middle of the smoke and stood
    A man in battle of wills doing the only thing he could

    He got out of his cage and let all his burdens go…

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    nice poem!! i give it a 10/10!

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    told ya they would like it...

    9/10 btw, rly good.

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    Haha, thank schmidz, glad you liked it and glad you liked it, too Darkemperor121.

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