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    Default Poem: Another Newspaper Clipping

    I wish I was younger, not bothered by the world
    Just one more naive child, an ignorant little girl
    What would have happened if I never knew of war?
    Never learned of death, and never knew what we're fighting for?

    Would this world be a better place if there was only peace?
    Where everyone got along, and everyone agreed?
    Or does there need to be a battle to make the truth be known?
    For justice to be won, for honor within your home?

    It's another newspaper clipping, another story about a life
    A life that is now lost through the bombings in the night
    It's just another newspaper clipping, a story of a child lost
    The story of the dying parents, losing the only child that they've got


    It's another newspaper clipping


    I remember the day it happened, the day of nine eleven
    The day when so many innocent souls departed and went to heaven
    Was there enough room in heaven for all those souls?
    Or was heaven full, and they had no place left to go?

    Would this world be better if humans were never born
    If Adam and Eve had never broken the promise they swore?
    Would this world be better if nobody knew of war?
    If they actually knew the reason that they were fighting for?

    It's another newspaper clipping, another story about a life
    A life that is now lost through the bombings in the night
    It's just another newspaper clipping, a story of a child lost
    The story of the dying parents, losing the only child they got


    It's another newspaper clipping


    Another newspaper clipping tells the story of her death
    The story of an innocent, breathing her last breath
    Another newspaper clipping breaks the heart of a family's hope
    Telling them that their son is dead, and he won't be coming home


    It's another newspaper clipping, another story about a life

    A life that should still exist, still knowing everything's alright
    It's another newspaper clipping, the story about a child lost
    And the parents dying for her, knowing that her life has stopped...

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    Humm, I must think on this one. Good job. Have you posted this in other places? It sound familer.

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    Um, I've posted this at AllPoetry.com and I'm Cr187 over there, too. So maybe you've read it there? I dunno, lol.

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    Awesome, a fellow Allpoet.

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    Nice nice nice... i like the part where you said
    Quote Originally Posted by Cr187
    I wish I was younger, not bothered by the world

    Just one more naive child, an ignorant little girl
    Freshmen...

    Did u want rating?

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    Quote Originally Posted by schmidz
    Nice nice nice... i like the part where you said

    Freshmen...

    Did u want rating?
    Thanks and sure.

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    nicely done that is a good poem im not very good with literature and writing ,yu did a great job

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    youre a very good writer :)

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    yea the one she wrote on 9/11 was a great one also i wish i were that talented

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