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    A Noob in your Darkness Pamela's Avatar
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    If Tears Built A Stairway

    If love could make a ladder
    And mourning string a rope
    I’d climb it up above the clouds
    Just to give you hope.

    If pain could be a parachute
    To keep me from the fall
    I’d float all day beneath the sun
    Just to hear your sweet voice call.

    If family could make a life raft
    A dinghy or a boat
    I’d row all day against the current
    To hear words come from your throat.

    If hearts could link a chain
    That never came to end
    I’d drag it by the foot forever
    To see your face around the bend.

    If faith could move a mountain
    And hope could chop a tree
    I’d cut down forests and move the Rockies
    If I could have you here with me.

    If peace could ford a river
    And joy could map the seas
    I’d travel the world countless times over
    To fall before you on my knees.

    If smiles could shift the clouds
    And laughter could stop the rain
    I’d smile and laugh till it hurt my mouth
    If I could again make myself sane.

    If tears could build a stairway
    And cries could shape a lane
    I’d follow that road to the end of time

    Where we’d all be happy again.


    I did not write this,but admired the work.It is from a forum member asking me to evealuate his style.
    He did a splended job.I leave the honor to him to reveal who is the author...If not I will keep that to myself.
    Last edited by Pamela; 11-20-2006 at 10:43 AM.


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    aaaaaawwwww so sweet
    /sniffles

    really nice, I like it

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    EMO!!!!
    lol, jk

    GG poem. GG.

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    Hmmm...I would very much like to know who wrote this. Please, come forward.

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    nice poem i wonder who wrote it...

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    i do like this iv heard it somewhere before..not exaclty but a short verse that was very similar i would like to know who wrote this also

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    Good work.

    I think i know who wrote this, but I am not going to say who, just in case Im right.

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    wow thats better than i could ever do.

    can i be ur cat?
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