She Was

**Cr187** · 12-23-2006, 02:04 PM

She was a prodigy
the day she
was born
Her soul was free,
nobody could see,
a future forlorn

Her mother's tears,
her father's fears,
they didn't exist
Her perfect smile,
that glorious child,
would soon be missed

I'm so sorry,
forgive me,
I was just too late
That child's gone,
she won't be home,
a twisted fate
Your angel's flown,
her wings have grown,
she had to die
A twisted fate,
and my heart aches,
to say good-bye

She was the first one lost,
a damaging cost,
to pay
I wish I could go back,
do all I should have,
that day

But she's already gone,
and I'm crying alone,
at her grave
Her eyes haunt me,
an endless sea,
to brave

I'm so sorry,
forgive me,
I was just too late
That child's gone,
she won't be home,
a twisted fate
Your angel's flown,
her wings have grown,
she had to die
A twisted fate,
and my heart aches,
to say good-bye

Your angel's gone,
she's not coming home,
plese don't cry
It's not your fault
that the child was lost,
it's all mine

I wish I could go back,
do all I should have,
what a twisted fate
She's already gone,
and it's all my fault,
I was just too late

I'm so sorry forgive me,
I was just too late
That child's gone,
she won't be home,
a twisted fate
Your angel's flown,
her wings have grown,
she had to die
A twisted fate,
and my heart aches,
to say good-bye

She was a prodigy
the day she,
was born
Her soul was free,
nobody could see,
a future forlorn

Her mother's tears,
her father's fears,
they didn't exist
Her perfect smile,
that glorious child,
would soon be missed

She was----

**Pamela** · 12-23-2006, 02:17 PM

Very nice.
Might I ask if this poem was a product of real life experiences?
Either way it is haunting and emotional. A very good work indeed sir,please keep posting them.

**eskimo** · 12-23-2006, 02:22 PM

very good i give it a 9/10 it seem's very deep.

**Cr187** · 12-24-2006, 02:10 AM

Originally Posted by Pamela

Very nice.
Might I ask if this poem was a product of real life experiences?
Either way it is haunting and emotional. A very good work indeed sir,please keep posting them.

Thanks, but no, it was just an idea I had for a song. I'm a girl by the way, lol.

Originally Posted by eskimo

very good i give it a 9/10 it seem's very deep.

Thanks, I'm glad you thought it was deep and that it was good enough to score that high, lol.