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    Fall Apart


    If my dreams were ever lost
    Along the battles we have fought
    I ask of you to search the skies
    So as not to let it pass you by

    When a dreamers heart grows cold
    From jealously and thoughts untold
    None shall know her secret heart
    And all those dreams just fall apart...

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    nice poem man
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    Quote Originally Posted by boces View Post
    nice poem man

    Thanks!

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    It speaks of pain to me...again well written and delivered...keep up the good poetry...you have talent.


    A Light in your Darkness...always there...and burning...

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