Rain

[Frai7ty]

I'm not so sure about this one. I wrote it as it came to me, so it may not flow well.

Rain
Holding my soul inside.
I sit in the rain
and do noting but cry
and wait for her grace.

She woke me once
lost in that winter so deep.
Where is she now
have I finally pushed her away.

I am a fool.
For moving to fast
and pushing to hard
but I will stay.

I sit in the rain
prying for her
so she may love
once again... anyone.

I need her to be happy.
Even if I am not.
Her smile wake's my soul.
Even if it is for another....

[Pamela]

It is a good poem simply because of the impact of the emotions it evokes.
I see longing and pain,but also love and hope.It speaks not only of where your heart is,but why.Very nice.

I am pretty sure I have posted my published poems,but if you would like I can re-post some.

[Frai7ty]

It's not my favorite, but It is how I feel.

[Pamela]

Still a good work and expression of your thoughts and feelings.