Offering help on Analytical Papers

[hellsing293]

Having to write many analytical papers, I have learned many mistakes common in writing on of these papers. For homework, almost every other day (block scheduling), I have one of these types of papers due.

I'm offering help to anyone who isn't good at writing analytical papers on literature. I'm not going to write it for you (I'm not offering this to be abused), but give you suggestions etc. By posting your paper, I could also find typos that the writer ussually doesn't find (it happens to all of us).

I'm more going to help you with paragraph and sentence structure. The basis of a powerful paper starts with structure. Hopefully, after helping enough people this thread will be a collection of knowledge of how to write good analytical papers.

This thread is to offered help, not to have your homework done for you. Also, if you get a bad grade it is not my fault and I don't care if you come and whine to me.

Rules of the thread:


1) Post your paper you need help on.

A)
Try have possible questions in mind or something your not sure on. Or if you want help in general, I'll see what I can tell you.

B)
Accept criticism. If you don't want my opinion, then don't ask. We can confer, even go as far as argue over a point. Just don't get out of hand and flame me over my opinions on your work.

C)
You can either upload the attach or post the paper onto the site. I would prefer the latter but either is fine. I know the formatting on this site sometimes messes up the format from MS word when copy/pasting it but that's ok.


2) Post the "finished" product.

A)
Show us what you did to edit your paper. If you want to, tell us the grade you got on the paper after you turned it in.


3) Responsibility

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I'm doing this out of charity. Don't post this a night before its due and hope I get back to you. Maybe a few days and I'll almost definantly help you out.

B)
I know we have quite a few intelligent members on this site. Feel free to also give your feedback as long its constructive and not plain flaming or telling somebody how much they suck at writing.