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    Default Rhymes!

    For English class, I was asked to write a poem that was a minimum of 25 lines. The poem had to include at least 20 internal rhymes as well.

    Real Poets Don’t Rhyme!


    “Is it a crime not to rhyme?!” I chime,
    “The poem I design should be mine”
    Rhymes are bound to be found,
    But why make them partake?
    I say, do not make my poetic ideas decay,
    Because they don’t rhyme!

    I scream to let off steam,
    “Why me” I decree.
    I felt an unfair hand I was dealt.
    Now I must fight to merely write,
    And find a word that rhymes with absurd.
    It’s way too hard to rhyme!

    That’s it, I quit,
    Thoughts will no longer be distraught.
    My mind is free to make a spree,
    And dispose of poems that I wish to compose.
    Without a doubt, many ideas I can write about,
    I pray new ideas not sway astray.
    Poets don’t need rhymes!

    Wait, it may not be too late,
    Can I save my poem from an early grave?
    Oh no! Say it isn’t so,
    How could I predict that I would be tricked?
    This entire time, my poem has been one big rhyme.
    Rhymes…you can’t get away!
    As long as darkness flows through my veins, I will never cease, As long as my dreams still haunt me, I will never show mercy, and as long as evil lives I will never die.....


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    nice. i enjoyed the ryming scheme, but it seemed really bouncy, and started to give me a headache. otherwise, good job

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