Alright, this is a character template that I am currently using in another Rp, I was wishing to show this character as an example towards you, and see what you think of him. This is set in a FFVIII world, just to let you know.

Name-Raziel Haven
Age-19
Gender-male
Weapon- Raziel uses a specialized lance, to be of easier use and carry. The lance has a function that collapses the lance into a simple carry-on form that attaches to his belt. When fully extended, the shaft locks in place, allowing Raziel to use it without worrying about the lance collapsing inward. The shaft is made of a black metal, and the head of the lance is made of steel, with silver edges. The end of the lance has a short, red cord, from where his family heirloom, a simple symbol of his surname, hangs from.
Personality- Raziel, having lived alone as an orphan, Raziel is socially akward. Having little friends, not from lack of popularity but a lack of nerves. Having lived in an orphanage his whole life, being rejected by families and other children, Raziel grew knowing not to expect much from others. Loyal, friendly when spoken to, and lonely, Raziel has entered Balamb Garden in an attempt to find a friend.
Appearance- Standing at 5'11 inches, Raziel has a lean build, and is of moderate weight. Having wavy, messy brown hair, glasses, and brilliant colored blue eyes. Raziel, unfortunately, has burn scars around his left eye, the left side of his neck, colar bone, left shoulder, and down his left arm. This was caused by a fire that he survived during his youth, and the scars are the main reason as to why he was never adopted. These scars cause him pain from now and then, which is the cause of his unusual dress attire.
Dress-Wearing open necked shirts, Raziel prefers wearing no clothes that rest upon the scars, especially the ones on his neck. Usually, if he has to, he'll rip the left sleeve off the shirt, and stitch it up so that the shirt closes around his ribcage, leaving his arm free.
History-Having survived a fire when he was seven, Raziel has no memories of his past. Living in the orphanage the remainder of his youth, Raziel is determined to leave the place that prisoned him in his youth. Having passed the written exam of the SeeD exam, Raziel prepares for the Field Exam. From an early age, Seton, his companion, has been with him, having rescued him from the fire.
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GF Name-Seton
GF Appearance- A huge, beautiful phoenix, Seton has a wing span of over ten feet, Seton arrives in a flash of red, gold and fire whenever summoned.
GF Powers-
Rebirth- An aura surrounds Raziel, giving him the gift to heal any injury that an ally has suffered. The greater the injury, though, the more the sacrifice Raziel must take, having to use his own life energy as the resource.
Resurrect- Seton arrives in a flash of fire, warding any attack from Raziel. Protecting Raziel, Seton leaves in a flash of fire, preventing the attacker from crossing the flames to reach Raziel
GF Magic- Seton bestows life and fire magic onto Raziel, allowing him to be able to cure any minor injury, as well as conjure up basic fire spells.