09-21-2004, 09:29 AM
Plz allow me to edit for gramatical mistakes....
Green acres is flew across, when he relized it grew into a big (pile of crap inside my left testicle bouncing around with my boob) can/pile. Reptromiki complained, "Jeez u people r retards."now that it
^^ origional
Green Acres(lets make grren acres a person) is flew across (adding two words to make it make sense) the town, when he realized it (the town) was growing (changed into changing) into a big pile (of what? I'm adding two words to have it make sense). Reptromiki complained, "Jeez u people r retards." (removed, irrelivant to story line) now that it
^^ What i edited
New version
Green Acres flew across the town, when he realized the town was growing into a big pile of mud. now that it
use w/e version you want, but plz pick mine, its so much nicer, and easily read
Green acres is flew across, when he relized it grew into a big (pile of crap inside my left testicle bouncing around with my boob) can/pile. Reptromiki complained, "Jeez u people r retards."now that it
^^ origional
Green Acres(lets make grren acres a person) is flew across (adding two words to make it make sense) the town, when he realized it (the town) was growing (changed into changing) into a big pile (of what? I'm adding two words to have it make sense). Reptromiki complained, "Jeez u people r retards." (removed, irrelivant to story line) now that it
^^ What i edited
New version
Green Acres flew across the town, when he realized the town was growing into a big pile of mud. now that it
use w/e version you want, but plz pick mine, its so much nicer, and easily read