01-16-2005, 04:23 AM
well is this one any better
[size=2]Mark and Daniel are best friends. They do everything together, they steal, rob houses, torment people, and they like to abuse animals. Poor Mrs. Hampton, her cat “Bubbles” was found gutted while hanging from a tree. Mr. Zamora’s dog “Bear” was hit by their truck intentionally. Mark and Daniel opened Mr. Zamora’s gate and let Bear out. They put food in the middle of the street and ran him over. Katie’s potbelly pig “Ed” was cooked and eaten by Mark and Daniel. They put on masks and snuck in her yard and took Ed. Mark and Daniel videotaped them slaughtering and cooking Ed. They sent the tape to Katie. Poor Katie was leaving for college in the fall, now she doesn’t want to leave her house.
Victor and his wife Liz had two dogs named “Molly” and “Polly.” They were really friendly and playful. One day Mark and Daniel went into their backyard when Victor and Liz were not home. Molly and Polly immediately started to jump and play with them. Mark and Daniel poured gasoline all over Molly and Polly and burned them alive. Molly and Polly screamed in pain, and Mark and Daniel laughed. When Victor and Liz came home they found their dogs on fire. Everybody knew it was Mark and Daniel. They just didn’t have any proof. The neighborhood knew Mark and Daniel were bad news.
One night when Mark and Daniel were sleeping, they woke up to a bloodcurdling scream. They thought it was their neighbor’s cat, and they went back to sleep. Mark woke up to go to the bathroom. He turned on the light, looked in the mirror, but he couldn’t see himself, all he could see was Bubbles hanging. He splashed water on his face and the image was gone. He thought it was his imagination playing tricks on him, so he went back to sleep. Daniel woke up drenched in sweat. Burning next to him was Molly and Polly. He jumped out of bed screaming hysterically. Mark ran to Daniel and asked him what was going on, and Daniel explained what had happened to him. They agreed it was probably their imagination, so they went back to sleep.
Mark and Daniel woke up to a loud wail. They went down stairs and saw an image of a dog run by them. They continued down the stairs. Mark and Daniel saw Bear at the end of the staircase. They ran back up stairs in tears. They could not understand what was wrong with them. Mark and Daniel took a peek down stairs, and Bear was gone.
They decided they needed a beer, and proceeded to the kitchen. On the table was a large platter with Ed in the middle. Mark and Daniel were frozen in fear. They closed their eyes. When they opened their eyes Ed was gone. Hand in hand they stood in silence. When they finally snapped out of their fear, they grabbed their beers and went to the living room to drink them. Mark and Daniel started to laugh. They agreed it was probably something they ate that made them conjure up those images in their head.
Already on their third beer, Mark had a plan. He said, “We already had our fun with animals, now let’s have fun with humans. Starting with Katie.” Daniel agreed. “You like torture don’t you?” Mark looked at Daniel and said, “of course I do.” Daniel explained to Mark that he didn’t say anything. In front of them stood a tall dark figure. “I love torture,” the figure said. Whenever a job calls for torture, I am there.” Mark and Daniel started to urinate in fear. “Cowards!” the figure said. “You think it’s fun to torment people?” You think it’s fun to inflict pain on helpless animals? Well it’s not! Animals cry, scream, and feel pain, and so will you! I’m the king of revenge. I make bad people suffer!” Mark and Daniel tried to run, but they could not move. They pleaded for their lives. “Cowards!” the figure said repeatedly. “You want to see evil? I’ll show you evil.”
The next day the neighborhood received an invitation in the mail. They were all invited to a giant party at Cannon Park. Everybody went. Mrs. Hampton, Mr. Zamora, Katie, her parents persuaded her to leave the house, Victor and Liz. Everything was nicely decorated. There was a large buffet table with food, deserts, and drinks. Around the park stood three giant movie screens and a note. The note said, “Press the red button on the projectors at midnight for a spectacular show.” Midnight came, and Victor, Liz, and Mr. Zamora pressed the red button on each projector. The title of the movie was “Sweet Revenge.” On the big screens, Mark and Daniel were pleading for their lives while being tortured by a man in a black hooded cape. They were slashed by a giant sword and bleeding profusely. Mark and Daniel were strung on a tree, while alive, and they were set on fire. They burned for a long time, until they finally died . . .
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[size=2]Mark and Daniel are best friends. They do everything together, they steal, rob houses, torment people, and they like to abuse animals. Poor Mrs. Hampton, her cat “Bubbles” was found gutted while hanging from a tree. Mr. Zamora’s dog “Bear” was hit by their truck intentionally. Mark and Daniel opened Mr. Zamora’s gate and let Bear out. They put food in the middle of the street and ran him over. Katie’s potbelly pig “Ed” was cooked and eaten by Mark and Daniel. They put on masks and snuck in her yard and took Ed. Mark and Daniel videotaped them slaughtering and cooking Ed. They sent the tape to Katie. Poor Katie was leaving for college in the fall, now she doesn’t want to leave her house.
Victor and his wife Liz had two dogs named “Molly” and “Polly.” They were really friendly and playful. One day Mark and Daniel went into their backyard when Victor and Liz were not home. Molly and Polly immediately started to jump and play with them. Mark and Daniel poured gasoline all over Molly and Polly and burned them alive. Molly and Polly screamed in pain, and Mark and Daniel laughed. When Victor and Liz came home they found their dogs on fire. Everybody knew it was Mark and Daniel. They just didn’t have any proof. The neighborhood knew Mark and Daniel were bad news.
One night when Mark and Daniel were sleeping, they woke up to a bloodcurdling scream. They thought it was their neighbor’s cat, and they went back to sleep. Mark woke up to go to the bathroom. He turned on the light, looked in the mirror, but he couldn’t see himself, all he could see was Bubbles hanging. He splashed water on his face and the image was gone. He thought it was his imagination playing tricks on him, so he went back to sleep. Daniel woke up drenched in sweat. Burning next to him was Molly and Polly. He jumped out of bed screaming hysterically. Mark ran to Daniel and asked him what was going on, and Daniel explained what had happened to him. They agreed it was probably their imagination, so they went back to sleep.
Mark and Daniel woke up to a loud wail. They went down stairs and saw an image of a dog run by them. They continued down the stairs. Mark and Daniel saw Bear at the end of the staircase. They ran back up stairs in tears. They could not understand what was wrong with them. Mark and Daniel took a peek down stairs, and Bear was gone.
They decided they needed a beer, and proceeded to the kitchen. On the table was a large platter with Ed in the middle. Mark and Daniel were frozen in fear. They closed their eyes. When they opened their eyes Ed was gone. Hand in hand they stood in silence. When they finally snapped out of their fear, they grabbed their beers and went to the living room to drink them. Mark and Daniel started to laugh. They agreed it was probably something they ate that made them conjure up those images in their head.
Already on their third beer, Mark had a plan. He said, “We already had our fun with animals, now let’s have fun with humans. Starting with Katie.” Daniel agreed. “You like torture don’t you?” Mark looked at Daniel and said, “of course I do.” Daniel explained to Mark that he didn’t say anything. In front of them stood a tall dark figure. “I love torture,” the figure said. Whenever a job calls for torture, I am there.” Mark and Daniel started to urinate in fear. “Cowards!” the figure said. “You think it’s fun to torment people?” You think it’s fun to inflict pain on helpless animals? Well it’s not! Animals cry, scream, and feel pain, and so will you! I’m the king of revenge. I make bad people suffer!” Mark and Daniel tried to run, but they could not move. They pleaded for their lives. “Cowards!” the figure said repeatedly. “You want to see evil? I’ll show you evil.”
The next day the neighborhood received an invitation in the mail. They were all invited to a giant party at Cannon Park. Everybody went. Mrs. Hampton, Mr. Zamora, Katie, her parents persuaded her to leave the house, Victor and Liz. Everything was nicely decorated. There was a large buffet table with food, deserts, and drinks. Around the park stood three giant movie screens and a note. The note said, “Press the red button on the projectors at midnight for a spectacular show.” Midnight came, and Victor, Liz, and Mr. Zamora pressed the red button on each projector. The title of the movie was “Sweet Revenge.” On the big screens, Mark and Daniel were pleading for their lives while being tortured by a man in a black hooded cape. They were slashed by a giant sword and bleeding profusely. Mark and Daniel were strung on a tree, while alive, and they were set on fire. They burned for a long time, until they finally died . . .
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