05-19-2005, 04:50 PM
It's the beginning of it. It's not supposed to make sense. It's my intention to leave you confused. It's supposed to be an action/comedy...With lots of irony. Some peoples tastes of humour differ from mine. Nothing wrong with that. I'm expressing my sense of humour via vagueness, irony (EI, the I <3 japan shirt...) and corny jokes. The reason the character has no plot, is due to the fact that, A) There isn't really requirement for one yet. All he's done so far is taunt door-to-door salesmen and question the language skills of a particular short store clerk, and B) Would you rather have me introduce Sefer totally open to the public, so there's no element of surprise or anything? Think about this for a moment.
But yeah, thanks for the constructive critisism. This is my first time doing any exposed work that isn't total writing, so yeah...Bare with me.
But yeah, thanks for the constructive critisism. This is my first time doing any exposed work that isn't total writing, so yeah...Bare with me.