05-19-2005, 06:23 PM
If you give the reader a sense of the character's personality it can lead to the same jokes you've already used being twice as funny. People would think "God man...only Sefer." And if you're basing him off Chesh and Spit why not have him sitting at the computer and when the salesman comes up instead of standing there eating a cookie how about he just ignores the door and have him frustrated with something. Also, the salesman thing isn't funny because what salesman in their right mind would stand there and watch him eat? If he didn't answer the guy would move on. So it would alot better to use someone that would have to wait there like a roommate that got locked out or something. Yes comics portray things that would not happen normally but usually it's your main character that's doing these unbelievable things or it's a series of unlikely conflicts.
Check out this comic my buddies used to do. I helped them write some things and am even featured in one of the comics (Also the character of Satan was based on me) www.spencomics.com
Check out this comic my buddies used to do. I helped them write some things and am even featured in one of the comics (Also the character of Satan was based on me) www.spencomics.com
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