05-22-2005, 11:54 AM
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Death- Nice brushing, blend the render more, make your text space wider between each character, don't use outer glow, cool render, and jagged texts like the one that you put your name in don't do well with strokes, because then it strokes the jagged edges and grungy little bits, which looks bad. Just a comment there. 8/10