10-11-2005, 03:31 PM
Foog- I like the font, but it seems pretty monotonal. Try blending the render a little bit more. 7/10
SBA- 1st: the render is too big. I like the idea on the bg, but I just don't feel it. Either raise the opacity or don't blend the border. It seems like it wants some more attention but is too faint to get it. Otherwise I like it. 6/10
-2nd: Again the render seems to large. I like the border again, but use some better brushing. By better, I mean, more distinguished, and apparent. 6/10
please rate my current.
SBA- 1st: the render is too big. I like the idea on the bg, but I just don't feel it. Either raise the opacity or don't blend the border. It seems like it wants some more attention but is too faint to get it. Otherwise I like it. 6/10
-2nd: Again the render seems to large. I like the border again, but use some better brushing. By better, I mean, more distinguished, and apparent. 6/10
please rate my current.