text? what text.... ? oh ther it is. lol yeah man. the text is very ... uhhh absent... no actually i think it blends in nicly, but this sig is lacking in structure. the brushwork is nice. the render is nice. is all nice but it lacks depth. you have an awsome start thought man just build on it. i think your idea is really cool with the smudege lines and stuff. 6/10 for now. work on it more , add depth and contrast. make the render look like it POPS. repost after you hook it up with some more layers and stuff. i really think you have something awsome cooking up in your head.
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