12-27-2006, 01:37 PM
I like the border, and the image. The motion blur (I'm assuming it is a motion blur) isn't spread our enough. It looks like you just copied the render layer and put the copies behind the original but slightly off. Try blurring the motion effect some more and making it a little more spread out. Also, the positioning of the text is in a bad place and is difficult to read. The colors clash. Violet is correspondent with the red, but green does not fit well, it is not a complement of either color. Replacing the red with blue might work better. Color schemes play a very big role in any design. For a new artist, 5.5/10
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