Going in my valentine's day card...

[L4E]

The poem, in general, is really good. Makes girls hearts melt, really. When a guy reads it its like "so what.." but chicks go crazy.

That seems so far away,
Now that it's already Valentine's day.
I can still remember clearly,
The day I started being with the one I love dearly.

There seems to be something wrong with this part, try to put as many syllables in each line, because when i read it it doesn't sound that good

Id suggest putting it this way

That seems so far away,
Now that it's Valentine's day.

I can still remember it clearly,
The day I started being,
with the one that I love dearly

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And yeah, poetry is just a way to "get some", don't feel un-manly