Make-A-Story!

[jedimaster86]

(Out of Context - Does this include fixing any previous part of the story that has some grammer errors, as well as pointing out any writing tips [ie not starting about every sentence with the same pronoun and keeping to one tense]? Lol just messing with ya...I think)

Theres this guy Bob. Hes a heroic fighter and his family has been entrapped by his kingdom lord. He was trying to start a revolution by overthrowing the anarchy he lives in. He plans to go to the castle of the evil king to fight through the maze and traps of 100 square miles to get to his family without dying.

Sharpening his favorite blade, which had slain many enemies in the past, Bob carefully took his time to make sure all of his equipment was in good shape. He walked over to the table; on top was a long and strong archer's bow, its wood strengthened by a chemical recipe passed down by the family. Bob picked up the bow and placed crafted arrows into his quiver, muttering a praise to God for his family's safety. Picking up his blade and placing it into his sheath, Bob dressed into a few armors, but decided not to wear all of his protective gear to remain agile and on his toes at all times.