11-04-2007, 10:40 AM
I'm with Aemaeth on this one as well. You did a good job on the description of the setting but as to why you where there ,I believe would have add a nice touch to it . But it is all a learning process when it comes to writing.
I my self suck at spelling but passed descriptive writing with flying colors......don't know how,slept threw most of it.laugh: lol
I my self suck at spelling but passed descriptive writing with flying colors......don't know how,slept threw most of it.laugh: lol
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