11-14-2007, 01:16 PM
So your saying I should make the narrative into a third person instead? I see how you say the I's, me's, my's can be repetitive. In my writing I ussually try not to use the same word too many times or if I do at least space the words apart. Thank you for your suggestions.
My English teacher really annoys me when it comes to writing. She has no problem nick-picking every other word in your story and crossing it out/circling it but gives no explanation as to why and when I confront her she tells me to go away lol. Gets frustrating after a while.
My English teacher really annoys me when it comes to writing. She has no problem nick-picking every other word in your story and crossing it out/circling it but gives no explanation as to why and when I confront her she tells me to go away lol. Gets frustrating after a while.
As long as darkness flows through my veins, I will never cease, As long as my dreams still haunt me, I will never show mercy, and as long as evil lives I will never die.....
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