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Narrative I wrote
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I liked it! And for being a sophmore, (i am too) thats F**in amazing man. And truely when I saw the dash I dont know what it did but I liked it. No clue what it did though, I actually stopped reading and said.. "I like it!" no lie, but lol anyway. Yeah you could of used less "Big" words. Lol They dont hurt, but for people in search of a swift read, I would of spaced them out more. But again awsome!!


-----Xerdge
...And Then The Lamp Broke...
[SIGPIC][/SIGPIC]
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Narrative I wrote - by hellsing293 - 05-02-2008, 12:30 PM
Narrative I wrote - by 10 man - 05-03-2008, 03:50 PM
Narrative I wrote - by blueflame246 - 05-04-2008, 07:45 PM
Narrative I wrote - by hellsing293 - 05-05-2008, 04:41 AM
Narrative I wrote - by 10 man - 05-05-2008, 01:50 PM
Narrative I wrote - by Zerobanshee - 05-06-2008, 08:02 AM
Narrative I wrote - by hellsing293 - 05-07-2008, 05:59 AM
Narrative I wrote - by Xerdge - 05-14-2008, 05:35 AM

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