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Yet another narrative I had to write

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Yet another narrative I had to write
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06-05-2008, 12:10 AM
yeah, the sentences were a bit forced, and there also seems to be an overused amount of description, but otherwise, it is a pretty good narrative.
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Yet another narrative I had to write - by 10 man - 06-04-2008, 03:21 PM
Yet another narrative I had to write - by Zerobanshee - 06-05-2008, 12:10 AM

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