My music, what do you think about it?

[Determinado]

Well Sien is the name of my girlfriend, and when she listens to music she only listens to the beginning and changes after like 30 seconds ;-)
I made this song for her, so it's a bit meant to be a lot of different things all together in one song.

Transitions is indeed a problem I seem to be having, it's the comment my girlfriend always gives and I hardly hear; which is quite anoying that's why I need real opinions and not just "it's good" or "it's bad", what I get mostly from friends.

Thanks for the replies!