10-05-2008, 03:14 AM
Yes, I need to master my grammar for sure.
I'm more of a math-science man, so I approach writing in more of a systematic/formulaic way. Edgar Allen Poe did the following to, so it can't really be condemned as the wrong approach. Like all other arts, results sometimes don't depend on/defy the methods.
Also, my attempt was to try and make the setting come alive in order to enhance the fear of emotion but I guess it didn't really work.
Oh, and the paper received an A(95).
I'm more of a math-science man, so I approach writing in more of a systematic/formulaic way. Edgar Allen Poe did the following to, so it can't really be condemned as the wrong approach. Like all other arts, results sometimes don't depend on/defy the methods.
Also, my attempt was to try and make the setting come alive in order to enhance the fear of emotion but I guess it didn't really work.
Oh, and the paper received an A(95).
As long as darkness flows through my veins, I will never cease, As long as my dreams still haunt me, I will never show mercy, and as long as evil lives I will never die.....
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