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The story im writing. Part 2
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06-07-2009, 12:50 PM
Looks good. Smile I'm glad you took my advice, I don't think that happens often. My wife usually does her own thing anyway, and then says she should have taken my advice afterwards... But that's marriage, I guess. Anywho, I like your writing. It's good. Smile Hyphens though; they could be your friend.

Just this part:
Wazz Wrote:She hid behind a small wall that jutted out from the main room. It was where the cleaning supplies and sink were kept- it was out of sight for prosthetics.

If I was your editor, that's what I would do.
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The story im writing. Part 2 - by wazzacky - 06-02-2009, 12:46 PM
The story im writing. Part 2 - by Nethran - 06-07-2009, 12:50 PM
The story im writing. Part 2 - by wazzacky - 06-07-2009, 01:25 PM
The story im writing. Part 2 - by Nethran - 06-10-2009, 02:55 PM

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