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The Darkness
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Eh, I thought i would try one..ive never wrote one here it goes....




The Darkness


The darkness inside....
Burning like a flame killing to get out
suffering like a child far from heaven
the desperate darkness that we all long for
waiting...waiting...waiting....
the darkness consumes all
souls demolished in the fait of darkness
life...
death....



Eh, first one..it sucks [Image: rolleyes%281%29.gif] give me a break go easy Wink
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#2
i love it kemwing
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#3
good going! Its pretty good for a first go at poetry.
"One murder makes a villain, millions a hero. "
- Beilby Porteus, Death, A Poem
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