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I made this thingy :+
#1
I wrote it when I was doing nothing but... enjoy Smile

He is awakened---



The air sapped from the divine,

An immaculate human, stained with sin

Broke from its den,

Demon, destitute of his powers

His flames rise, he is awakened



One who bears witness of the truth,

Splits with grief, and agony

The open wound, infected

The bleeding will not stop

Broke from its den,

Demon, destitute of his powers

His flames rise, he is awakened



He is awakened, at last he is

Though this victory will be short-lived

The redeemer has awakened

Broke from its den,

The air sputtered flames,

Starved of power, one to seek



From this den came a cry,

One that screamed forever

Smashed through the walls of hell itself

The confusion settled,

The den laid still, sealed with a magical spell

Hoping that it will never come back again.
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#2
very dark. i like it...very spooky, enigmatic. i like the hell reference..
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#3
thanks
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