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Nexus, your getting better as you go along. But I am not crazy about this signature. To the left by his arm it looks like there is a faded ass there. Text is kind of hard/annoying to read. The render does not match the signature and doesn't blend in with the signature as the colors don't to. I suggest you look at some render blending tutorials.
The second one on the other hand looks nice, the blending is nice to. The only couple of things I would have to complain about is that the feathers. petals or what ever she has around her is to light and doesn't match the background and kind of ruins that nice view, the 1px white border, and the text. Other than that good job. Keep it up!
Heres an interface I've done. I don't think I ever posted it here. I'm still working on it and I know I have some work to do with the text.
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01-23-2007, 01:23 PM
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thanks divine and the feather things were part of the render :p
and your interface looks really nice looks really smooth.
ok this is the once i tried posting last night but blocked it out had to change name:
and this is one i made this morning i tried blending the render in a bit better this time with a alright looking out come
any better?
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it looks a lot better. i tend to prefer duotones like that. soon you will be working without premade brushes. only problem with it is the text. its cool though. not too fond of the grey one though. just me maybe.
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Come on guys rate above you...
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Red_Brilliance Wrote:I was actually asking for a critique, but I can understand how it can look like "idle chit chat".
Let's try this again:
Hi, I just had this sig made for me by FrogMan (actually, I had it made like a year and a half ago, but improper file (blank) and forum updates kept me from getting it). I really enjoy it, and I wanted to show it off, and be critiqued since it was my idea behind it.
(FYI: It's my actual sig)
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01-23-2007, 03:45 PM
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10 man Wrote:it looks a lot better. i tend to prefer duotones like that. soon you will be working without premade brushes. only problem with it is the text. its cool though. not too fond of the grey one though. just me maybe. hmm i see where your coming from i cant really find fonts to suite my sigs so i just watever if there are any fonts you would recommend please tell me i would much appreciate smiley:
also what do you mean by i wont be using pre made brushes?
@divine:
as i said before i like it and nice color choice my rating for it 8.5/10
@ red:
it looks nice i like the background except the render looks kinda low quality but overall i would give it a 8/10 btw i like the animation
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yeah red ive seen it before. its not one of FM's best work. 5/10 but if you like thats what counts.
devine- work on your transparencies and save them as png24. 7/10
nexus- Ri**** sig gets a 5/10 i dont care for it as i said above
Prince of persia sig gets a 7/10 well blended and i like the duotone. i
dont like the font you used.
my sig for sotw
my photo of a leaf
original
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wow that looks amazing did you take that photo aswell?
i love another 10/10 for than dan
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nexus Wrote:wow that looks amazing did you take that photo aswell?
i love another 10/10 for than dan
yep sure did. i took it with my leica digilux.
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Hmmm...can I get a rate?
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For Dan, I know it isn't transparent builder:
I didn't want to save it like that yet because I'm still working on it.
ZK, its a nice sig, I just don't think the text fits in. 8/10. Also please don't repost signatures that have already been rated.
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I posted it up last page and it didn't get rated, so I reposted it.
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01-24-2007, 03:18 PM
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Zk cant see it there is a picture of imagehosting.us saying "File Traffic Over"
i just made this one, its similar to zK's, same render ect... anways its nowhere near as good as his but rate it please and tell me which boarder looks better, white or black.
Black:
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White:
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IMO the black border looks better, along with the sig. Good job nexus your getting a lot better.
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thanks divine the funny thing is ive only had photo shop for 2 days, lol.
and what does "IMO" mean, lol?
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01-24-2007, 04:54 PM
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Nexus that turned out a lot better. i stole it off here and made some revisions for you. ill PM it to you with and explain what i did to it. dont want to post it here because its rude and its kind of ripping.
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01-24-2007, 07:43 PM
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my dad came home from work today and i showed him my sigs i had made and he really liked them and asked me to make one for him for his forums, he posts on gamearena and dreamcatcher forums for the game painkiller. his online name is Blaise. i made sure i would get credit for it so he let me put a little Nex in it (very faintly...) anways this is what i came up with please rate it and tell me if its any good or not and if you like it
btw dan i tried using the depth tut u gave me but it did turn out right so i did what i usually did and made this.
he hasnt seen the final product, hope he likes it
i also made sure that when he uses it he has to write made by my son lol. 
i need an opinion where i have put nex in the two sig which one looks better this one or one above
and dan dw ill post it for you 
this is my silver surfer sig "revised" by dan
btw i love what you do with the text how you have the smaller one then a larger one above. could you please show me how to do that it looks awsome!
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Lol, I can always tell Dan's work because of the way he does his name. Mostly in the corner, faint, and bleeding off the page. They all look good Nexus, practice makes perfect.
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