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Rhyme City
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Heres a poem I made, or better yet a rhyme heh ENJOY!\

Old Man Dead At Opera

The light of the morning
Old man snoring
Yet the dream was mourning
Pain was searing
As the end was nearing
Through it all was a clearing,
Like a peering
Many family fearing
The ugly face of death rearing
Thinking before the hearing
The fat lady singing.
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#2
lol not bad, kinda sounds like a continuation to 'its raining its pouring to me'
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#3
For you guys who don't understand the poem, he died at the opera listining to some fat ass.
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#4
Heh, not bad. 7/10

~Lynch~
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