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The Service
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*The Service..so many centuries old....was created to protect the LIGHT from the DARK....and the creatures of the DARK were held at bay...by the magic of this tree alone! Sinking to her knees..the woman looked up at this magical..powerful tree...and a grip of dread took hold of her heart...

She knew....that if this tree perished...so would all that walked the path of LIGHT...The demons would break through the barrier the tree protected......being held captive and away from there chosen prey
All the pent up rage from the centuries ...their hate had grown hot..the demons lusted after death and torment more so now than when they had been enclosed in this great dark void...maintained solely by the magic of the tree!

The tree was DYING!...the woman lapsed into soft weeping for a moment....not yet fully able to comprehend the magnitude of this situation....despeate to understand...she silently pondered in her mind...^I know not what to do...this has never happened^ Drying her tears...she rose...and spoke the words of greeting...as she had done every morning ...when a branch of the tree softly touched her...Startled....the woman then remained very still...as a voice spoke to her mind....asking......to be continued


Pamela: This was requested by a returning member.I hope you enjoy it. Smile
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#2
wow thats awsome.

can i be ur cat? Big Grin
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LOL Sure thing.I write many poems and short stories,and I am a published author.A very long ago member returned and requested I re-post a few of the stories,as this and my RPG were what he most remembered about me.I often get a PM from members requesting me to evaluate their work and writing styles.I honestly enjoy this,because I see some real talent.It ,also gives me a chance to encourage them,or make objective suggestions.

Some of the most fun to read are the songs they have composed.If any of you are aspiring to write songs,poetry,or stories,please post them for all of us to enjoy.~Pamela
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Ok so this is a song i wrote in like 5 mins i didnt really think about creating big words and meaningfull phrases i just got my guitar strummed a few chords and got this .. its called "i dont like writing autographs" and its just that i think a celebs autograph i worthless (obviously they go for lots on e-bay but they dont mean a thing and its just their name which they have written down over a million times)

goes like this

*chorus*
Now i dont like writing autographs
Yeah sitting their and writing all that about
How i love you even though i dont even know you


*verse*
standing their after the show
she comes up to me and then she goes can
i have your name i really like you

So i wait .. and hesitate
wondering how to get away before its too late
then i write it out and say how i like her too


*Chorus*


*verse*

then she starts to flirt an gives me a wink,
so i back away and begin to think ..
if she wants my name .. does she want a cheque book too?

she said you dont know what you mean you see...
your like a role model a second mum to me, an i like you alot
.. and look up to you toooooo

*chorus*


~Solo~


*chorus*


=outro=

Song i wrote called "i dont like writing autographs" im only 17 so go easy on me Tongue and yeah i didnt try to be creative just .. said what was on my mind with a few chords i do have better stuff but it for dance music etc (the annoying echoy woman lyrics)


*chorus*
Now i dont like writing autographs
Yeah sitting their and writing all that about
How i love you even though i dont even know you


*verse*
standing their after the show
she comes up to me and then she goes can
i have your name i really like you

So i wait .. and hesitate
wondering how to get away before its too late
then i write it out and say how i like her too


*Chorus*


*verse*

then she starts to flirt an gives me a wink,
so i back away and begin to think ..
if she wants my name .. does she want a cheque book too?

she said you dont know what you mean you see...
your like a role model a second mum to me, an i like you alot
.. and look up to you toooooo

*chorus*


~Solo~


*chorus*


=outro=
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#5
I would actually be interested to hear the music to this.
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