Pamela Wrote:Very nice.
Might I ask if this poem was a product of real life experiences?
Either way it is haunting and emotional. A very good work indeed sir,please keep posting them.
Thanks, but no, it was just an idea I had for a song. I'm a girl by the way, lol.
eskimo Wrote:very good i give it a 9/10 it seem's very deep.
Thanks, I'm glad you thought it was deep and that it was good enough to score that high, lol.