05-04-2007, 12:37 AM
The writing style is concise and the words are very mature.For freestyle it flows well in the effect that you build one thought upon the previous.
This is a must in this writing style,prose has no ryhming words to link. Therefor it is the readers thoughts and emotions you must capture in a manner that entices them to want to completly finish reading.
Prose,as with a novel,is an art...you have to hook them ...lead them through your mind,and keep their attention.You did well,I think it was a good job. The content is one of not only regret,but hope for change...this is mainly what I see in this.
This is a must in this writing style,prose has no ryhming words to link. Therefor it is the readers thoughts and emotions you must capture in a manner that entices them to want to completly finish reading.
Prose,as with a novel,is an art...you have to hook them ...lead them through your mind,and keep their attention.You did well,I think it was a good job. The content is one of not only regret,but hope for change...this is mainly what I see in this.
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A Light in your Darkness...always there...and burning...
A Light in your Darkness...always there...and burning...