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Im giving away 18000 points to the best poemwriter:
1. You may not have swearing.
2. No flaming other peoples work.
3. No I repeat NO using other peoples material.
4. No repetitive rhyming.
5. You may not use "I".
6. It cant be about an angel. *so many people with their religious poems*
7. If you use someone elses work I wont even read it.
Contest ends in 2 weeks.
*yes im bored*
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i got a poem but i dont wanna post it can i PM u? or do i have to post?
u actually have 18000 points jeese
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Yeah U can pm it. Ive got 36500 points lol.
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if no one else competes is it a default win?
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So far Ilikelilkids is winning... *didnt feel like looking for his name*
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Hmmmm les see umm Oogalee bogaleee bop the mouse jumped on the cop. The cop ran after the mouse and the mouse went on the house. When the house fell down the mouse fell on the cop and killed him. BEST POEM EVA
lol i seriously just read that and laughed my *** off about how freakin stupid that was
(i knew i wouldnet win cause im not the poet type so i just wrote about nothing)
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Down another pill
Take another hit
Chug the bottle, just once more
Drown your misery
There's happiness at the bottom
Just drink up, you'll see
Your life is worthless
The world gave it's cold shoulder
Smacked you in the face with reality
Thats why I'm here
To guide you to your death
Let you suffer no more
Behind this hooded face
There is some good
Although I might be death
I take your pain away
Lead you from these bitter people
Place you in another world
Full of an orange warmth
And many other sinners like you
You'll never be alone
So just take my hand
Follow closely behind me
If you choose not
I give to you this gift
It will put an end to all your strife
With just one easy slice
So here, take my knife
Just slide that shiny blade
Across your virgin wrists
Absorb the pain it brings
Feel the rush, feel the ecstasy
Let the cold blood drip
It'll be over soon
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wow, next time my english teacher gives me shit about not doing my poems in class I will use something like elterions and scare the crap out of her :laugh:
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(err...too lazy and hung over to think one through right now, I'll just do it as I go along >.< *my head hurts*)
The end is near
You know it
And everyet you do not let go
Why do you not accept thy fate?
What do you hold onto such dearly in life?
You and I both know, the time shall come
And we know it shall be here soon.
I cannot understand
Please
Make it clear
Just give up
Let it go
Why do you bother?
Is there something you love?
Possibly someone?
No, it cannot be
Even if it was, she will not agree
Just end thy suffering
Come with me!
I can grant thy wishes
I can give you what you disire
Just step forward, into my arms
Just one more step and it can be ended.
Embrase my darkness
Forget your fears
It is nearly complete...
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Err..sucks n.n
Sorry 'bout the rhymin :p
I'll prolly post a better one :\
Mine would have been better..but mine was like elts n.n HE STOLE IT XD
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FraterPerdurabo Wrote:Skye Wrote:You don't like it? Why is that?
Probably because I fail to appreciate the beauty in what I see around me constantly.
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thats good keep working on it... seriously
i love to write, you could say im won of those wierd people in school.
Well actualy im not weird i like to write stories and poems.
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Hg dont try to copy elt lol with the whole freaky thing lol jk its nice ELTS MADE ME **** MY PANTS lol DIPRESSED
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A Poem is A verbal composition designed to convey experiences, ideas, or emotions in a vivid and imaginative way, characterized by the use of language chosen for its sound and suggestive power and by the use of literary techniques such as meter, metaphor, and rhyme.
Just keep that in mind
