Scary/creepy story

[X.x G o D x.X]

ok hold on
this time i will put periods and commas and stuff in this one this is kinda long so i do not know if it will fit or if you guys will read it but here it is



Ashlyn was dying for a CD player, but she was broke. She couldn’t go to her parents for the money. Her grandmother had recently died and her parents had to pay for the funeral, so money was tight. She needed some cash fast, but she didn’t know how. She thought that maybe she could get a job, so she went to the kitchen, grabbed the newspaper and looked in the ads. “Babysitter wanted! $20 dollars an hour.” Ashlyn’s eyes opened wide when she saw the ad. “I found my dream job,”Ashlyn screamed. “At twenty dollars an hour I can work six hours and have a CD player and some CD’s by the end of the day.” Ashlyn quickly wrote down the address, and rode her bike there.

When she arrived she could not believe her eyes. “WOW! This house is huge! I’m going to baby-sit in style,” she thought. Ashlyn walked up the stairs and knocked on the door. A very handsome man opened the door. “Can I help you,” the man said in a deep voice. “Hi, I’m here about the babysitting job,” Ashlyn said blushing. “Yes, please come in,” he said.

The house was big and beautiful. In walks a very tall woman. “Hi, I’m Mrs. Tanner. This is my husband Mr. Tanner, whom you already met. My husband and I have a big dinner tonight and we need a babysitter badly. We were so worried no one was going to answer our ad.” Ashlyn said, “At twenty dollars an hour, I thought you would have people lined up outside your door.” Mr. and Mrs. Tanner smiled. “Your hired,” said Mrs. Tanner. Ashlyn started to jump up and down. She gave Mr. and Mrs. Tanner a big hug. “Thank you,” she said. Ashlyn thought she was coming into some easy money. She baby-sat her little cousins before and it wasn’t hard. All they did was play all day.

Mrs. Tanner said, “there are some rules you need to follow. The rules are:

1. Let him watch whatever he wants on television
   
2. Let him eat whatever he wants
   
3. Let him play whatever he wants
   
4. Make sure he takes his bath at 8:00 p.m.
   
5. Read him a book before he falls asleep
   
6. And the most important rule! Never touch him!
   

Ashlyn asked, “why?” Mrs. Tanner said in an angry voice, “You want the job or not? “I’m so sorry,” Ashlyn said fearing for her job. I didn’t mean to speak out of turn.” Mr. Tanner said calmly, “just don’t touch him and you will be fine.”


“It’s 5:00 p.m. right now. We’re going to leave in a few minutes,” said Mrs. Tanner. Ashlyn said, “I can’t believe this is all happening so fast. Can I call my parents?” “Sure,” Mrs. Tanner said, “while your calling your parents I’ll go get my little precious. He’s seven years old and his name is Ryan. He’s the nicest, sweetest, cutest little boy in the whole world.”

In walks a cute little boy. He has black hair and bright florescent blue eyes. His skin is pale white. “Hi, I’m Ashlyn, nice to meet you.” Ryan said in a little voice, “ I like you Ashlyn, want to play.” “Sure Ryan,” Ashlyn replied. “We are going now,” Mrs. Tanner said. “Please take good care of my baby, he’s very innocent.” “Mr. and Mrs. Tanner, he’s in good hands,” Ashlyn said reassuring them. Mr. and Mrs. Tanner smiled as they walked out the door. Ryan and Ashlyn went into the living room. Ryan said excited, “There’s a good movie on cable starting right now. Its called bloody slasher bloody.” Ashlyn yelled, “No way! You are not watching a movie called bloody slasher bloody.” Ryan screamed, “My mom told you to let me watch whatever I wanted!” Ashlyn said in an angry voice, “I don’t care. I’m sick of parents letting their children watch horrible things. Not on my watch.” “Okay,” said Ryan, “You just broke rule one.” “I don’t care,” Ashlyn yelled.

Ryan said holding his stomach; “I’m hungry.” They went into the kitchen. Ryan grabbed a bowl. He put onions, sardines, ketchup, and vanilla ice cream in the bowl. Ashlyn said in disbelief, “What are you doing? You can’t eat that. You are disgusting, that is so gross!” “My mom said that I could eat whatever I wanted,” screamed Ryan. “I know,” Ashlyn replied, but I’m sure she didn’t mean this disgusting concoction!” “Okay Ashlyn, you broke rule two.” “I don’t care Ryan, I’ll really get in trouble if you get a bad stomach ache, and I’m not going to be responsible.”

“Let’s play,” said Ryan. “I have a good idea. We can play funeral. You just died and I’ll be the mortician.” “Ryan, you are weird, Ashlyn said distressed. “We can’t play funeral. Lets play video games or checkers, but not funeral. You’re starting to scare me. You are very creepy!” Ryan said laughing, “Hey Ashlyn, you just broke rule three.” Ashlyn took Ryan into the living room to watch cartoons. They fell asleep on the couch. When Ashlyn woke up, the room was pitch black. She turned on the light and screamed. Ryan was staring at her with his florescent blue eyes. “You scared me to death,” Ashlyn said holding her heart. Ryan said, “your broke rule four. I was supposed to take a bath at eight o’clock and it’s now nine o’clock.” “Oh Ryan,” Ashlyn said annoyed, lets skip your bath and we’ll tell your mom you had a bath.” “Poor Ashlyn,” Ryan said in a sympathetic voice. “You also broke rule five. I fell asleep and you didn’t read me a story.” “Ashlyn said, “It’s not too late for rule five. I’ll take you upstairs, put you to bed, and read you a bedtime story, but first let me go to the bathroom.

When Ashlyn came out, Ryan was asleep on the couch. “Oh well,” said Ashlyn, “I guess I did break rule five, and since I’ve been breaking all these rules, I might as well break rule six. I wonder why Mrs. Tanner didn’t want me to touch him.” Ashlyn sat on the couch next to Ryan. She extended her arm to touch him. “Don’t touch him!” said a man’s voice. When Ashlyn looked around, she didn’t see anyone. Ashlyn thought it was her imagination. She slowly reached out and touched Ryan, but her hand went right through him. Ashlyn started screaming. Her heart was pounding so fast. She ran to the front door. When she opened the door, standing in front of her was Mr. and Mrs. Tanner. She had a hard time recognizing them. They looked different. They both had pale green skin and fowl breath.

Mrs. Tanner said in a wicked voice, “Why did you break the rules?” Ashlyn was speechless. Mr. and Mrs. Tanner grabbed Ashlyn by her arms and dragged her into the living room. Ryan was sitting on the couch with a big grin on his face. Ryan said in an evil voice, “She broke the rules, now she has to pay.” Mr. and Mrs. Tanner nodded yes.

“You’re not the one we are waiting for,” said Mrs. Tanner. Ashlyn got the courage to speak up. She said trembling, “My hand went right through Ryan.” Mrs. Tanner said mimicking Ashlyn, “My hand went right through Ryan, well of course it did, we’ve been dead for years. Our precious Ryan needed a sister or brother. We thought you might be the one, but you’re just like the others. You broke the rules.” Ashlyn said, “I heard a voice warning me, I thought it was my imagination, but now I don’t think it was. Who was it?” “Guilty your honor,” Mr. Tanner said joking. “It was me. I tried to give you a chance, because I liked you. I wanted you to be my new daughter, but you broke the rules. We have been searching for a person to follow the rules, but everybody who answers our ad, breaks the rules, now your sentence is DEATH!”

Ashlyn started screaming. The room went pitch black. Ashlyn could hear her heart pounding faster and faster. She was paralyzed with fear. Ashlyn kept saying to herself, “This is a dream, just a dream, I’ll wake up soon, and this will all be over.” “It will be all over,” said a voice in the air. Ashlyn was never found. Joey needed some quick cash. He saw an ad in the newspaper. “Babysitter wanted! $20 dollars an hour.” Joey thought he was coming into some easy money . . .

[X Y Z]

How come babysitters always seem to be the subject? lmao. Anyway. That one was kinda.. eh not really scary but it was okay.

[X.x G o D x.X]

well is this one any better


[size=2]Mark and Daniel are best friends. They do everything together, they steal, rob houses, torment people, and they like to abuse animals. Poor Mrs. Hampton, her cat “Bubbles” was found gutted while hanging from a tree. Mr. Zamora’s dog “Bear” was hit by their truck intentionally. Mark and Daniel opened Mr. Zamora’s gate and let Bear out. They put food in the middle of the street and ran him over. Katie’s potbelly pig “Ed” was cooked and eaten by Mark and Daniel. They put on masks and snuck in her yard and took Ed. Mark and Daniel videotaped them slaughtering and cooking Ed. They sent the tape to Katie. Poor Katie was leaving for college in the fall, now she doesn’t want to leave her house.

Victor and his wife Liz had two dogs named “Molly” and “Polly.” They were really friendly and playful. One day Mark and Daniel went into their backyard when Victor and Liz were not home. Molly and Polly immediately started to jump and play with them. Mark and Daniel poured gasoline all over Molly and Polly and burned them alive. Molly and Polly screamed in pain, and Mark and Daniel laughed. When Victor and Liz came home they found their dogs on fire. Everybody knew it was Mark and Daniel. They just didn’t have any proof. The neighborhood knew Mark and Daniel were bad news.

One night when Mark and Daniel were sleeping, they woke up to a bloodcurdling scream. They thought it was their neighbor’s cat, and they went back to sleep. Mark woke up to go to the bathroom. He turned on the light, looked in the mirror, but he couldn’t see himself, all he could see was Bubbles hanging. He splashed water on his face and the image was gone. He thought it was his imagination playing tricks on him, so he went back to sleep. Daniel woke up drenched in sweat. Burning next to him was Molly and Polly. He jumped out of bed screaming hysterically. Mark ran to Daniel and asked him what was going on, and Daniel explained what had happened to him. They agreed it was probably their imagination, so they went back to sleep.

Mark and Daniel woke up to a loud wail. They went down stairs and saw an image of a dog run by them. They continued down the stairs. Mark and Daniel saw Bear at the end of the staircase. They ran back up stairs in tears. They could not understand what was wrong with them. Mark and Daniel took a peek down stairs, and Bear was gone.

They decided they needed a beer, and proceeded to the kitchen. On the table was a large platter with Ed in the middle. Mark and Daniel were frozen in fear. They closed their eyes. When they opened their eyes Ed was gone. Hand in hand they stood in silence. When they finally snapped out of their fear, they grabbed their beers and went to the living room to drink them. Mark and Daniel started to laugh. They agreed it was probably something they ate that made them conjure up those images in their head.

Already on their third beer, Mark had a plan. He said, “We already had our fun with animals, now let’s have fun with humans. Starting with Katie.” Daniel agreed. “You like torture don’t you?” Mark looked at Daniel and said, “of course I do.” Daniel explained to Mark that he didn’t say anything. In front of them stood a tall dark figure. “I love torture,” the figure said. Whenever a job calls for torture, I am there.” Mark and Daniel started to urinate in fear. “Cowards!” the figure said. “You think it’s fun to torment people?” You think it’s fun to inflict pain on helpless animals? Well it’s not! Animals cry, scream, and feel pain, and so will you! I’m the king of revenge. I make bad people suffer!” Mark and Daniel tried to run, but they could not move. They pleaded for their lives. “Cowards!” the figure said repeatedly. “You want to see evil? I’ll show you evil.”

The next day the neighborhood received an invitation in the mail. They were all invited to a giant party at Cannon Park. Everybody went. Mrs. Hampton, Mr. Zamora, Katie, her parents persuaded her to leave the house, Victor and Liz. Everything was nicely decorated. There was a large buffet table with food, deserts, and drinks. Around the park stood three giant movie screens and a note. The note said, “Press the red button on the projectors at midnight for a spectacular show.” Midnight came, and Victor, Liz, and Mr. Zamora pressed the red button on each projector. The title of the movie was “Sweet Revenge.” On the big screens, Mark and Daniel were pleading for their lives while being tortured by a man in a black hooded cape. They were slashed by a giant sword and bleeding profusely. Mark and Daniel were strung on a tree, while alive, and they were set on fire. They burned for a long time, until they finally died . . .

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[X Y Z]

And eye for an eye? lmao. But two wrongs don't make a right! Which is right? Eye for an eye in that case.

[X.x G o D x.X]

ok i do not understand what you said but ok

[X Y Z]

You never heard the saying "And eye for an eye" ?

[X.x G o D x.X]

ya but that other stuff well i gotta another one and this will be my last one

There was a family driving to the moms familes x-mas thing. Well the Father wants to try another

route and he starts to fall alseep. And almost collides into a car. Then he wakes up and everyone in

his family freaks out. Well they keep driving and talking about why he took this road and not the

highway. Then all of a sudden he stops. The mom ask what happend. The husband says he thought

he seen a women in a white dress so he starts to back and and he ask the women if she needs a

ride. she doesn't say anything. then the daughter says she will get out and let her ride. but her

boyfreind is scared and says no because they are in a weird place. Well she gets out and the weird

women gets in and they find out she has a baby but she will not talk. so they find a ranger station

and the husabnd goes inside to see if anyone ways in there the wif also fallows him. well the son

goes in the woods and whacks off to this porn picture he brought. and the women and the boyfreind

are still in the car. then the women talks and ask if he would hold her baby and he says ok. she says

the baby is kinda cold but she says its alright its dead. the boyfreind laughs and opens the cloth over

the babys face and the babys face is eaten up. Then everyone hears a scream the wife and hisabnd

run to the car and no one is there and the son runs there and no one is there so they start freaking

out. then the daughter is still waiting for the parnets to pick her up but then she sees a car and she

thought it was them then is goes right by her but really slow and she sees her boyfreind in the back

and starts to scream in horror then the family picks her up and she says that the car has him and

they ask what car and who she says this black car and her boyfreind was in the back of the of the

car. so they start driving fast to catch up to the car but they never find it. but they do find a baby

carraige in the middle of the road and the son gets out and looks in it and starts to get pulled in and

the family is freaking out and he starts to laugh cause there is nothing in the carriage so they push it

out of the road and drive away. well later they find the boyfreinds bodie on the side of the road and it

is tore to pices. then the daughter starts to freak out and goes into shock. They start to drive again

and they stop cause the see the women again well he starts to say the hell with it and the son walks

out in the woods and starts to toke up on a joint and then sees the women and she starts to kiss him

and bites off his lip well tears it off and he soooooooo high he does nothiing but sit there and she

takes off her clothes and her screams. well then they see the black car the daughter was talking

about and it had the son in the back of it so the sister comes back out of her shock. the mom starts

to chase it down. well they start to follow the car but then it gets foggy and the car is gone (so you

know this road is nothing but striaght) so they keep driving and they see the sons bodies on the side

of the road AGIAN well this time the mother goes insane and the dauhter and the father are the only

ones that are stright well they start driving again and the mom starts to say she can see ppl in the

woods and they say no you cant now sit down so she says now i am gonna go talk to them they say

no you cant she says yes i can they say no you cant she says yes i can so they say ok fine you can

and she says ok and open the door and jumps out so they stop and go back and they see the mom

and she laying on the ground and she gets up and says hi like she is ok and the dauther look at the

back of her head and it is wide open so the mom starts to touch her brian and she likes start to have

an orgasim while doing that then she falls down dead so they take off and they start to think that is

they cannot get out of here cause they have been going forever down this staright road they figure

then would go throuh the woods so te daughter and the father get out and walk trough the wodds and

the see a light and they start to yell help us and then they get out of the woods and it is there car

they start to freak out and they strt driving well after that they come next to the same ranger station

and the dad freaks out he says some one is playing tricks on them well then he gets out and trys to

see if the is a phone that works in the station so he goes in a the lights dont work so he lights a

match and then he walks in that match got to close to his finger so he put it out and lught a new one

then he............ started to walk again and that one went out then he lite another and he seen the

women and freaked out the daughter went inside and got the dad out of there so then they start to

drive and he freaks out then he ask where the liqour is and the girl said she trough it out long time

ago so he got mad because he was kinda phsyco then and he beat the crap out of her and put her in

the back and he locks the doors and gets a gun and he says to the women come on out and runs in

the woulds and trys to shoot her but she kills him then after that the girl wakes and see something is

walking around the car so she gets up and freaks out and starts to get out and run the she stops

dead in her tracks she sees 4 body bags and the car and the women comes up behind her and stays

the car is not here for you then the girl freaks out as the cars leaves




holy crap my finger hurt i have been writing stories this whole time for this page well that is the last one of the story i have for right now but tell me if it is any good

[X Y Z]

Your figure hurts? I didn't know it hurt to copy and paste

[X.x G o D x.X]

LOL ok go for it try to find that same excat story

[[Ghost]]

heres the basic plot of the story you posted

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[little_monkey]

This one is called ... The Baby Sitter. Tll me if you like.


Mandi jumped, startled by the loud crack of thunder that burst through the sky. Scolding herself for being so childish, she settled back on the couch. As she leaned forward, she picked the remote off the table and clicked on the TV. News…..bad sitcom……more news….cheesy godzilla movie……Spanish channel….news again….infomercial…scary movie…news. Mandi sighed and clicked off the TV. "Baby-sitting sucks. I wish I had something to do." Mandi muttered. Grumbling unhappily, she lay back down on the couch. Pulling out her chemistry homework, she decided to give it a shot. She took one look at the first problem and gave up. "Man," Mandi sighed, "this bites."

WHAM! As something slammed against the front door Mandi shrieked loudly. Panting, Mandi inched slowly towards the door. "W-Who’s t-there?" Mandi stammered. "Mandiiiiiii" someone whispered. Mandi whirled around. "H-Hello? Is s-someone t-there?" Mandi crept toward the dark and foreboding kitchen. Trembling, she reached for the light switch, took a deep breath and turned on the light. Nothing. Mandi decided she was hearing things. She flicked the lights back off and walked nervously back to the couch. "Mandi, you have got to stop scaring yourself." She told herself. Mandi tried to give her homework another shot. She leafed through her textbook, trying to find the right page. Once she found it, she picked up her notebook. But it felt too heavy….and damp.

Mandi turned the book over in her hands and gently rubbed the black cover. When she pulled her hand away, she saw it was stained red. "What the-" Mandi whispered. Then she felt little drops fall on her. She glanced down and saw bright red drops falling from the notebook and splattering on her white skirt. Mandi gasped and threw the book to the floor. Within seconds, a bright red puddle had formed under the book. "Blood." Mandi realized. She bolted to the bathroom and quickly turned on the sink. She scrubbed her hands until they hurt. Then she scrubbed her skirt, but it wouldn’t come out. Then she noticed a small red puddle on the counter. "No." Mandi gasped. She slowly looked up and saw that there was blood smeared on the mirror. It read, "I’m Coming For You Mandi."

Mandi backed away from the mirror, breathing hard. "No, this can’t be happening. She whispered. "Oh, but it is." A voice hissed from behind her. Mandi screamed, and the door slammed shut. Mandi lunged at the door and pulled with all her might. It was locked. Mandi felt herself losing control. A tear escaped her eye and fell to the floor. Mandi began to sob and she fell back on the door. Then she heard a low, evil chuckle. She looked up panicked and saw a hideous monster glaring at her. It had green scaled all over its body, webbed feet, and three eyes. It grinned a horrible grin, exposing two rows of sharp, blood stained teeth. It chuckled again and it spoke. "Hello Mandi." It growled. Mandi wanted desperately to scream, but she couldn’t speak. "I rather enjoyed my appetizer, such a sweet, tender, plump little boy. Mandi’s eyes widened.

"Teddy, the boy I’m baby-sitting…." She choked out. "Was baby-sitting." It corrected. "He was awfully tasty, but now I am ready for the main course." It took a leap at her and grabbed her. Then drooling heavily, it shoved her to the floor and climbed on top of her, pinning her arms to the ground. Mandi looked up one more time to see that terrifying face loam over her. Then as it bit deeply into her throat, she screamed. Blood gurgled in her throat, and as it began to eat, Mandi grew silent.

The End

that one was kind of strange faith's demon

[TroGdoR]

Thnx guyz, good stories. This is a thread that should have a long future as long as all of you keep posting stories. And I will allow comedy as well, even though the thread doesn't specify that.

[X Y Z]

Campfire stories lol. We need a action packed, high climax story in this thread!

[qweeve]

Here's a creepy story. What makes it extra creepy is that it's true, this happened to me. About a month ago, I came home from work. I go into my house, flip on the tv, get a beer, and yell for my wife. No answer. I think to myself, "where could she be?". After looking around for a little while, I find a note. As I read the note, a cold, steely shiver runs up and down my spine. It reads, "Hi hun, went to the store to get some extra groceries, my parents are coming here for the holidays". I drop to my knees screaming "GOD HELP ME, NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" The End

[BlindMansTicket]

What a waste of points to sticky this.

[Anferny]

I have plenty of points. So I used some. Next time i'll ask for permission. :p
(It's only a joke)

[Fuggle]

What a waste of points to sticky this.

Exactly what i was thinking, seeing as how none of the stories are creepy or scary.

[Foog]

one day, deep in the depths of louisiana, britney spears found a microphone. all around the world, musicians alike screamed.

[-=(Jessica)=-]

That mandi story was the scariest one here, but i started laughing when i heard "scaly monster" that just wrecked the story.

[Tichondrius_87]

those are just stupid urban legends. they're fun to tell around a campfire, or something, but other than that they're really lame