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The Poetry / Lyrics Thread!
#1
This thread is for all you guys who want to showoff your Poetry and Lyrics! Here I'll start with some poetry I wrote around 2 months ago.

I have indulged my mind and invested my heart in you.
Addicted to your eyes, to your smile.
Fallen prey to your grace.
Don’t you see? I need you to rescue me.
Waited for you to come for so long…
I’ll wait forever, but just let me know that you will come.
Please tell me I’m not dreaming.
The thought of your presence inspires me.
Do you feel it? This sensation radiates out of me.
The feeling is too special to be given a name.
But if you choose to call it love,
Then love truly is bittersweet.
I want to share with you the happiness and love I know.
I want to let it grow.
If you come…come and see,
What is inside of me…
I have hidden something for the longest time,
Something so beautiful.
But now, I wish to share it with you.
I hope it’s not too late…
I’m sorry, if I have ever caused you pain.
I would never wish to harm someone so pure.
I have no way to express something so complex,
But through these simple words,
Maybe you will realize how special you are.
Hopefully, I’m not asking for much,
But please let me know that my love isn’t worthless.
You have shown me something amorphous,
Yet I feel it stronger than life itself.
I could go on forever, yet I will tell u simply:
You have blessed me with the gift of love,
But will you show me it’s true?
Because, I think…
I truly love you…

I hope you guys liked it. Comments are great. Now heres some metal-ish lyrics I wrote I think 4-5 months ago.


Immerse yourself in the sweet sense of insanity.
Building hate one death at a time.
Apocalypse begins to fade into reality.
Follow your fate till the end of time.
Deep within me burns the pain of sorrow and regret.
Trying to find solace in your blind dungeon.
Let me out of this dream of hope.
Let death fail to bring me to destruction.
Believe no longer in your destiny.
Let your unconscious mind wander to die from dissapointment.
Tragedy will be the end of your desire.
Give up now and save your pain for another cause.
Feed the hungry souls of despair.
Condemn the beast of love.
This mortal need is killing me.
Punish death for its cruelty.
Set free the dead slaves of hope.
Justice is not served in the court of god.
They shall worship the demons of hate and silence.
You have distorted my mind past the innocence of redemption.
The scent of incense burning in hell digs another inch of your grave.
Remind me to forget the meaning of memory.
To forget the scars carved from loneliness.
I’ll give it another try,
Only to find the dead side of the die...


And thats all I will post for now. I have some other older stuff but I don't wanna bore you guys with 999-line posts lol. I hope you enjoyed!
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#2
Freezin', rests his head on a pillow made of concrete, again
Oh, Feelin' maybe he'll see a little better, set a days, ooh yeah
Oh, hand out, faces that he sees time again ain't that familiar, oh yeah
Oh, dark grin, he can't help, when he's happy looks insane, oh yeah
Even flow, thoughts arrive like butterflies
Oh, he don't know, so he chases them away
Someday yet, he'll begin his life again
Life again, life again...
Kneelin', looking through the paper though he doesn't know to read, ooh yeah
Oh, prayin', now to something that has never showed him anything
Oh, feelin', understands the weather of the winters on its way
Oh, ceilings, few and far between all the legal halls of shame, yeah
Even flow, thoughts arrive like butterflies
Oh, he don't know, so he chases them away
Someday yet, he'll begin his life again
Whispering hands, gently lead him away
Him away, him away...
Yeah!
Woo...ah yeah...**** it up...
Even flow, thoughts arrive like butterflies
Oh, he don't know, so he chases them away
Someday yet, he'll begin his life again, yeah
Oh, whispering hands, gently lead him away
Him away, him away...

best damn lyrics ever put to paper..
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#3
Dude that looks like some sort of a song's lyrics that you put on there. This thread is for lyrics you wrote yourself, not other people's work. But if you did write that, then good job. I don't understand what the message is thought lol. Its kinda wierd lol.
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#4
heh sry, i saw lyrics and posted even flow, my bad Smile
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#5
Wow no one barely comes into the Writing & Roleplaying section lol. No one commented my poetry lol.
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#6
Ok this is not something I wrote but of a favorite song,just making that clear.

MASSIVE ATTACK LYRICS

"Protection"

[Tracy Thorn]

This girl I know needs some shelter
She don't believe anyone can help her
She's doing so much harm, doing so much damage
But you don't want to get involved
You tell her she can manage
And you can't change the way she feels
But you could put your arms around her

I know you want to live yourself
But could you forgive yourself
If you left her just the way
You found her

I stand in front of you
I'll take the force of the blow
Protection

I stand in front of you
I'll take the force of the blow
Protection

You're a boy and i'm a girl
But you know you can lean on me
And I don't have no fear
I'll take on any man here
Who says that's not the way it should be

I stand in front of you
I'll take the force of the blow
Protection

I stand in front of you
I'll take the force of the blow
Protection

She's a girl and you're a boy
Sometimes you look so small, look so small
You've got a baby of your own
When your baby's gone, she'll be the one
To catch you when you fall

I stand in front of you
I'll take the force of the blow
Protection

I stand in front of you
I'll take the force of the blow
Protection

You're a girl and i'm a boy [x4]

Sometimes you look so small, need some shelter
Just runnin' round and round, helter skelter
And I've leaned on me for years
Now you can lean on me
And that's more than love, that's the way it should be
Now I can't change the way you feel
But I can put my arms around you
That's just part of the deal
That's the way I feel
I'll put my arms around you

I stand in front of you
I'll take the force of the blow
Protection

I stand in front of you
I'll take the force of the blow
Protection

You're a boy and i'm a girl [x4]
[SIGPIC][/SIGPIC]

A Light in your Darkness...always there...and burning...
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#7
Not sure if I posted this one on blizz, so I put it here.

Reality has lied.
False truths about life.
Pain is everywhere.
The corrupting touch of pain.

Joy is sold on the streets.
In the flesh.
Death is everywhere.
Why was I blind!

NO!

Not anymore.
I am now awake.
I can see truly,
With out the blissful Ignorance

I can no longer hide.
The shadows will no longer hold me.
I am no longer afraid.
Only love holds me.

No more passiveness.
Action must be taken.
This pain must lead to action.
And action to change.
[SIGPIC][/SIGPIC]
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