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Rate My Poem: Darkness
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11-25-2004, 07:17 PM
Darkness


Darkness burns in me a hole,
The cold takes all my feeling,
But yet I feel the hole,
I feel the darkness take away.

My heart contricts with every beat,
It tightens while my life it's stealing;
Fine enough if it kills but once,
But I'm dying every day.


Copyright 2004
Chris Herrington
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Rate My Poem: Darkness - by Nethran - 11-25-2004, 07:17 PM
Rate My Poem: Darkness - by Nethran - 11-25-2004, 10:03 PM
Rate My Poem: Darkness - by splintercell - 11-26-2004, 02:13 AM
Rate My Poem: Darkness - by Nethran - 11-26-2004, 08:23 PM
Rate My Poem: Darkness - by splintercell - 11-27-2004, 01:59 AM
Rate My Poem: Darkness - by hunterkillr1 - 01-08-2005, 08:10 AM
Rate My Poem: Darkness - by TroGdoR - 01-08-2005, 08:27 AM
Rate My Poem: Darkness - by nujabes - 01-08-2005, 06:03 PM
Rate My Poem: Darkness - by PantallicA - 01-08-2005, 06:08 PM
Rate My Poem: Darkness - by Azrael_learza - 01-08-2005, 06:42 PM
Rate My Poem: Darkness - by Tool - 01-11-2005, 10:19 AM
Rate My Poem: Darkness - by Aemaeth - 01-11-2005, 10:26 AM
Rate My Poem: Darkness - by Tool - 01-11-2005, 10:33 AM
Rate My Poem: Darkness - by Demon(Tree) - 02-01-2005, 08:34 PM
Rate My Poem: Darkness - by ilikelilkids - 02-01-2005, 10:50 PM
Rate My Poem: Darkness - by BoJaNgLes - 02-07-2005, 08:33 AM
Rate My Poem: Darkness - by JnRossi - 02-07-2005, 08:45 AM
Rate My Poem: Darkness - by Obfuscate - 02-09-2005, 06:05 AM
Rate My Poem: Darkness - by [/sarcasm] - 02-12-2005, 02:15 PM
Rate My Poem: Darkness - by TMP - 02-12-2005, 02:37 PM
Rate My Poem: Darkness - by TMP - 02-12-2005, 02:42 PM
Rate My Poem: Darkness - by SDSnyper - 02-13-2005, 03:15 PM
Rate My Poem: Darkness - by SDSnyper - 02-13-2005, 03:16 PM
Rate My Poem: Darkness - by benbob - 05-03-2005, 11:53 AM
Rate My Poem: Darkness - by DaCougarMech - 05-04-2005, 11:21 AM
Rate My Poem: Darkness - by BTC - 05-05-2005, 02:22 PM
Rate My Poem: Darkness - by Pamela - 07-20-2006, 10:22 AM

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