Poem: My promise

[Frai7ty]

My Promise
I'm here for you
To help you through.
To hold you.
To be with you.

I need to.
Culture a cure.
To mend your hart, and dreams.
To show you what love truly means.

I'll never run away.
I'll be sure to stay.
And all I can do is pray.
For you to feel the same.

And If your even in pain.
I will be there to kiss it all away.
And make you feel better again.
This is my promise to you.


I wrote this a long time ago. So sorry if it's a bit newbish. Any who, hope you all enjoy.

[Pamela]

I did ^^ It came from the heart...you can tell.

[Frai7ty]

Well thx Pam. Your appreciation is welcome as always.

[New-b]

That poem to me is Deep.

[AngelzUnit]

I ain't really into poetry, and I accidentally clicked here but...wow. very nice

[BrioCloud]

Nice poem but, after reading so many poems that people and my friends make because their in love, these poems are just too identical.

Heres a guys info on my buddy list on aim. He says he wrote it himself.

What if i'm always there when you need me
Will you even care
What if i promise to forever care
Will you need me

What if i tell you that your my only
Will you love me
What if i really want a chance with you
Will you let me

That was just a small part, and it uses repetition throughout. lol.

I'm just saying after a hundred poems love poems need a little more twist in it for it to be anymore interesting.

[Frai7ty]

Well thanks Kaze, I like it when people give me honest feedback. Bare in mind tho this was the *Count on Fingers* 3rd poem. It's bound to be rough around the edges. Still tho, thanks