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Rate My Poem: Darkness
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11-26-2004, 08:23 PM
This is the second part of that poem. I didn't put it up cuz I didn't think people would like it, but now I just don't give a shit. Smile


Light (Yinyang Part Two)

For: Autumn Lecrone (Love you!)

It burnt like fire and it cut like steel,
Pain is it's only name.
It scarred me so, this dark hurt,
But it left my flesh unscathed.

Caused by that which it can't destroy,
The opponent in the game,
The darkness yielded to another light,
The only antidote I craved

The cure flew in on white wings.
And brought with it beauty most divine.
I didn't recognize the light at first,
But Love was this piercing ray.

This light came and kissed me soflty,
Told me to stand, that I'd be fine,
I'm forever greatful she's in my life,
Autumn, forever my Birei.

Christopher Herrington

Copyright ©2004 Christopher Herrington
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Rate My Poem: Darkness - by Nethran - 11-25-2004, 07:17 PM
Rate My Poem: Darkness - by Nethran - 11-25-2004, 10:03 PM
Rate My Poem: Darkness - by splintercell - 11-26-2004, 02:13 AM
Rate My Poem: Darkness - by Nethran - 11-26-2004, 08:23 PM
Rate My Poem: Darkness - by splintercell - 11-27-2004, 01:59 AM
Rate My Poem: Darkness - by hunterkillr1 - 01-08-2005, 08:10 AM
Rate My Poem: Darkness - by TroGdoR - 01-08-2005, 08:27 AM
Rate My Poem: Darkness - by nujabes - 01-08-2005, 06:03 PM
Rate My Poem: Darkness - by PantallicA - 01-08-2005, 06:08 PM
Rate My Poem: Darkness - by Azrael_learza - 01-08-2005, 06:42 PM
Rate My Poem: Darkness - by Tool - 01-11-2005, 10:19 AM
Rate My Poem: Darkness - by Aemaeth - 01-11-2005, 10:26 AM
Rate My Poem: Darkness - by Tool - 01-11-2005, 10:33 AM
Rate My Poem: Darkness - by Demon(Tree) - 02-01-2005, 08:34 PM
Rate My Poem: Darkness - by ilikelilkids - 02-01-2005, 10:50 PM
Rate My Poem: Darkness - by BoJaNgLes - 02-07-2005, 08:33 AM
Rate My Poem: Darkness - by JnRossi - 02-07-2005, 08:45 AM
Rate My Poem: Darkness - by Obfuscate - 02-09-2005, 06:05 AM
Rate My Poem: Darkness - by [/sarcasm] - 02-12-2005, 02:15 PM
Rate My Poem: Darkness - by TMP - 02-12-2005, 02:37 PM
Rate My Poem: Darkness - by TMP - 02-12-2005, 02:42 PM
Rate My Poem: Darkness - by SDSnyper - 02-13-2005, 03:15 PM
Rate My Poem: Darkness - by SDSnyper - 02-13-2005, 03:16 PM
Rate My Poem: Darkness - by benbob - 05-03-2005, 11:53 AM
Rate My Poem: Darkness - by DaCougarMech - 05-04-2005, 11:21 AM
Rate My Poem: Darkness - by BTC - 05-05-2005, 02:22 PM
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