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Foog's first poem ever
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It was great as a first.....but i have to agree with sinner there is room for improvement
I'm sure u can get it published if you wanted to try.
It has that shakespear ring to it that would make it easy to publish.
You ever tell it to your girl?
She would melt for ya:laugh:
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Foog's first poem ever - by Foog - 02-18-2005, 02:05 PM
Foog's first poem ever - by Dynafrom - 02-18-2005, 02:06 PM
Foog's first poem ever - by Foog - 02-18-2005, 02:10 PM
Foog's first poem ever - by Obfuscate - 02-18-2005, 02:25 PM
Foog's first poem ever - by Foog - 02-19-2005, 02:41 AM
Foog's first poem ever - by Crown - 02-19-2005, 07:42 AM
Foog's first poem ever - by Grave - 02-19-2005, 07:45 AM
Foog's first poem ever - by Foog - 02-19-2005, 07:46 AM
Foog's first poem ever - by Grave - 02-19-2005, 07:57 AM
Foog's first poem ever - by Foog - 02-19-2005, 08:05 AM
Foog's first poem ever - by Crown - 02-19-2005, 08:17 AM
Foog's first poem ever - by liquidshaggy - 02-19-2005, 10:48 AM
Foog's first poem ever - by Foog - 02-19-2005, 02:27 PM
Foog's first poem ever - by erizoe - 02-21-2005, 11:43 AM
Foog's first poem ever - by AmourAffair - 02-21-2005, 12:22 PM
Foog's first poem ever - by Foog - 02-22-2005, 02:03 AM
Foog's first poem ever - by AmourAffair - 02-22-2005, 02:12 AM
Foog's first poem ever - by Foog - 02-23-2005, 03:08 AM
Foog's first poem ever - by liquidshaggy - 02-24-2005, 06:45 AM
Foog's first poem ever - by Foog - 02-24-2005, 06:47 AM
Foog's first poem ever - by RILEY - 02-24-2005, 07:46 AM
Foog's first poem ever - by AmourAffair - 02-24-2005, 09:51 AM
Foog's first poem ever - by Foog - 02-26-2005, 06:45 AM
Foog's first poem ever - by Obfuscate - 02-26-2005, 07:16 AM
Foog's first poem ever - by Foog - 02-26-2005, 07:58 AM
Foog's first poem ever - by Stifle_this - 02-26-2005, 08:03 AM
Foog's first poem ever - by Za avatar - 03-26-2005, 06:24 AM
Foog's first poem ever - by kuruba_shadowz - 11-12-2005, 03:30 AM
Foog's first poem ever - by TroGdoR - 11-12-2005, 06:18 AM
Foog's first poem ever - by Prowler - 12-10-2005, 12:43 PM
Foog's first poem ever - by Soul Collector - 12-13-2005, 03:12 AM
Foog's first poem ever - by Osirus - 12-13-2005, 07:08 AM

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