Creativeness flows in my...I dunno but it's coming from somewhere

[Pamela]

Lol..mine should be also...just add me!

[SpoonMan999]

Ah...so time to revive this post...or atleast attempt to...I doubt many of you will read this...I'm so alone...

Forgive My Demise

Echoes guide me as I'm falling,
Into things which I despise,
As I hear my deity calling,
To the sound of my demise,

And though my fear of death stains me,
As I crash through the broken skies,
I head for a broad open sea,
To be the hope in my demise,

But I only see myself here,
While I sink below the cries,
Just another forgotten tear,
The missing shock to my demise,

And now I end here in my strife,
Seemlessly brought down by your lies,
Leaving me bliond toward the knife,
The deep sorrow in my demise,

Still, I'm sorry for the trouble,
As I, the useless, slowly dies,
As I lay beneath the rubble,
Awaiting peace in my demise,

But I'll watch for when you're falling,
Down into things which you despise,
I'll be there to start the calling,
To bring the sound of your demise.

[TroGdoR]

I wrote poetry last year in school. I wasn't a big fan, but I did get published and placed in the English Honors Society. Kinda cool. I read the poems both you and Pam posted and I think to myself, what a wonderful world. Nah jk, they are good but a little too cliche for being the next level. I tended to stray away from love poetry and wrote with a comical sense. My poetry teacher hated me, but she couldn't deny that I beat the pants off of anyone in my class when it came to writing. Most poetry is drivel anyhow. Post one that doesn't have to do with love or death.

[SpoonMan999]

Yeah cliche...those are just the ones I thought people would find interesting...I have a lot that I've written...

American Illusions (I don't like this one a whole lot but it's getting published and I can't find the one I really wanted to post)

So it rises,
And yet so it falls,
Time and time again,
It strains your nimble mind,
Problematic wishes,
Filled with possessive dreams,
Your dreams do rise,
But your will does fall.

[jedimaster86]

nice poems spoon. i write every now and then, but i in the spur of the moment decided to write a diablo 2 story, i posted it sometime here earlier, it's at http://www.d2sector.net/forums/showthread.php?t=1896. im also writing a longer story now titled "A Druid's Revenge". well anyways here's a poem that i wrote and i guess it's on poetry.com, i just needed to write a poem so that i could keep an account valid for a different site, i guess that other site was hosted by poetry.com or something, anyways here it goes (note: i am not a writer of serious poetry):

Swiss Cheese
I'll tell you this,
and this alone.
I met a scientist,
who had made a clone.

His gloves were covered,
with mucus from a sneeze.
And then I saw his clone,
it was a block of swiss cheese!

I tried to keep silent,
but in my dismay.
I have a natural feeling,
to scream in any which way.

I screamed and screamed,
I yelled all around.
I shouted so much,
that I was burrowed underground.

They all thought that I was weird,
they thought I was crazy.
But I can't think about things now,
because everything is going hazy.

[SpoonMan999]

That's awsome man...I'll read your story when I'm not juggling three different people adding to my posts at once O.o

[TroGdoR]

Interesting Jedi... My English teacher last year had the class right a poem about our favorite room in the house. SHe being the spiritual hippy type, obviously wanted a poem that was very deep. I wrote one on the bathroom. I made the entire class laugh. Later that quarter, she stated our final grades would be on how well she liked us. THe witch gave me a C. SHe retired, thinking she escaped my wrath. But a few weeks ago, her husband and her were in the same movie theatre that me and a couple of my friends were in. So for the entire movie I threw popcorn seeds at the back of her head, hit her husband a few times also. Revenge is bliss.

[SpoonMan999]

I always get along with English teachers...especially the one who took my poem and explained to me that "We need to understand why this guy is mad...not just...hey look at me I'm mad but...Hey I'm F***king mad!" I love Mr. Devoe...haha

[Shihan]

Meh, screw teachers. They don't teach anything useful.

[SpoonMan999]

Some do

[TroGdoR]

I agree with you. Some do. However, I have been cursed with terrible English hippy teachers. But very very good Social Studies teachers. So now my love for history runs deep.

[SpoonMan999]

I like history too...but I have a knack for science teachers hating me lol...

But I have always had good relationships with English teachers...my current on calls me Fidel cause when I put on a friend's green cap I looked like Fidel Castro

[Aemaeth]

One of my crappy spur of the moment poems..i write bout 3 a day...most of them burn in recycle bin hell

Comfort.Suicide.Drugs

I open the door

<DIR>The empty cans fall to the floor like empty bullet shells

Drunkard.

I wonder how i got like this

A manical Junky. Sucking the life out of soceity

Breeding

Seething

Destroying to create

Solve ed coagula

I contemplate meanings. not knowing my own thoughts. as if im Not me

But i am.

I look at the noose

i drag my feet.


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